Reviews For Starving
Reviewer: savvy33
Date: 02/21/11 15:03
Chapter: Starving

I liked it okay. You're writing is magnificent, so that's a plus, but I didn't quite agree with the story. Both Hermione and Ginny seemed really OOC to me. I can't imagine Ginny selling Hermione out and I can't imagine Hermione wanting to torture Ginny.

Reviewer: bdminniehearts3
Date: 12/15/10 13:45
Chapter: Starving

great

Reviewer: Emily_Anne
Date: 07/30/08 15:42
Chapter: Starving

Okay, so this is during the final war? Or after? Or before? If you could just clear that up it would be lovely. Good writing!

Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 12/04/07 6:46
Chapter: Starving

good character study of someone in a hopeless situation.

I think you used the wrong characters for the story. This isn't Hermione and Ginny wouldn't betray anyone especially a friend. The main character should have been Marietta and the companion, Cho. It would be easy to see that Marietta would quickly accuse Cho of betrayal to hide her own guilt.

Reviewer: blue_ink101
Date: 07/31/07 6:58
Chapter: Starving

different

plz explain exactly y they r there

Reviewer: Lilys Passion
Date: 07/30/07 20:35
Chapter: Starving

I don't really understand the meaning of this fic. Was it just a random decision?

Reviewer: HGPotter
Date: 07/19/07 1:12
Chapter: Starving

Poor Hermione and Ginny!

Reviewer: em0mylove
Date: 07/18/07 8:21
Chapter: Starving

good story but man PUNCTUATION makes storie better
haha
jokingggg

Reviewer: hollyberries
Date: 05/06/07 11:05
Chapter: Starving

that was depressing but i think it should have been longer it seems cut short. good though.

Reviewer: jamesismyhero2
Date: 01/17/07 16:44
Chapter: Starving

ggreat (hic) story (hic) it made me (hic) cry

Reviewer: Lily Roxy
Date: 12/15/06 10:22
Chapter: Starving

It was very powerful, you're a good author that's more than capable of expressing what she (or he?) wants to. But I like Dark Stories with just a tad of hope, even if it's the hope that they'll eventually end up in paradise when they die an unspeakably painful death. This one came short of that, I'm definitly going to read any other stories you have:).

Reviewer: Eowyn89
Date: 12/14/06 15:25
Chapter: Starving

I really enjoyed this story, despite the depression subject! Please add to this story--I think you have a good first chapter, but I don't think it is finished yet!

Reviewer: vixxen666
Date: 12/13/06 23:44
Chapter: Starving

i liked it even though it was depressing you beter make a seqel or more chapters becuse im lost.i loved the expretion in her pov

Reviewer: ashleyh2360
Date: 11/30/06 19:54
Chapter: Starving

Really good. Is there a sequel to it?

Reviewer: hpobsessed
Date: 11/13/06 16:32
Chapter: Starving

um... ok. Who's POV is this from?

Reviewer: Hp_4_eva
Date: 11/02/06 19:06
Chapter: Starving

wow. That is an amazing story. I'm gonna say what someone said to me while reviewing my story: It takes tallent to make you sympathize with the characters. And it does. This is an amazing story, good job. 10/10

Reviewer: FireBolt3192
Date: 08/15/06 10:13
Chapter: Starving

wow...to tell you the truth, im impressed. good job

Reviewer: Blonde_Babe
Date: 08/12/06 22:37
Chapter: Starving

good, but very deppressing

Reviewer: DreamingOfRon
Date: 08/06/06 13:31
Chapter: Starving

briliant story, very well written. also very dark, but without the gruesome details. i like that. well done.

Reviewer: sinbad
Date: 07/27/06 0:38
Chapter: Starving

This is interesting, but I hope ther will be more comming. There is alot of unanswered questions.

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