This was a very good gap filler, shows how boring their time at headquarters was before Harry arrived. They should've made him look at pensieve memories of this and he'd have been glad to have avoided it for so long. It just struck me how easy it would be for Mrs Weasley or any order member to scourgify all of the rooms on their way through the house, infestations may take some work but the rest would be simple with a wand. I'm thinking the only reason the teenagers were made to clean was to keep them away from the action, order meetings, reports from Snape etc.
he he cute
Needs a better ending sorry!
It's going on a year since you've posted but I must say, I love your stories and I love your pen name. ;) Wish you would come back.
This isn't bad...for a start. I think rather than having it be a one shot you should have it be the first chapter of a story... for a romance fic there's not really that much romance...it's well written though...
Do continue! I can tell this will begin. There is a similar one on here, though. At least, it starts out the same. (Ron and Hermione are cleaning without Harry at Grimmuald Place over the summer.) But I'm sure it will be different. Have you read The Game of Truth by (I think (but I'm not positive. So don't hold me to this)) AmyChris? Anyway, that's the one I'm referring to. Anyway, I look forward to more! Keep writing!