Reviewer: DracosBaby_232
Date: 11/04/07 6:20
Chapter: Boom!

What the bloody hell happened?!?!

Reviewer: DracosBaby_232
Date: 11/04/07 6:16
Chapter: Fancy meeting you here

..........You're asking them to kill eachother aren't you? (just kidding)

Reviewer: DracosBaby_232
Date: 11/04/07 6:11
Chapter: Prologue

Responsible? Draco? Never!

Reviewer: sam19
Date: 10/16/07 0:25
Chapter: Gate-Crasher

EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!! Good work i loved it!

Reviewer: girlydolphin
Date: 09/12/07 16:52
Chapter: Gate-Crasher

Brilliant! I hope to see more from you.

Reviewer: Announcer_of_Monkeys
Date: 09/01/07 18:20
Chapter: Prologue

Ever heard of seperate paragraphs?

Reviewer: ghyny
Date: 09/01/07 6:38
Chapter: Prologue

Hmm... it is sad that I will never read your story.
I suggest you separate sections of the chapter into proper paragraphs instead of leaving us readers to squeeze our eyes to read a chapter that only consists of one paragraph.

Reviewer: lilysnape4ever
Date: 08/26/07 2:31
Chapter: Fancy meeting you here

ahh my eyes! would it hurt to use paragraphs?

Reviewer: unexplainablle
Date: 08/11/07 15:17
Chapter: Fancy meeting you here

u might wanna seperate it into section or paragraphs
kinda hard to read so i stoped

Reviewer: _LooneyLovegood_
Date: 08/10/07 1:28
Chapter: Boom!

It seems pretty good but I wish you had put it in paragraphs b/c it is hard to read like this!

Reviewer: cmedina2002
Date: 08/05/07 11:55
Chapter: Gate-Crasher

Hey it was nice but i never got how did he fell in love with her. I mean no winks, no hugs, nothing. But still it was good.

Reviewer: cmedina2002
Date: 08/04/07 21:52
Chapter: She's With Me

It's good. I'm from Puerto Rico.

Reviewer: cmedina2002
Date: 08/04/07 16:08
Chapter: Your Place or Mine?

Draco can move to my place anytime!

Reviewer: dracoswifey
Date: 07/17/07 13:18
Chapter: Fancy meeting you here

its good so far but it is a little bit hard to read. i think u should edit them and put spaces and new lines so that its not much strain on the eyes

Reviewer: dracoswifey
Date: 07/17/07 13:18
Chapter: Fancy meeting you here

its good so far but it is a little bit hard to read. i think u should edit them and put spaces and new lines so that its not much strain on the eyes

Reviewer: Hog_Dreamer
Date: 07/04/07 11:21
Chapter: Prologue

I loved this so much, but I cannot understand something. About 50 people have told you that your story is wonderful but it was terribly hard to read, and all 50 have politely asked you to break it up into paragraphs so they could enjoy it more, and yet, 14 chapters in, you still haven't done it. WHYYYY! I want to read this story so badly and my eyes are aching trying! Please please please break it UP!

Reviewer: averynseamus
Date: 06/30/07 3:35
Chapter: Gate-Crasher

awwww.....that was shooo cutttteeee...

Reviewer: kealanii_malfoy
Date: 05/22/07 23:13
Chapter: Gate-Crasher

that vos a very interesting story if i may say so myself.

Reviewer: mrs bookworm malfoy
Date: 05/09/07 21:54
Chapter: Gate-Crasher

YOU SCARED ME AT THE END!!!!!! I THOUGHT SHE HAD DIED!!!!!! DON'T YOU EVER DO THAT AGAIN!!!!!!!! ~breating returns to normal~ okay, i'm good. loved it! keep writing and i'll keep reading.

Mrs Bookworm Malfoy

Reviewer: anduril
Date: 05/02/07 18:05
Chapter: Boom!

paragraphs?

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