Reviewer: Salmantino7
Date: 12/12/08 20:05
Chapter: The Pain of a Muggle With Magic Friends

I really like this idea, it's very thoughtful, and the story is well written. like the idea of a sequal!

Reviewer: declan06
Date: 04/17/07 14:15
Chapter: The Pain of a Muggle With Magic Friends

The end was really funny! I would enjoy a sequil.

Reviewer: Zarina
Date: 12/16/06 11:30
Chapter: The Pain of a Muggle With Magic Friends

Nice idea to make a story like this! I really liked it.
Didn't imagine I would ever read a fanfic with Colin Creevy in it, but I'm glad I did. He seems a lot more interesting now, I can think of his friend Jessica :)

Reviewer: Littleman85
Date: 11/16/06 22:41
Chapter: The Pain of a Muggle With Magic Friends

I like this story. You should add to it. I think it would be rather interesting to read about Jessica's reaction to the chocolate frogs.

Reviewer: Littleman85
Date: 11/16/06 22:41
Chapter: The Pain of a Muggle With Magic Friends

I like this story. You should add to it. I think it would be rather interesting to read about Jessica's reaction to the chocolate frogs.

Reviewer: Sadey_Asawood
Date: 08/26/06 12:55
Chapter: The Pain of a Muggle With Magic Friends

Wow, this is great. It is very realistic the way Jessica doesn't believe Colin at first. The weird thing to me is that Colin told Jessica without reluctance, but you've got to have a plot somewhere! I think a sequel would be great, maybe Jessica somehow brought into the wizarding world? It's great writing and I hope a sequel is coming soon!

Reviewer: hp_rawkez
Date: 08/10/06 4:09
Chapter: The Pain of a Muggle With Magic Friends

hi i really luv dis story. itz relli cute n' different. veryy original..=)

Reviewer: Mute swan
Date: 06/27/06 3:22
Chapter: The Pain of a Muggle With Magic Friends

Thats a really good story, and very funny. I've never read a fanfic featuring the Creeveys before.

Reviewer: PhoenixFlower
Date: 06/17/06 19:01
Chapter: The Pain of a Muggle With Magic Friends

HAHA!!! that was cute and funny! I smella hilariuos sequel on the way!

Reviewer: Colin Creevey
Date: 11/26/05 5:49
Chapter: The Pain of a Muggle With Magic Friends

It's a good story. The problem is its one-shot. I think you SHOULD make a sequel. How old is Colin and Jessica now? Where did Dennis go? (OMG, if he died, heads will roll).

10/10

Author's Response: Um... I don't think there was any indication that Dennis was anywhere but with his parents. No, he's not dead. And there is a sequel, it's on my Fanfiction.net site.

Reviewer: Ida Loveless
Date: 10/13/05 13:22
Chapter: The Pain of a Muggle With Magic Friends

This is a really good idea. Though I imagine Colin would be a bit more excited about it all, since he's a very excited boy. But you've got his admiration for Harry down pat. I liked the ending a lot, it made me chuckle. I suggest giving him some Hogwarts friends, though. Good job!

Reviewer: Lena Longbottom
Date: 08/11/05 15:07
Chapter: The Pain of a Muggle With Magic Friends

I thought that was a really cute story. I do agree that if you do a sequel, it would be a good idea to give Colin a friend or two of his own, but he has been like a stalker in all the books before the sixth.

Reviewer: Armed_Pyro
Date: 07/29/05 22:19
Chapter: The Pain of a Muggle With Magic Friends

Interesting concept but not carried out quite as well as i think it could be. Not meaning to sound to much like a know-it-all but i would make a few changes. For one thing focus less on the workings of Hogwarts such as the houses and more on the idea of the effect which Colin's going there had on their relationship. Also, Colin actin like him and Harry were good friends is kinda stalkerish. If friends are talked about give Colin his own and then maybe add Harry as and after thought.

Reviewer: Armed_Pyro
Date: 07/29/05 22:19
Chapter: The Pain of a Muggle With Magic Friends

Interesting concept but not carried out quite as well as i think it could be. Not meaning to sound to much like a know-it-all but i would make a few changes. For one thing focus less on the workings of Hogwarts such as the houses and more on the idea of the effect which Colin's going there had on their relationship. Also, Colin actin like him and Harry were good friends is kinda stalkerish. If friends are talked about give Colin his own and then maybe add Harry as and after thought.

Author's Response: Thank you for your thoughts. In my mind, I have always seen Colin as kind of a bit stalkerish fan of Harry's.

You must login (register) to review.
Information
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.


We have stories and authors in this archive.

:

RSS
Choose Theme:
SOCIAL MEDIA
     
MOST RECENT
Chocolate Frog by L A Moody 3rd-5th Years
Amid the desolation of Diagon Alley, a tiny ray of hope lay buried. Nothing...
I Suspect Nargles by foolondahill17 3rd-5th Years
“No one’s ever kissed me before…. What is one to do now?” An extensive...
The Life and Times of Linnea Potter by Cantatrix 1st-2nd Years
Linnea Potter has lived under the tyranny of her relatives for the better part...
FEATURED
Glass over the Flame by the opaleye 3rd-5th Years
Harry, Hermione, and the moments in between. He doesn’t say that this...
Tom Riddle and the Chamber of Secrets by CanisMajor 3rd-5th Years
What really happened the last time someone let the Basilisk out? Harry Potter...
Red Squirrel/Sun Rises by hestiajones 1st-2nd Years
+ He wouldn't celebrate his birthday, but his son had other ideas. + This was...
Sybill Trelawney and the Unexpected Gift by Squibstress 3rd-5th Years
Sybill Trelawney learns to live with her Inner Eye, cooking sherry, and Minerva...
Pat-a-Cake by foolondahill17 1st-2nd Years
Molly Weasley II, called Pat, and twenty-one lot and little-known facts. Or...
Wood by ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor 6th-7th Years
Marcus Flint, the infamous Super Seventh Captain of the Slytherin Quidditch...
CATEGORIES