aawww! that was sweet! lol

aaaw this is lovely, brilliant keep up the good work

awww do i hear a sequal?

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I really liked this short and sweet fic. The Ginny and Hermione moment was really funny and well done, it's rare to see interaction between them. I think the kiss was a bit rushed but the tension about the gift was funny and realistic. Great job!

Very sweet one-shot. The characterizations were spot on and I really loved the part with the boxers. I could completely see Hermione getting embarrassed by the moving broomsticks. I got a little confused toward the middle when he's kind of sending her off to bed. I couldn't tell if hse was just assuming that he wanted her to go to bed or if he really did. Also, I would have loved to see the kiss slowed down a bit. You built up a good deal of anxiety in Hermione over this gift, but there's no tension once the kiss is about to happen. Otherwise, nicely done.

Author's Response: Thank you, firstly for reading and secondly for being honest. That middle part was supposed to be a bit ambiguous-- I always pictured her as the sort of girl to get strangely paranoid about the tiniest things (socially, I mean). I'm not going to lie: I recently reread this, and I think it needs some editing (this isn't my greatest triumph to being with, either). I guess that just goes to show how much a writer's skills can improve within a half-year. If I do re-write it, I will definitely take your comments into consideration. I appreciate that you included them. Thanks again.

Awww this is really cute! I love it!

Author's Response: Thanks a bunch! I'm glad you liked it.

I liked this. Simple and not to over the top gushy.

Author's Response: That’s precisely what I was going for! Thank you! Gushy is not really my thing, cause it can easily get turned sickeningly sweet. Thank you again.