woah! i was totally blown away the 1st time i read it and im probably more so now! sry i didnt review when i read it way back when, but now i am. i luv how u incorperated the whole tear thing. i mean seriously, how long did that take u? u must have an A+ in english. u should consider poetry. i think there is some form that does what u did kinda. like beginning and starting witht he same thing. ive been reading the sequel (spelling?) and decided to go bakc and read this one. i mean wow! i could go on forever. i think this is the only fanfic i've ever read were it not only ahs a good plot and all that but also very very very good writing. i mean like, i dunno how to explain it but i hope u get my drift. well i am 4 sure gunna give u a 10! :D ps- this is the longest review ive ever written
Author's Response: I am so flattered to have your longest review on my story! Anyway, yes. I um, do have an A+ in english... lol. But that's not the point. I love English and I would love to major in the subject once I get out of High School. And really, that definition came from personal experience. I was head over heals in love with this guy for eight years of my life and finally realized he was never going to love me back like that, so I sort of moved on. But having that feeling opened up all these new doors in writing for me. So I would like to thank him for that, even though he has absolutely no idea. lol. So thank you again. I really do apreciate your thoughtful words!
That is so sad, it made me cry.. 10/10, you honestly deserve it. Keep writing
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm flattered I made you cry... don't know how nice that was to say, but yeah... Um, yeah. lol. Check out the sequal if you have time!
Author's Response: just to clarify, I was reffering to the statement I made when I said "don't know how nice that was to say". I meant, I don't know how nice it was to say I'm glad I made you cry. Just to clarify... lol
Wow... That is by far the best Hr/D fic I've read. I am absolutely positive somewhere there is some law in fine print that says I can't finish a story, but after reading this, I'm not sure it would be worth it anyway!! Nothing coming out of my head would top this! Personally, I'm a R/Hr H/G shipper, but sometimes I branch out. I'm very glad I did. Keep it up for writing challenged people like me. Cheers and Butterbeer, Ari
Author's Response: Wow... *blushes profusely* Thank you so much that is so sweet! Yeah, I have that problem, too. I have never finished a story before but I am HOPING I'm able to finish the sequal to this, All This Time... If you like you can check it out. I am hoping that since I wrote and finished this one, not hard to do as its a One Shot, I may be able to finish stories from now on. I have never gotten this far before in a story so we'll see. Thanks again and know that if you have an idea, use it! Editing will help as well as using beta readers. Hope to see you again!
woah, that was the greatest story ever.... i cried i mean im a H/hr or a D/H shipper which ever happens i would love....man this was a great story....nice definition of a tear thats exactly true
Author's Response: Why thank you, thank you very much. That definition of a tear comes from my own personal beliefs and experiences, lol. As for the ship... *evil grin on face* You could read the sequal to find out... ha ha? Thanks SO much for the review!
Wow. That is a great story! Sad and depressing, but good anyway. Keep up the good work! Sorry, I'm not the best reviewer.
Author's Response: lol. You're fine! It's the thought that counts and the fact that you took the time to review... extra kudo points! Thank SO much! Yes, I was having some relationship dificulties when I wrote this story... actually, I still am but I was having a hard time dealing with it back then and so, vuala! Thanks for reading!
I love this story. But why did draco have to die? Its so sad, it made me cry
Author's Response: *is a complete and udder sap* OMG! I am now smiling despite the day I've had so far! lol. Thank you SO much! You see everyone? Reviews are appreciated and MAKE MY DAY!!! lol. Anyway, I want you all to know, I have written three pages in the sequal, All This Time... and have submitted the first chapter! Yip! I hope you ALL read it and let me know what you think. Even though I know that Love is Pain is a sad story, the sequal, so far, is even worse. Well, I lied. It's just a differnet kind of sad. So anyway THANK YOU SO MUCH xcxcharlottexcx for your review! I hated killing off Draco and cried whilst I did, but I think it gives the story more mystery and suspense. To all you other silent people, lmk what you think! I promise I will thank you for the time it takes you to review! *smooch*
Author's Response: I'm retarded. Not three pages, three chapters. And it's four chapters now. :)
I LOVED IT! Its so sad though, I cried a lot. Draco shouldn't have died but i loved the way you said that he came back in a box. That was my favorite part. It should get a 100!
