Reviewer: HermyLuvsRon
Date: 03/09/06 20:37
Chapter: I'll always be with you...

Both stories were pretty good. The ending was not good at all. Not because Ginny died, I am fine with that. Just that it left to much unfinished business. It feels and sounds like the end of a chapter not the end of a whole story. I would have given you a 9 until then. Now it is more like a 3. If the ending actully finished the story it would be better.

Author's Response: Sorry it was a disappointment. In my mind, the abrupt ending merely reflects the abrupt cutting off of Harry's feelings and the sudden loss of a huge part of his heart and soul. I feel that to carry this story on would be a mistake - the empty, unfinished feeling you have when you read the end gives you an idea of how Harry feels, and how he may well continue to feel for the rest of his life...

Reviewer: There you are Peter
Date: 03/08/06 13:53
Chapter: Prologue: I'll always be with you...

Here is the sound of solitary clapping from me: Clap, clap, clap. Leave the Hat alone kids, the ending was great. Well, not that great cos Ginny died but think about it - how else should it have finished? Harry, the kid who was too nice to even out the Cruciatus curse on Bellatrix, the person he hates almost as much as Voldemort? Yeah, he's totally gonna Avada Kedavra one of the most powerful wizards of all time. This is a 17 year old versus a DARK LORD! Much as I love Harry, and I really do, I'm placing my bet on the Dark Lord. I reckon Hattie's got it right - the only way that Voldemort can die is if history repeats itself. And plus her writing is great so stop being meanies, accept that Ginny is dead, yes DEAD, and move on. People die. It's sad. But it makes bloody good reading.

Author's Response: Thanks Libs...

Reviewer: Giwea
Date: 03/07/06 11:51
Chapter: Prologue: I'll always be with you...

What can I say, I liked this story till the last few lines when everything just canme out totally wrong. It was a 10 up till this. How could you kill Ginny????

Author's Response: Man alive, people - not every story has a happy ending! I know it's sad that Ginny died - trust me - but how does that make my writing so terrible? I'm sorry it was unhappy, but if you liked it so much until then and my writing was good then how can you get so mad at me for something that could very plausibly happen, especially in Harry's life? Is Harry Potter totally wrong because Sirius died? Dumbledore? LILY AND JAMES?? Sorry to rant - I know that the end of the story is a shock, but it just seems unfair and I'm fed up of "WHY DID YOU HAVE TO GO AND KILL GINNY??" reviews...

Reviewer: scars_are_cool
Date: 02/21/06 16:59
Chapter: I'll always be with you...

ginny...ginny.. ginny is dead?!? i think i need to lie down. great story by the way!

Author's Response: I know... intense, huh? Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: elaraluna
Date: 02/01/06 6:09
Chapter: Destroyed

**"Harry didnít have time to think; he wrenched Ginny off the floor and pulled her to the door, seeing her snatch something from the dresser as they left the room, but quickly forgetting about it."** You never told us what giiny took.... was it some part of harry's birthday gift???

Author's Response: Ah yes - I've been meaning to check this. I wasn't sure whether I ever took it out or not. It was something that I was going to put in that would be revealed nearer the end of the story, but it never really worked out how I wanted it to. Sorry - I should have taken it out. Thanks for reminding me!

Reviewer: HanilarLion
Date: 01/30/06 17:13
Chapter: Prologue: I'll always be with you...

Hey! I know what deja vu means! It means "already seen." Do I get a prize now? Maybe I shouldn't, because I'm in my third year of French. Okay, I'll stop rambling now. Thanks for responding to my reviews.

Author's Response: I always respond to reviews that have something to say! Well done for your French achievement - here is your prize: *hattiepotter pats you on the head* Congratulations on your wonderful prize - may you treasure it forever...

Reviewer: HanilarLion
Date: 01/29/06 14:22
Chapter: I'll always be with you...

NNNNNOOOOOOOOO! Ginny! WHY DID YOU KILL GINNY!!!!!!!!??????? It was so sad, especially the last sentance. That was what made me cry. I hope you continue to write fanfics. I'll read every one of them.

Author's Response: I KNOOOOW!!! I felt the same way when I wrote it! WHY DID I HAVE TO KILL GINNY?! Lol. I just had to do it. I thought of the last sentence pretty much straight after I wrote the first sentence of the whole story (check back if you need to remind yourself what that was) and I worked towards that last sentence for months and months. That is why it means a lot to me when people read it! I may indeed write more fanfics. I have 2 one-shots on HPFF.com that were too short for MN which you might want to check out. hattiepotter xxx

Reviewer: HanilarLion
Date: 01/29/06 14:14
Chapter: White lily

Sorry I've been away so long-- I forgot about this fic :( How could I? I liked this chapter very much, although it was a little creepy. Can't wait to finish.

Author's Response: Yeah, sorry about the immense creepiness, guys. I think I must be a disturbed child to think up these things...

Reviewer: elaraluna
Date: 01/28/06 4:51
Chapter: I'll always be with you...

*sigh*.... i wish ginny hadn't died..... de ja vu... keep writing

Author's Response: I know... I feel the pain too... glad you picked up on the deja vu (prize for anyone who knows what that translates as - I'm in a French mood today). I will definitely keep writing!

Reviewer: elaraluna
Date: 01/28/06 4:43
Chapter: White lily

Why don't you get your work published???? You ROCK... lovely chapter. i love the way you describe how harry feels.... feels like i'm right there....

