I liked it okay. You're writing is magnificent, so that's a plus, but I didn't quite agree with the story. Both Hermione and Ginny seemed really OOC to me. I can't imagine Ginny selling Hermione out and I can't imagine Hermione wanting to torture Ginny.

Okay, so this is during the final war? Or after? Or before? If you could just clear that up it would be lovely. Good writing!

different

plz explain exactly y they r there

Poor Hermione and Ginny!

that was depressing but i think it should have been longer it seems cut short. good though.

It was very powerful, you're a good author that's more than capable of expressing what she (or he?) wants to. But I like Dark Stories with just a tad of hope, even if it's the hope that they'll eventually end up in paradise when they die an unspeakably painful death. This one came short of that, I'm definitly going to read any other stories you have:).

i liked it even though it was depressing you beter make a seqel or more chapters becuse im lost.i loved the expretion in her pov

um... ok. Who's POV is this from?

wow...to tell you the truth, im impressed. good job

briliant story, very well written. also very dark, but without the gruesome details. i like that. well done.