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Name: DracosBaby_232 (Signed) · Date: 11/04/07 6:20 · For: Boom!
What the bloody hell happened?!?!


Name: DracosBaby_232 (Signed) · Date: 11/04/07 6:16 · For: Fancy meeting you here
..........You're asking them to kill eachother aren't you? (just kidding)


Name: DracosBaby_232 (Signed) · Date: 11/04/07 6:11 · For: Prologue
Responsible? Draco? Never!


Name: sam19 (Signed) · Date: 10/16/07 0:25 · For: Gate-Crasher
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!! Good work i loved it!


Name: girlydolphin (Signed) · Date: 09/12/07 16:52 · For: Gate-Crasher
Brilliant! I hope to see more from you.


Name: Announcer_of_Monkeys (Signed) · Date: 09/01/07 18:20 · For: Prologue
Ever heard of seperate paragraphs?


Name: ghyny (Signed) · Date: 09/01/07 6:38 · For: Prologue
Hmm... it is sad that I will never read your story.
I suggest you separate sections of the chapter into proper paragraphs instead of leaving us readers to squeeze our eyes to read a chapter that only consists of one paragraph.


Name: lilysnape4ever (Signed) · Date: 08/26/07 2:31 · For: Fancy meeting you here
ahh my eyes! would it hurt to use paragraphs?


Name: unexplainablle (Signed) · Date: 08/11/07 15:17 · For: Fancy meeting you here
u might wanna seperate it into section or paragraphs
kinda hard to read so i stoped


Name: _LooneyLovegood_ (Signed) · Date: 08/10/07 1:28 · For: Boom!
It seems pretty good but I wish you had put it in paragraphs b/c it is hard to read like this!


Name: cmedina2002 (Signed) · Date: 08/05/07 11:55 · For: Gate-Crasher
Hey it was nice but i never got how did he fell in love with her. I mean no winks, no hugs, nothing. But still it was good.


Name: cmedina2002 (Signed) · Date: 08/04/07 21:52 · For: She's With Me
It's good. I'm from Puerto Rico.


Name: cmedina2002 (Signed) · Date: 08/04/07 16:08 · For: Your Place or Mine?
Draco can move to my place anytime!


Name: dracoswifey (Signed) · Date: 07/17/07 13:18 · For: Fancy meeting you here
its good so far but it is a little bit hard to read. i think u should edit them and put spaces and new lines so that its not much strain on the eyes


Name: dracoswifey (Signed) · Date: 07/17/07 13:18 · For: Fancy meeting you here
its good so far but it is a little bit hard to read. i think u should edit them and put spaces and new lines so that its not much strain on the eyes


Name: Hog_Dreamer (Signed) · Date: 07/04/07 11:21 · For: Prologue
I loved this so much, but I cannot understand something. About 50 people have told you that your story is wonderful but it was terribly hard to read, and all 50 have politely asked you to break it up into paragraphs so they could enjoy it more, and yet, 14 chapters in, you still haven't done it. WHYYYY! I want to read this story so badly and my eyes are aching trying! Please please please break it UP!


Name: averynseamus (Signed) · Date: 06/30/07 3:35 · For: Gate-Crasher
awwww.....that was shooo cutttteeee...


Name: kealanii_malfoy (Signed) · Date: 05/22/07 23:13 · For: Gate-Crasher
that vos a very interesting story if i may say so myself.


Name: mrs bookworm malfoy (Signed) · Date: 05/09/07 21:54 · For: Gate-Crasher
YOU SCARED ME AT THE END!!!!!! I THOUGHT SHE HAD DIED!!!!!! DON'T YOU EVER DO THAT AGAIN!!!!!!!! ~breating returns to normal~ okay, i'm good. loved it! keep writing and i'll keep reading.

Mrs Bookworm Malfoy


Name: anduril (Signed) · Date: 05/02/07 18:05 · For: Boom!
paragraphs?


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