Author's Response: Oh I will! But I can't exactly publish this story cos it's kind of copyrighted... But I am writing a novel which I hope to get published one day. So look out for that! I'm glad it made you feel like you were there - that's quite a difficult thing to do. xx

Reviewer: elaraluna
Date: 01/28/06 4:38
Chapter: Emerald flames

Awesome.... soul stirring even... the most beautiful chapter so far. loved the connection between harry-ginny / james-lily 10000000000/10

Author's Response: Thanks - I loved that, too. It's something I really wanted to pick up on in this story. xx

Reviewer: elaraluna
Date: 01/25/06 6:35
Chapter: A Simple Flower

awww... harry's SO cute.... i really love the way you show him in the story...

Author's Response: Lol - he actually is, isn't he? Now he knows how the romance is done, he's really quite good at it! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: gryffindors_girl
Date: 01/12/06 21:56
Chapter: I'll always be with you...

Oh my gosh!!! i loved it. Why did ginny have to die. that part made me cry and i hardly ever cry!!! I loved the part where Harry showed lily the locket. Are you going to write more stories?

Author's Response: Thanks. I have answered the "why did Ginny have to die?" question too many times! Look at the other reviews! It's good that I got your emotions going though - that's what makes the best stories! The bit with the locket - I was absolutely breaking down when I wrote that, and that's not something that I do often when writing. I'm sure I will write more stories. Thanks for reviewing! xxx

Reviewer: Tara_Q
Date: 01/11/06 20:11
Chapter: I'll always be with you...

The last two stories I read of yours..."Always Stick Together" and this one were both AMAZING!! I could stop reading these past two days....I think my eyeballs are going to fall out. That was sooo sad!! Why'd Ginny have to die :'(.........are u going to write another?

Author's Response: THANK YOU! I know what you mean when your eyeballs feel like they're dying... but I'm glad you liked it! I understand your pain for the ending, but, as I have said before, why did James and Lily have to die? I am not going to carry on this story (if I do write more of it, it will probs be a prequel to AST) but I'm sure I will be writing more fanfics. A very short one-shot is in queue at the mo. xxx

Reviewer: WelcomeToParadise
Date: 01/06/06 15:25
Chapter: I'll always be with you...

*Wipes tear from eye...* That was so kewl and I randomly cried cos it was so like Lily at the end when Ginny was died and then I also cried when he showed Lily-Inferi-Thingy the locket... I lurfffed it! Well done... 10! *~*WelcomeToParadise*~*

Author's Response: I'm sorry I made you cry! I know - it was so much like Lily. It was an idea I had absolutely ages ago to make history repeat itself like that. Trust me, I cried a great deal when I was *writing* that bit with the necklace! I'm glad you "lurfffed" it! Thanks for R/Ring xxx

Reviewer: Hot48cricket
Date: 01/06/06 13:13
Chapter: I'll always be with you...

Sorry to dissappointl.....it was a MINUS TEN.......NOT A POSSITIVE REVIEW!!!

Author's Response: Oh that's a shame. I'm so sorry it was a disappointment. I know that sometimes people feel a bit disappointed with unhappy endings.

Reviewer: HarryPotter is my LIFE
Date: 01/05/06 17:50
Chapter: I'll always be with you...

That was so sad! why didn't Harry die? Was it Ginny's love that saved him? Did the curse rebound upon Voldemort again? The last part was unclear...what happened? *10* Awsome final chapter!

Author's Response: Yeah I was afraid that it might have been. There was so much to get into that one split second! Basically, think of what happened when Lily jumped in front of the killing curse for Harry - history has just repeated itself... Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: There you are Peter
Date: 01/05/06 13:23
Chapter: I'll always be with you...

Tis all over...you've broken my heart...fate has gone wrong and Harry will never love again. Aaaah and his mum! Oh that sucks man...we must make them live again through Lily and James OR you could write Bill and Fleurs wedding. Let's get a little vote going - if anyone reads this review and agrees with the wedding idea then please mention it in yours. Anyway, I have a poem for you: They have laughed, They have cried, They have fought but Now She's Died.... That was my tribute to your wonderful, fantastic, surpely awesome story. All my love, Livs xxx P.S. Thanks for mentioning me at the end!

Author's Response: I know! It killed me, too (nice choice of words) but that's that. The bit with Lily absolutely killed me to write (again, I didn't mean to do that) but that is also that. The vote idea is quite good. I have actually started writing it, but I'm not totally sure, you see? The thought did cross my mind to write an L/J story, but it would probably end up being too much like yours as I am quite involved with that. Loved the poem, Libs - it was inspired.

Reviewer: Hot48cricket
Date: 01/04/06 22:01
Chapter: I'll always be with you...

THAT'S IT????? THAT'S THE END?????? I really enjoyed the 2 stories, but right now I am dumbfounded as to HOW YOU ENDED THIS STORY!!!!!!! HOW COULD YOU END IT LIKE THAT??????? I FEEL SO LET DOWN.....-10

Reviewer: Hot48cricket
Date: 01/04/06 22:01
Chapter: I'll always be with you...

THAT'S IT????? THAT'S THE END?????? I really enjoyed the 2 stories, but right now I am dumbfounded as to HOW YOU ENDED THIS STORY!!!!!!! HOW COULD YOU END IT LIKE THAT??????? I FEEL SO LET DOWN.....-10

Author's Response: Let down but still giving it a ten? Lol - I assume you mean let down as to what happened. Sorry I have distressed you so greatly! But thanks for the review and the ten!

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