Reviewer: Lu Potter
Date: 11/18/05 10:38
Chapter: In the thick of it

OMG!!!! this keeps getting better... It's worth the waiting.... please... tell us more... wht will happen now?

Author's Response: Ooo you'll have to wait and see!

Reviewer: jdstclair
Date: 11/14/05 12:57
Chapter: In the thick of it

This story is getting better and better every chapter. I cant wait to read more. 10/10

Author's Response: You just wait til the end...

Author's Response: You just wait til the end...

Author's Response: You just wait til the end...

Author's Response: Woah don't know what happened there...

Reviewer: Melindaleo
Date: 11/14/05 9:11
Chapter: In the thick of it

I liked the scene at Privet Drive, but I wish it had lasted longer and had some more dialog with the Dursleys! I don't know why Ginny behaved so stupidly, however. I know she was upset, but that seemed extreme. How come Harry didn't just Apparate them out again though?

Author's Response: Ginny wasn't really thinking - it may seem extreme, but she was still in shock and acted on instinct rather than reason. I didn't want them to spend too long at the Dursleys' - I didn't want to drag it out too much. As I have said in a previous review, there was an Anti-Apparition guard on the Burrow. Thanks for the review!

Author's Response: I have now amended the chapter with more clear indication of the Anti-Apparition thing. Thanks for pointing it out.

Reviewer: Sarah Kerr
Date: 11/13/05 21:46
Chapter: In the thick of it

This is a great story!! You really have the potential to become a great writer! Keep on creating! It's fabulous!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! It is one of my many goals in life...

Reviewer: Hot48cricket
Date: 11/13/05 18:30
Chapter: In the thick of it

Oh, goody! I'm first! What a good chapter....and having them go to Privet Drive! he he. So, how come Harry didn't think to apparate out of there when Bela showed up??? (I know, plot - but still!) Keep up the good work and update quickly!

Author's Response: The Weasley house has a non-Apparition guard on it. I know I didn't specify this, but that is why they had to run out of it before they could Apparate before. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: lisa_lovegood
Date: 11/12/05 18:40
Chapter: Destroyed

great, amazeing brilliant, keepi it up! U-P-D-A-T-E! 10 gold stars! Lisa xxx

Author's Response: It's on its way!

Reviewer: believe_in_yourself201
Date: 11/09/05 18:43
Chapter: Destroyed

bloody brilliant update soon

Author's Response: Thanks! Update is in queue

Reviewer: jdstclair
Date: 10/27/05 10:01
Chapter: Destroyed

Waiting for these chapters is almost as bad as waiting for the next book to come out. Awesome story! Keep it up.

Author's Response: Wow that's a bit of a compliment! Thanks!

Reviewer: jdstclair
Date: 10/27/05 9:59
Chapter: Prologue: I'll always be with you...

Wonderful Story! This story made me sign up for this FanFic site. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Great! Enjoy your submission!

Reviewer: Melindaleo
Date: 10/24/05 11:28
Chapter: Destroyed

Hooray for the update! What about Ron though? Harry wouldn't have just saved the girls without Ron. How awful about the Burrow, sniff. I wanted to strangle Ginny, but her response was very human. The idea of Harry wanting to shout "I did it" was so cute and recognizable. So, are they in his room in Grimmauld Place or at Privet Drive?

Author's Response: Exactly - she wasn't exactly thinking straight at the time. I'm not telling you where they are! You have to wait for the update! Thank you so much for the brilliant review - it's people like you that help the most. xxx hattiepotter xxx

Reviewer: TheDivaDivine
Date: 10/24/05 1:51
Chapter: Destroyed

This chapter is very interesting. But I am curious as to what happen to Ron. It is not like Harry character to think of the girls and forget about his best friend. Oh well I guess I will have to stay tune.

Author's Response: Well I think I need to make it a bit more obvious, but I think I said that Ron and Hermione were also holding hands. You're right - Harry wouldn't have left Ron behind. But you still need to stay in tune! xxx

Reviewer: Blondeshorte88
Date: 10/22/05 22:27
Chapter: Destroyed

awesome chapter! thank god they got out of that situation without to much trouble! update soon! when u mean bedroom....which bedroom!

Author's Response: Well you'll just have to keep reading...

Reviewer: Lu Potter
Date: 10/20/05 9:25
Chapter: Destroyed

OMG..... this is so great!!!!!!!! Please, update fast... I need to know what happens next... This is so good

Author's Response: Yay! Seriously - I love you guys! The next chapters are gonna get v.exciting btw...

Reviewer: moonytb
Date: 10/19/05 23:02
Chapter: Destroyed

omg brilliant absolutely brilliant it was well worth the wait but alas if only it could've been longer

Author's Response: I know I'm so sorry it was short! I think the next chapter is quite long though, so hopefully that will make up for it. I'll update asap. xxx

Reviewer: ginnyNharry4EVER
Date: 10/19/05 18:00
Chapter: Destroyed

hey this is one of my favorites!! good job update soon!1 :-)

Author's Response: That's really cool - thanks! xxx

Reviewer: Blondeshorte88
Date: 10/01/05 15:41
Chapter: Grief

great chapter. very sad that dean died though! update soon!

Author's Response: Next chapter is in queue. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: prongs12433
Date: 09/17/05 21:28
Chapter: Grief

jeez, I was so shocked that dean died, but i never really liked him much. Good chapter, I like how harry is able to keep everyone going! Alas, school. I had like no time to myself over the past week with sports and stuff. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Yeah - school smells. I had loads of time over the summer to type up new chapters, now I have none! I will try though - I'm not giving up on this story now.

Reviewer: Gryffindor88
Date: 09/14/05 20:17
Chapter: Grief

I love the story. It is so intense. I loved ur other story and hope u keep writing

Author's Response: Of course I will keep writing! Bearing in mind that I am back at school with loooads of work, so there might be a bit of a wait for the next chapters.

Author's Response: Of course I will keep writing! Bearing in mind that I am back at school with loooads of work, so there might be a bit of a wait for the next chapters.

Reviewer: RoxyGirl
Date: 09/13/05 23:58
Chapter: Grief

I'm glad you killed off one of the major supporting characters. I'm sad that it happened, but it needed to. It gives the story more credibility. You're doing a great job on it, though. I'm enjoying it very much. Hope you're able to update again soon!

Author's Response: I know - it just happened but it felt kind of right. Glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: Melindaleo
Date: 09/11/05 20:31
Chapter: Grief

Well, the war is certainly hitting closer to home now, isn't it? Sad, but very realistic with the way you have them all snippng at one another, as well.

Author's Response: It certainly is. Thanks for the comments - they're all useful!

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