Reviewer: ktg106
Date: 09/10/05 9:37
Chapter: Grief

This story is so good, i especially loved this chapter, awww poor Dean, thats really sad, but i like the way you had them one minute mourning Deans death and the Ron comes over and says - “Harry, this kid really needs some help,” said Ron, who had just appeared by their side. “He looks like he’s constipated or something." - that bit made me laugh so much, brilliant story so far, cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: I know it was sad - I just thought that one of teh "children" would have come to a sticky end by now... Glad you're amused by it! xx

Reviewer: harry_potter_fan_fic
Date: 09/09/05 15:57
Chapter: Grief

I love this story! you are a really great auther and i cant wait till the next chapter.I just started writing and dont have a chapter up yet but ive been rp for a while.its so realistic i just get sucked in!

Author's Response: It's really good that you're starting to write! I'll try to remember to check out your stories! xx

Reviewer: ginny_potter
Date: 09/08/05 0:59
Chapter: Grief

Yay that was great but poor Dean. I'm sure he fought bravely though... I'm really liking this story and cant wait till next chapter.

Author's Response: I know, I'm sorry - I didn't actually plan it, it just happened. Thanks for R/Ring

Reviewer: Horax
Date: 09/06/05 22:42
Chapter: Real Unity?

Very well done. I love the way they all interact. Especially when it is so well balanced.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.

Reviewer: prongs12433
Date: 09/06/05 22:13
Chapter: Real Unity?

aww. That was so touching! I loved the shouting matches, and the effect hermione has on ron and ginny on harry, or harry on ginny. I loved hermione smacking ron in the head! The dementors and stuff is very interesting and gets me thinking about what everything will be like in book 7. Does anybody else know about harry and ginny's connection? like ron or hermione? I hope mrs. weasley relaxes a little. Jeez. I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!

Author's Response: Excellent that you enjoyed it! I loved writing those shouting matches, especially Ginny's. I have been trying to imagine what book 7 will be like, and this sort of thing is just one of the possibilties that I came up with. No one really knows about H/G's connection, expect perhaps Dumbledore, who, if you read 'Shame and Regret' in AST, seems to have an idea that it might happen. Other people would just have to try to pick up on it.

Reviewer: Grace_1fan
Date: 09/06/05 18:35
Chapter: The world outside Hogwarts

That was a great chapter! can't wait till the next! I was going to write a FF story, but MN won't accept it...they don't accept the type of stories I write, so I'll be reading yours! How do you do it? Well, can't wait to see the first person's reaction to see Harry and Ginny! LOL 100000/10!

Author's Response: Oh that's a shame. Maybe you could try writing a story that they would accept; it's good to get feedback on your work. Thank you very much for the review though. xxx

Reviewer: RoxyGirl
Date: 09/05/05 17:52
Chapter: The world outside Hogwarts

Great chapter! Can't wait for another! It's crazy that they have to live like that and that Voldemort's in charge, but Harry will come through. He's the hero!

Author's Response: Well blatantly! Or not... We'll see.

Reviewer: Melindaleo
Date: 09/05/05 9:25
Chapter: The world outside Hogwarts

Uh oh, they're going to be in trouble with either Ron or Mrs. Weasley if they don't wake up first in the morning. I did find Ginny's changing in front of her brother a bit strange, though. What stung me more than anything was that Mrs. Weasley didn't even greet Harry. I know she's strung out, but...OUCH! Poor, Harry. That had to hurt.

Author's Response: Ginny doesn't care - or at least I don't think she would that much. The fact that Mrs W didn't even greet Harry shows the extent to which she is stressed out.

Reviewer: RoxyGirl
Date: 09/03/05 15:43
Chapter: So long

Awesome story! I've enjoyed it sooo much! Sorry it took me so long to discover both of them! I couldn't stop reading from the start though! Can't wait for more updates!

Author's Response: That's really cool. The next chapter will hopefully be up shortly.

Reviewer: Grace_1fan
Date: 09/01/05 18:40
Chapter: So long

OMG I looooved this chapter! I can't wait to read the next! Please update soon! And I have a question, how long(sfter you submit the story)does it take for mugglenet to put it up?

Author's Response: Thanks! It really depends whether there are any problems with the chapter. If there aren't, it usually goes up within a few days; if there are, you have to amend it and submit again.

