write more! i like it!
Oh his chapter was so good please continue!!!
Oh his chapter was so good please continue!!!
i really liked it u should write alot more
I love it! 10/10
When do Harry and Hermione kiss again? Please update soon.
i love this story. what took you so long to update?! don't take as long next time. please!!!!
YAY!!! AN UPDATE!!!! I was getting worried you had died... I know i havent review for any other chapter, but im a silent reader thats finally starting to review!!!! I like the fact that Harry and Hermiones relationship isnt happening perfectly, it makes it more real!!!!!!!
oh my god! this story is so fantastic. i absoulutely love it. so much that i dont' care if i spelled absolutely right or not. plaese update soon. i love this story. you are my idol in writing. you are so good at writing!
Author's Response: Thank you for such a kind review I never would have suspected someone to like my fic so much. And you spelled absolutely right the second time but not the first.
great story, i really liked this chapter. update soon!
10 out of 10
Author's Response: Short but sweet, thank you for reviewing.
Wow! This is a really good story! PLease UPDATE soon!
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing and I'm glad you like the story.
please update soon!it's really exciting
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing and I plan on updating really soon in fact the next two chapters are already posted and the next is in for review I have two more after that that have been betaed and just need to be sumitted.
Iím not real sure if Dumbledore would really let Hermione, a sixteen year old (your going for the 6th book version, eh? Then sheís 16) going up and up with Voldemort. Even if itís all for Harry. But, itís your story. "Please? Since when do you say please? If I didn't know better I'd think someone was holding a gum to your..." Lol, is it supposed to be gun? or did you want it to say gum? Lol, itís a funny mistake (if it is one). :) Also, Lupin seemed a little OOC but a little is ok. Well, itís good. I have a question though. Where is Ron? I mean, you have a good way of us not really thinking of him for all the way through those 3 chapters, but at the end, I really wonder where on earth that red head is. ;) Carry on! DDL 8
Author's Response: It is suppose to be gun not gum, Ron is coming up in the next chapter if you haven't already read it. Dumbledore let Hermione go because he knew she was more focused in mind and he tought her enough to survive and technicaly she never went against Voldemort she simply went against his orders withour him knowing it. Thank you for reviewing and giving you oppinion please continue it really helps.
Loved it! Can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon please!
Author's Response: Sorry it took so long for me to respone and to update but there are two chatpers that have been approved after this one and another in for reviewing and I have two more that have been betaed so the updates will continue. Thank you for your review please continue.
Very, very nice. The prologue is very fast paced and exciting. Leaves me glued to the screen and such. Your use of dialogue is simply fantastic and flows effortlessly. I guess the only nogative comment I can give is the idea of Narcissa falling through the curtain. I dunnno, that just didn't click with me. But the writing makes me overlook this. Oh and kudos must be given for Hermione's letter to her parents. Now THAT was heart wrenching. One of the many things done very nicely.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. It means alot coming from one of my favorite authors.
Not Pitunia? Couldn't be, No, I'll not stand for it! Such a good chapter, I almost lst me temper with you there for a minute. Let me go outside and pull up a couple o'trees, always makes me feel better.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. I love the way you write.
It's a good plot please continue to update. It looks like poor Hermione is going to be in for a rough ride. Frankly I think that is a real possibility in JKRs books too. It would be very daring of Dumbledore to put Hermione into such danger, but it is a lot more realistic than stories that begin "Harry and Hermione were two carefree teenagers..."
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing again. I really appreciate when people review it keeps me writing. I'm just waiting for my beta to read chapter four then it will be up.
I really like your story
Author's Response: I really like your pin name. Thanks for reviewing.
Well that certainly clears up the question of who will inherit 12 Grimmauld place. I think Hermione is brave and resourceful but sending her to spy on Voldemort, wow! Does Harry know about that? Your story is well written, keep it up.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. Harry will find out in the next chapter. I worked really hard on this story and the next chapter is on it's way.
Wow! That is possibly the most creative 'Sirius-is-still-alive' idea I've ever seen! Are you one of the people who think that Sirius is still alive? Your story is well written, and I look forward to the future chapters!
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I worked hard on this story and the next chapter is on its way. To answer your question, no I don't think Sirius is still alive but i loved his character and I want Harry to have someone to give him girl advice,