really spicy stuff.good plot. and the narrative style reminds the reader strongly of J.K. one can see that the reader has potential.
I just posted up a review asking for you to update. Then I see you have updated, but it's not leting me read thsi chapter! Why not?!
Sorry, I've been a slient reader up until now.. But, OMG!
I started reading this out of curiosity, then I kept reading becasue it was well-written intresting. But now I ma just flat-out addicted. Please post up more soon!
Thanks for portraying Tom in his true character. Many people stray from his personality, eventually making him soft and cuddly. But I think that his cold personality is the alluring in its own way. Mr Mysterious. Haha.
Though some of the facts stray from the book. For example, the Whomping Willow was planted AFTER Tom left Hogwarts, when Lupin came, remember? Lupin mentioned that fact in the third book, during the confrontation.
Also, in the first chapter, Voldemort didn't know Hermione's name. But Voldie's a mastermind of crimes and stuff so I'm sure he'd make a point to ;who Harry's close to and stuff.
But, I guess I'm just paranoid and shit, haha! Cuz I'm a bit woozy right now. um...buh-bye.
WHY is it that I am ALWAYS SECOND to review?! And why are the administrators so fucking slow?! God I hate this site.
Well, no, I don't. Otherwise there wouldn't be this story...haha.
GAH! STUPID MODERATORS! i'm like, oh yay! a new chappie, and then its like "bitch j/k, it must be moderated"
still, this is such a great story, you really have captured the essence of Tom Riddle. i love it!
hey! i saw that there was another chapter, and i just jumped at the chance to call first review! okay, down to business (if there is any)...i finished reading your story on FF, and i have to say that it was excellent. one of the best i've ever read (and not to brag, but i'm very-wide read). so kudos to you! also, the characterization in this story is excellent, and even though what happened in last chapter, i can still see how that's in tom's character. bye!
D'oh, d'oh, d'oh! Finish it!!!! Please!!! Soon!!! it's great, and what an evil cliff hanger!!!
Oh, this is a great story! I love it... I just can't read it. it's quite sad actually, that I have such stubborn views that I can't enjoy this piece. That's the bad thing about canon. :(
I wish I could though, it looks wonderful.
OMG> i love the way you made him have to choose it was brilliant! and i just love your story its one of the best ones ive ever read! i cant wait to ser what will happen next!
great job, what happens next?
AHHHH!! Great story need more
Aah! Cliffhanger. Update soon!
yes!! i was so worried that he wouldn't choose to save her! i want the next chapter- nice and snappy! come on- move it! just kidding- but do make it quick! once again, may i say that you are a fantastic writer and that your story is brilliant.
wooooow!!!
so intense
really excited for the next chapter! post it soon please:D
Yess, he chose her! Wiiee! =D
I was thinking about what Hermione said - that if she went back, there might not be a Harry Potter, or Ron Weasley, or Hermione Granger... didn't Molly and Arthur get married just because of the war, and that they were scared? I think it's mentioned somewhere... so no Voldemort could definately mean no Ron Weasley =( That'll be really interesting to see, how much has changed, if she ever finds a way back to the future!
Wonder what happens now? Can Tom even stay at Hogwarts, now that he's lost all his "friends"? School isn't really important for either him or Hermione... I'm so looking forward to reading next chapter, I can hardly wait!!
You are so talented and this is a fantastic story, Hatusu! I hope you realize that. Thank you for sharing your story with us, keep it up! =)
That was awesome!! Know what? I think you are my really really favourite author (after Jk, of course)!!!!!....;-)
Please keep going!!!!!
gina
WHEEEEE!!!! awesomenesssssss
i love this!! i never normally read angsty fics but this is really good! keep up the great writing!!
Oh I love your story!!!!!!!! I advise you to KEEP GOING!!!!!!! Constant updates are really nice!
~~~~~~squigly!! *giggles childishly*
