Great story, may be the ending could have been a little longer?
what a smart animal you have there! lol.
I'm so glad to finally read a story where Harry didn't end up being an Auror after the war...so cliche. Kind of weird that he and Hermione aren't friends anymore...but it happens. At least he and Draco appear to be old chums. Love your story.
Crookshanks using the toilet or more like flushing?
Hermione teaching the runespoor to write?! wtf?
Where you do you come up with this stuff?
Esmeralda is definitely fun to read. lol.
I love your story btw.
that's all I have to say.
I guess I am really late in reading this, but I thoroughly enjoyed it. Well written and thought out, highly entertaining and thought provoking. Thank you for writing it and putting it out to share with others.
i was waiting for you to update this fic... waitt, wait, wait... and i only saw it this morning that it was actually completed!! its great... it's really worth my wait!! nice fic! thanks!
Loved the animal character development, as well as Esmerelda.
Marvelously dry sense of humour - a riot
I think you might mean mundanity, not mendacity...
(I'm Canadian, BTW)
Trippy is great
this story is so cute. I only found it today and read it straight through, I just couldn't tear myself away from it. I just have to say that my ultime favorite part of the story is the ending, It's just such a beautiful ending, a little sad but beautiful.
I like this chapter particularly because of how you portrayed Draco's rage getting to him, and possibly showing more feelings towards Hermione. I also like how you developed Esmeralda. It's how I imagined a vampire woman to act and speak. A job well done on that part. Also, I thought it was a bit wierd for Draco to get rid of Niklos, without anyone really noticing or caring. I know that Esmeralda said he's a trouble maker, but wouldn't more people notice, or at least care? Excellent chapter!
Author's Response: Muggles! Never notice nuffink, do they? ;) Seriously, though, I would think that vampires would merely be tolerated as long as they didn't pose a danger to the public. Niklos mesmerizing Hermione in front of Draco was the magical equivalent of pulling a gun on a cop (don't forget Draco is an Auror here). This would be especially true since it's in a *Muggle* goth club; the magical world would certainly *not* want Niklos to draw attention to himself and expose the magical world by indulging his penchant for real blood. In this sense, live people are more valued than the undead. In contrast, Esmeralda just comes to the club because she likes attention; otherwise, she is perfectly willing to play by Ministry rules. Niklos is an example to those who don't.
Not a bad ending. I must say though that I had forgotten what had happened. At least, until you wrote about the accident, then I remembered what went on. Poor Draco. Poor Hermione. I'll have to reread one day to remember it all. Not a bad job. The ending was kinda weird though.
LOL My bad! I didn't know you did an add on. I better start using my dictionary. Where is it anyways? Anyways yay! Happy Ending! LOL All Draco had to do was kiss her to give her back her soul. Sooo cute! Ummm... are you going to do a sequel by chance?
Author's Response: :) I'm *such* a romantic . . . For now, I don't have plans for a sequel, and I wouldn't have time to write it before summer. To be honest, this fic felt more like I was taking dictation than writing it. If inspiration strikes again, I'll be sure to share it. To all you fans out there: where would you like to see the story go from here?
I don't think it was confusing at all. It was perfeclty un-confusing. And it was a hell of a story too. You're a very talented author, and I want to thank you for writing this and providing me enjoyment. This is definately one of my faves! I wish I could give it infinity/10!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
this is pretty confusing, who was talkin and thinkin at da end?
I'M SO CONFUSED!!!! I THOUGHT HERMIONE WAS UNCONSCIOUS!!!! ARGGHHH!!!!! 9/10 FOR YO CONFUINESS
Author's Response: Draco et al. thought she was dead. Esmeralda insisted she wasn't. Draco attempts to revive her/kiss her good bye. Happily ever after.