Reviews For Take My Heart Away
Reviewer: EtherealElation
Date: 10/12/06 23:38
Chapter: Moonlight Masquerade

Oh! How could she do that to Tom? How could she?

*gasp* I'm taking the side of Tom Riddle. *shudder*


How could YOU leave me hanging like that? Must keep reading, don't have time for any more review...

~Juli

Reviewer: EtherealElation
Date: 10/12/06 23:34
Chapter: Sillver Slippers and Peacock... Hats

Oh... So true.

Excellent. Love this chapter... Hermione/Helen so worried, Tom so dangerous - and this Minerva / Dumbledore situation! It adds a nice spark to an empty spot in the story

~Juli

Reviewer: EtherealElation
Date: 10/12/06 23:31
Chapter: Empty Space

Oh, wow.

That was spectacular. Beautiful moment, and so... So right.

Tom reminds me too much of me.


Scary thoughts there.

~Juli

Reviewer: EtherealElation
Date: 10/12/06 23:28
Chapter: Best For Them

Yes, Harry did seem to notice that, didn't he? Told Dumbledore something about that, I seem to recall. Voldemort reminds me a bit - a bit of me. Or something like that.

~Juli

Reviewer: EtherealElation
Date: 10/12/06 23:23
Chapter: Enemies Closer

Ooh... Ouch. Great chapter - nice suspense. The plot thickens... If I may dare to use such a cliched term.

~Juli

Reviewer: Lite_inyour_Darkness
Date: 10/12/06 23:19
Chapter: Pieces of Agony

Short for you, but great. Great great great.

Reviewer: EtherealElation
Date: 10/12/06 23:19
Chapter: Sunset Tears

Oh! I thought she was going to tell him for a minute there. That wouldn't have been good now, would it?

~Juli

Reviewer: EtherealElation
Date: 10/12/06 23:16
Chapter: Late Night Suspicions

Ooh... She doesn't trust him much, does she?


~Juli

Reviewer: EtherealElation
Date: 10/12/06 23:12
Chapter: Of All People

Ooh... Riddle is mean. And wonderful. In a creepy sort of way. Lovely chapter - the potions class was terrific.

~Juli

Reviewer: EtherealElation
Date: 10/12/06 23:09
Chapter: Helen Nestowe of Germany

I simply adore how you described Tom as a "street rat"... I think of Aladding, so now you've got that blasted song stuck in my head, bu ' a wonderful description.

Dumbledore does seem a bit too forward, though. On his suspicions... Hasn't quite learned discression yet, I guess.

~Juli

Reviewer: EtherealElation
Date: 10/12/06 23:05
Chapter: Midnight Eyes

Oh... Hermione's in a bit of a spot, isn't she? I like the name... Helen Nestowe. It has a lovely sheen to it. Great chapter, by the way.


~Juli

Reviewer: Ozma333
Date: 10/12/06 23:03
Chapter: Pieces of Agony

really like this story...love where you're going!

Reviewer: elementalenchantress
Date: 10/12/06 23:02
Chapter: Pieces of Agony

This story is amazing!! Keep updating faster and faster!

Reviewer: EtherealElation
Date: 10/12/06 23:01
Chapter: The End

Ooh... Nice cliffhanger for a first chapter... Marvelous. I love how the story involves one of our favorite present characters with one of (my) favorite past characters... Or at least, Tom's interesting.


On to Chapter 2, then!


~Juli

Reviewer: aintcrazy4you
Date: 10/12/06 22:41
Chapter: Pieces of Agony

OOOHHH......I can't wait till the next one! ^^

Reviewer: stargazer7659
Date: 10/12/06 22:35
Chapter: Pieces of Agony

AWESOME!!!! I loved your story since i started reading it. Truly captivating.

Reviewer: WeaslyPunkPrincess
Date: 10/12/06 22:30
Chapter: Pieces of Agony

I must tell you that I live for this story, and I am following it with every ounce of strength. I love your work so much!

Reviewer: xflinty
Date: 10/12/06 14:58
Chapter: Price of Immortality

My goodness. You don't know how happy I feel. This fan fiction is - by far - one of the best fan fictions I've ever read. I always knew that Tom Riddle had a soft side to him - you protrayed it really well. Thanks for such an enjoyable read. I can't wait for the following chapters.

Reviewer: AliKt716
Date: 10/12/06 14:58
Chapter: Pieces of Agony

AURGH! I absolutely, positively HATE ACCESS DENIED! I got 3 (3!) e-mails saying that it's been updated, but NO!

~AliKt716~

P.S.~ Can't wait for the mods to get done! :-)

Reviewer: MargretKelley
Date: 10/12/06 10:21
Chapter: Pieces of Agony

AHH!!! I've gotten 3 e-mails so far that this has been updated, only to find I can't read it!!! I really like this story and I wish they would validate it already!!!

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