Reviewer: lily98evans
Date: 08/24/11 6:12
Chapter: Chapter 8 - Who Are We Making Jealous?

to mshy i understand that u r tryng do do for valintines day but you should make them yell at each other and pranks

Reviewer: lily98evans
Date: 08/24/11 5:08
Chapter: Chapter 4 - Prelude to a Kiss

it was ok but in the summary you that harry wondered wheres harry?

Reviewer: lily98evans
Date: 08/24/11 5:00
Chapter: Chapter 3 - Friends and Marauders

I'm going to be honest but i thought the 2nd part was little boring

Reviewer: lily98evans
Date: 08/24/11 4:48
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Home Sweet Home?

Umm reread this Lily took out her wand, a swishy willow wand of about ten inches, and magically sealed the note.Magically sealed the note!!! she is not allowed to use magic yet!!1

Reviewer: bibliophilebaby17
Date: 04/30/11 18:18
Chapter: Chapter 10 - Nightmares are Real

actually this is completely canon. all of james's and lily's relatives had to of died before harry was born in order for petunia to harry's only remaining relative

Reviewer: bibliophilebaby17
Date: 04/30/11 17:50
Chapter: Chapter 9 - Bad Feeling

i am a purist but i have a feeling i wont care

Reviewer: bibliophilebaby17
Date: 04/30/11 17:40
Chapter: Chapter 8 - Who Are We Making Jealous?

but i like it when it lasts love the story by the way

Reviewer: LILY_ISTHEBEST
Date: 03/22/11 14:28
Chapter: Chapter 5 - Bewitched, Bothered, and Bewildered

i like this story except you should make sirius more funny.

Reviewer: LILY_ISTHEBEST
Date: 03/22/11 14:21
Chapter: Chapter 4 - Prelude to a Kiss

awesum story but i should tell you that its not like lily at all for one thing she wouldnt admit her feelings to james so quickly even to herself so try to make it more like lily like she regrets it or something.

Reviewer: pinkerton3gg
Date: 07/11/09 8:22
Chapter: Chapter 15 - Awake

finish like the wind!!!

Reviewer: lilyrox
Date: 07/07/08 15:54
Chapter: Chapter 15 - Awake

Wow , wonderful so far. I can't wait till the next chapter. Is James going to die? Wait, don't slap me! I didn't mean to say that. *screams and runs away*

Reviewer: LilyPotter65
Date: 07/05/08 11:24
Chapter: Chapter 5 - Bewitched, Bothered, and Bewildered

Yes, a very interesting year it is going to be. Once again, you confused me in this excerpt: "She gaped about for something to talk about. “Was your summer –” But she stopped. James was leaning forward, a foot, six inches, an inch away from her…


“James!” She was on her feet, and James was looking up at her, confused.


At this second, Sirius Black strode into the compartment, chin covered in lipstick.


James glared. He was absolutely nonplussed. Lily had pulled away from him…


Black was not at all on Lily’s Christmas list, to put it nicely. Hannah thought Sirius was the next Minister for Magic, whereas Lily often thought of Sirius as the next Leaky Cauldron janitor." Very confusing, but oh well.

Reviewer: LilyPotter65
Date: 07/05/08 11:17
Chapter: Chapter 4 - Prelude to a Kiss

I already knew it was going to be tails. But why does James always have to be a "wonderful kisser"? Just Kidding!

Reviewer: LilyPotter65
Date: 07/05/08 11:11
Chapter: Chapter 3 - Friends and Marauders

Confused me for a bit, when she got al dizzy and stuff, but I got over it. I like how Hannah's last name is Silver and Sirius' is Black. You knw, "Black and Silver. I thought that was kinda funny. Anyways, great story so far.

Reviewer: LilyPotter65
Date: 07/05/08 11:04
Chapter: Chapter 2 - Maybe He Lost a Bet?

I wonder what interesting sight that must be...?

Reviewer: LilyPotter65
Date: 07/05/08 10:58
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Home Sweet Home?

Good so far. There isn't much going on yet =, but I'm still excited for the next chapter, which, fortunately is already up!

Reviewer: Lily Elegance
Date: 09/01/07 14:31
Chapter: Chapter 15 - Awake

I love this story so far it's so exciting and when Lily slapped Sirius; well, I bet she'd been wanting to do that for a while!
Update soon please.

Reviewer: i_hart_wheezys
Date: 09/01/07 2:12
Chapter: Chapter 15 - Awake

argh again with the cliff hangers! the story is brilliant beyond brilliant and really good and incredibly interesting and i really really really really love it! but i dont love cliffhangers so UPDATE SOON PRETTY PRETTY PLEASE WITH A CHERRY ON TOP!

Reviewer: SiriusPotterFan1
Date: 08/15/07 12:30
Chapter: Chapter 15 - Awake

Darn you, UPDATE!!!! This is really good, I'm excited to see how it all works out! Well written, too. Thanks!

Reviewer: SiriusPotterFan1
Date: 08/14/07 20:11
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Home Sweet Home?

Short chapter! Hmm, we'll see how it goes. Good so far, though. :)

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