Oh it just figures doesn't it, they have a dementor :-( Hope everything goes smoothly *crosses fingers*
A really good chapter. I like this story more and more each time I read another chapter lol
Well that wold be one way to round up all the rest of the Death Eaters lol... I am liking that snake more and more, very intelligent :-)
Interesting twist... Amazing chapter :-)
I have to agree that Esmeralda was a awesome addition to this chapter. Very imformative
Oooo, figure you have to end with a good cliffie. I really liked this chapter :-)
Oh boy, this will be entertaining. I really don't think that "Drakie" is capable of working with a partner!! Cool chapter
Interesting chapter, Two thumbs up!
Love Draco's dry sense of humor! Enjoyable chapter :-)
Hahaha, Poor Draco and Hermione! This is really interesting, Great chapter
And thats where lack of communication gets you! lol Wonder what happened to the both of them ;-) Nice chapter
lol what a way to jump into the action! Good chapter
I really liked this introduction to the story, however I found it slightly diffecult to read due to the lack of paragraph breaks. Keep up the good work :-)
very interesting. i read the whole thing in one go. and it wasn't THAT hard to read w/o indentations. sheesh people
ahh! so much better, sorry to be a bother but, well,... alls well that ends well and all that. sorry
argh! i'm sorry to say this but seriously... i'm going to go batty reading this! learn to use paragraph breaks! i like it so far and i intend to finish, but honestly...
Your writing style is just as good as any author. I feel relaxed reading the story and find no mistakes in its flow.
i really enjoyed your story your a great writer and can't wait to read what else you have writen
I love the story so far!!!!!!!!!
You were wondering what country i am from, well i live in Australia!!!!!!!!
I am looking forward to finish this story!!!!
I have not read a Draco and Hermione
I think this is such a cool idea for a fic, very inspirational! It really tests Hermione and Draco's compadability more than we've ever seen it before, and I feel you have particularly captured Draco's personality.
But I'm sorry- I've one objection to the story-
I'm not accusing you of being sexist or anything, but it seems like Draco always has to swoop in to save Hermione, that he is the one who knows how to deal with complex situations, which I'm not saying he shouldn't, he should do all these, but Hermione...
Frankly, she is often portrayed as the weaker of the two, as incompetant and careless.
And I believe she is none of those.
I'm sorry if I've offended you, it really is a great story.