Reviewer: prongs12433
Date: 08/31/05 16:39
Chapter: So long

great chapter, we girls always have to do everything don't we? Well almost everything. Anyway, I can't wait to see how the dursleys deal with harry's coming of age! Too bad he's probly going to be at grimmauld place before his birthday. Keep up the good work!!!

Author's Response: I know - the men would be sooo lost without us! Don't worry - the Dursleys won't be gone forever...

Reviewer: Melindaleo
Date: 08/31/05 9:54
Chapter: So long

It's funny to START a story with Harry going back to Privet Drive, lol, but I was glad for the update! Why is it that us girls always end up doing the packing? It's a conspiracy! I like to see Harry standing up to Dudley, the big oaf. I hope the dreaded Dursleys don't give him too bad a time, he's been through a lot.

Author's Response: I know - I thought it might be cool to write a whole story just showing the summer. Girls always pack because men can't do it! We are much more organised and thoughtful packers. Look out for the next chapter which should be up within the week.

Reviewer: loonyluna63
Date: 08/30/05 11:32
Chapter: So long

that was greeat! i love this story! Go Harry Go Harry! Curse Dudley into the next millenium! haha 100/10! update soon please!

Author's Response: Haha thanks

Reviewer: There you are Peter
Date: 08/30/05 3:47
Chapter: So long

Loving it Hats .......... I'm glad they made up (and I like Ron and Hermione holding hands lol).

Author's Response: Good good my friend. The next chapter is on its way.

Reviewer: harrypotter_1223
Date: 08/29/05 18:29
Chapter: So long

great great great great great !!!!! that was a wundrul chapter please update soon you are a great wrighter

Author's Response: Thanks! I hope it's a wundrul story!

Reviewer: loonyluna63
Date: 08/26/05 21:48
Chapter: A Simple Flower

I just read Always stick together today and i just finished reading the third chapter of this story! I love them! Now that i started reading your stories i just can't stop!Everyone is just so in Character! And i hope Harry can pull himself together!!! I wonder what Ginny will do when she finds out why Harry's chest was like that!At first i thought it was like the dark Mark on his chest or something! Anyway...10000000000000/10!!!!!! I love it! Please Please Please update ASAP! Thank you soooo much for writing!

Author's Response: Thank you soooo much for reviewing! I'm really happy that you liked it so much, and thanks for saying why - it really helps. Please look out for the next few chapters which should be up within the next week or so!

Reviewer: HPluvr46
Date: 08/25/05 15:12
Chapter: A Simple Flower

Great Great Great Sweet Sweet Sweet Update Update Update!!!

Author's Response: It's coming it's coming! It's just taking a while to be moderated!

Reviewer: Melindaleo
Date: 08/17/05 13:20
Chapter: A Simple Flower

I've just read through both stories and really enjoyed them. I can't tell you how happy I am to see you showing some of the side effects and psychological trauma being a tortured POW for so long is having on Harry. I loved the flashback dream and the constanct flinching - very nicely done and I hope you follow through with it. Harry gave Ginny the flower and admitted he needed help, but he really still hasn't leaned on anyone. I was actually more annoyed by Ginny in the past few chapters. If my timeline is right, he's only been back for a few days and she's being rather demanding. She has to at least suspect they didn't treat him very well, even if not the full impact of how they tortured him. My heart is aching for Harry in your story right now, I guess I'm feeling a bit protective of him.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like my ideas. Harry was still getting over the whole thing, as you say, and he really hadn't properly opened up to anyone yet. When he first gets back, Ginny is so happy that she doesn't care that he's not telling her anything, but then she starts to want to know. I do feel sympathy for her, as she doesn't really know what he's been through, but she does have a right to. Harry isn't feeling up to telling her yet, but he has to soon or else he'll never get it out and off his chest! Please keep reading - your review was wonderfully informative!

Reviewer: Jules_411
Date: 08/15/05 16:11
Chapter: A Simple Flower

its really great! cant wait for the other chapters!

Author's Response: They're still being moderated!

Reviewer: Jules_411
Date: 08/15/05 16:07
Chapter: Confide in me

i liked it! It was really good! brb, i am going to go read the next chapter!

Author's Response: Coolio! Thanks! More chapters are in queue.

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