Author's Response: Wow! A 100? Thank you so much! That means so much to me! I really appreciate your positive feedback! It still makes me feel really good to know that people can cry because of what I wrote, so thank you for that, too! Hope to see you in the future!
That was really sad. Soooo depressing. Wow, I nearly cried. I still don´t understand why he had to leave her because of a JOB?!? That is sooo stupid! Hei, I´d like to know more about the sequal... I will wirte a mail.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! It means a lot to me, especially since not many have been. I know they're reading it, they're just not reviewing! lol. Anyway, I am pleased to announce that I have started the sequal. I have part of chapter 1 written so far and I am proud to say it is a bit of a, um, surprise. Thanks to all who've read this story and shown interest in my writing!
Im really sorry that I didnt cry... but it was wonderful and sad. Are you H/Hr at all? I liked the ending, but was really sad that Draco died and Hermione couldnt get over it. i loved it anyway... 100/10
Author's Response: Well... yes. I was... but anyway, lol. Thanks so much for all of the positive feedback! I love every bit of positive feedback and encouragment I can get in my writing! So thanks so much and I'm glad you enjoyed it! Are you a H/Hr shipper?
Love it. Love love love love love love it. I hardly ever cry but I did. But...I don't like the ending. He shouldn't have died. And she shouldn't have married Harry. But overall, I love it. It's...amazing. Really. Do a sequal or a prequal in which they're at Hogwarts or before this event took place...
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I loved hearing your feedback, it made my day! Wow! I'm glad the story had that kind of effect on you. *glows with pride* Anyway, as to the ending, I hated having to end it like that... but! I am going to most likely do a sequal and possibly a prequal. lol. I need an idea first. Anyway, thank u soooo much and if I do the sequal, you especially might want 2 read it... after what you said in your review. lol. I'm not saying anymore! ;)
my eyes are still wet from the tears. i look like a zombie my mascara is all under my eyes. loved it! absolutly one of the best one-shots. if i could give you a 100 i would but since it goes up to 10 that's all i can do. *10*
Author's Response: Wow! I feel really good after hearing that! 100 and you cried for me? Wow! I think I would have fainted if I had actually been allowed 100. Thanks for reading and I really appreciate your kind words. I recently injured my wrist but once I get this Ace Bandage off, I'm going to start working on the sequel, All This Time.... Thanks again everyone!
Awwww, that was SOOO sad! =( I coulda cried, but I was all cried out because I just watched a sad movie, but it was brillaint! On my faves! Great one-shot! *10*
Author's Response: Wow! Thanks! I love your story, When Gray Turns Silver, as well. It's people like you who keep authors going with their writing! lol. As I'm sure you've experienced. lol. Thanks for putting it on your faves, I'm flattered. *blushes*
I think that's one of the most creative one shots i've read in a while. I didn't cry, but i became teary eyed. I really enjoyed it. :) Thanks so much! Please continue writing, i look forward to reading some more of your things.
Author's Response: OMG! That's so nice! Thank you SO much! I'm flattered. I have one other story on this account called Hidden Worlds and Forgotten Secrets. I'm also thinking of writing another Hr/D story so if I do, I would love to hear your reactions to it! lol. Thanks again!
oh! i cried through the entire story! It was really good, very well written. i would love to see a sequel.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm flattered that my writing had an effect on you. I'm still pondering the sequel idea. lol.
Wow! I am crying my eyes out! Why did he have to die? What a beautiful story. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Your comments mean the world to me... they really do! :) I know, I hated having to end it like that but I thought it was for the best... what would you think of a sequal? The same questions apply to everyone else here! I'm glad I had an emotional effect on you as well, that makes me happier then anything else you could have said to me. The fact I can do that with words... *blushes* lol. I cried as well, thanks so much!
Author's Response: sorry, sequel, I wrote this at like midnight! lol.