Reviews For Escape
Reviewer: Moonlight Goddess
Date: 08/24/07 21:39
Chapter: Escape

THat was really good!

Reviewer: softball_lover002
Date: 06/20/07 12:53
Chapter: Escape

aww, sad. :'(

Reviewer: lilywink
Date: 04/15/07 21:07
Chapter: Escape

One word....WOW...

Reviewer: babyblue
Date: 12/03/06 1:33
Chapter: Escape

woah. an excellent story!

Reviewer: hpfreak519
Date: 07/18/06 17:52
Chapter: Escape

i swear i was crying at the end of this story. it was amazing! have you ever considered being an author?

Reviewer: poodlez
Date: 06/29/06 10:29
Chapter: Escape

*snif* How very depressing , but totally great!!!

Reviewer: cyber_bunny
Date: 03/11/06 7:59
Chapter: Escape

WOW! Dark. Verging on plain creepy but... brilliant.

Reviewer: padfootslostdaughter
Date: 02/26/06 14:33
Chapter: Escape

Very strange. Good, but strange. I think you amazlingly brave to attempet a story like this. I have read of this plot before, but only on roleplay boards, and i have to say its never got the plot anywhere. This is very Romeo and Juliet ot Pyramus and Thisbe, and you've carried out as well as both of those classic stories! Well done!

Reviewer: sHadOesTaR
Date: 01/19/06 11:41
Chapter: Escape

i didnt expect this one coming..heee.. i like it..darkk.. altho i dun xactly like Draco - Ginny pairing..but it is gud..!! shocks it every line..short but full!!! aye!!

Reviewer: Capricorn
Date: 01/14/06 11:55
Chapter: Escape

I love that! Its so depressing!!

Reviewer: Tara_Q
Date: 12/23/05 20:30
Chapter: Escape

I love how your stories aren't all about Harry....I've told you a million times how amazing your writing is and this story just makes me believe it even more....

Reviewer: Gemma Hawk
Date: 11/29/05 11:58
Chapter: Escape

Wow. When I clicked this story I had no idea that it would be this good. I have tears in my eyes right now! You are great at evoking emotions in the reader- I envy you for that! It is a great talent to have and you use it well. You also use descriptions that somehow draw the reader in- and I didn't realize how into the story I was before I got interrupted! You go into detail, but never too detailed, which is great. It also makes your fiction interesting and eye catching. An excellent example of this is when you wrote: "He sat at the Slytherin table, lounging casually in his chair and surveying the first years lazily. At that moment, as I stepped up onto the platform, we made eye contact. I felt my whole body turn numb, and my legs freeze. I couldn't move, all I could do was stare into his icy grey eyes. Eternity seemed to settle between us as I continued to hold his cold gaze. I heard McGonagall call my name sharply, and tell me to move forward. I blinked, and turned away." Great job! But when you say: "Day by day, the part of me that loved him grew. It grew so much that it started to overwhelm the other part of me, the part that had once ruled over every other part of me, the part that hated him for all he was worth. I tried to shake it off; it frightened me that I might be thinking about him in any way other than miserably. I failed. You cannot shake off will plant itself inside you, and grow until it is a part of you" I think that you use the word "part" too much, and it makes it a little dull. Also, at the end it is a little confusing. Is Ginny still writing when Draco gets killed? Ah, well, the point is that this is simply an amazing one shot, and I truly believe that you are a very talented writer- keep writing! 10/10!

Reviewer: Squishilicious
Date: 09/14/05 6:40
Chapter: Escape

WOWISHA AGAIN! The same emotion that you have added to this story that carries in every story of yours that I have read. I rate these stories 10 because there are no numbers to account for such emotion!

Reviewer: LiliRose
Date: 08/28/05 10:34
Chapter: Escape

I have tears in my eyes right now and i am wondering how someone is able to write so... i cant explain it... so intensive and... right from the bottom of theheart. Awesome! *1o, because there is no 11*

Reviewer: kerplunk
Date: 05/15/05 11:58
Chapter: Escape

wow....that was a great story. i loved it! it actually brought tears to my eyes. you're an awesome writer!

Reviewer: moonlitrose
Date: 04/23/05 20:29
Chapter: Escape

this was an awesome story. at first i thought it was hermione, but it makes more sense with ginny. keep writing!

Reviewer: Narwen3
Date: 03/12/05 23:42
Chapter: Escape

You have such emotionally intense stories. They seem to grab at the heart and drag every bit of feeling from you. You have remarkable talent at writing and evoking emotion.

Reviewer: twitchy_little_ferret_girl
Date: 03/09/05 21:58
Chapter: Escape

*sniff...sniff...cry* God could you be a better writer. Your stories have so much emotion. Damnit I cry every bloody time. I am reading every one of your stories. You should like write some and publish them. I predict you on the best seller list for like ever!!

Reviewer: padfootprongs4eva
Date: 02/19/05 19:25
Chapter: Escape

wow! that was really great! i love how in the beginning your not quite sure who it is, but at the end your like ooooooo!ok i got it. awsome plot!

Reviewer: Melinanushka
Date: 02/17/05 9:36
Chapter: Escape


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