Reviews For Take My Heart Away
Reviewer: Emily_the_Poet
Date: 10/20/06 19:48
Chapter: Price of Immortality

You did a wonderful Job of portraying Malfoy. Just the right mix of cruelty and coldness I would expect in a junior death eater and a malfoy. It gave me shivers. Perticularly in the circle. You did a wonderful job showing how torn RIddle was as well. The emotions were just right for something so dark.

Reviewer: LovelyxLena
Date: 10/19/06 22:01
Chapter: Pieces of Agony

When are you going to post more?

Not that I am trying to rush your creative process.. BUT I'M DYING HERE!

Reviewer: Karamel_Kisses
Date: 10/19/06 20:33
Chapter: Pieces of Agony

BEAUTIFULLL...with each chapter you writing gets better and better ...same with the plot!!

Reviewer: DarkHarryPotterGirl
Date: 10/18/06 18:59
Chapter: Pieces of Agony

Hey this story is very good. It's perfect. Theres not much TM/HG stories and I like them. So far this is the best one I have read.

Reviewer: mia_prefect44
Date: 10/18/06 17:18
Chapter: Pieces of Agony

wow this story is getting really good!!!! i have been reading sinse you started and it just keeps getting better!!! I cant wait for next chapter!!!

Reviewer: Witch Writer
Date: 10/17/06 19:20
Chapter: Pieces of Agony

This is so amazing!!! I love this story, it is my absolute favorite that I've read so far. You are a very talented writer. The way you can capture the feelings between Hermione and Tom, your descriptions, how the plot line flows... All in all, fantastic job. :)

And thank you for your review a long time ago, it was so nice of you. It's people like you that inspire others to write. Keep writing, great work, and update soon please!!!

Reviewer: fuckmeimdead
Date: 10/16/06 21:06
Chapter: Pieces of Agony

OOOOOooooo baby, soo sweet. Thanks for that!

Reviewer: xMeTtAlLiCAnGeLx
Date: 10/16/06 20:12
Chapter: Pieces of Agony

Awe, this chappie was so sad! I loved it though, and I'm proud of you for writing it so quick! Ooh, she tells him her name? Write with speed and grace, because I can't wait!

Reviewer: alzheartu
Date: 10/16/06 16:17
Chapter: Pieces of Agony

OMG
AHHHHHHHH
you need...NEED to post the next chapter soon. you can't jsut leave us at that point. pleeease. this chapter was so good!

Reviewer: dirty_little_secret
Date: 10/16/06 12:58
Chapter: Pieces of Agony

i frickin love it!!! i cant wait till the next chapter im like bouncing off the walls with anticipation!!

Reviewer: doofus
Date: 10/16/06 5:07
Chapter: Pieces of Agony

plzzz post the next chapter quick

Reviewer: Jasmine Potter
Date: 10/14/06 20:51
Chapter: Pieces of Agony

ha ha Riddle meets his match way to go Hermione :)
can't wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: Silver Fox
Date: 10/14/06 12:33
Chapter: Pieces of Agony

Wow ... that was good...
please update quikly!!!

Reviewer: Hermione_Rocks
Date: 10/14/06 10:57
Chapter: Pieces of Agony

Wow...I have no idea how you are going to end this. But I'm sure it'll be great, as you have so far passed my expectations for this story...wonderful job!

Reviewer: draco_slytherin
Date: 10/14/06 7:54
Chapter: Pieces of Agony

I love how the story is going. It has a kind of spooky elegance that is really enchanting. I'll be looking forward to the rest of it. Hope you update soon.

Reviewer: LB_JD
Date: 10/13/06 23:05
Chapter: Pieces of Agony

Excellent! Please keep writing, I love this story! The story line is so unique and it's very well written.

Reviewer: inklove
Date: 10/13/06 21:52
Chapter: Pieces of Agony

i really loved this chapter! you know hermoine and tom won't get together (even tho u really want it 2 happen), so i think the readers are really captivated to know what's going to happen... so tom has finally met his match, but moine is gonna tell him her real name?! please update immediately! :)

Reviewer: inklove
Date: 10/13/06 21:51
Chapter: Pieces of Agony

i really loved this chapter! you know hermoine and tom won't get together (even tho u really want it 2 happen), so i think the readers are really captivated to know what's going to happen... so tom has finally met his match, but moine is gonna tell him her real name?! please update immediately! :)

Reviewer: Valentinia
Date: 10/13/06 20:16
Chapter: Pieces of Agony

Why did you end it there? Why? *over-dramatic cry* Anyway... good chapter! As usual the imagery and the descriptions (especially of the feelings) are great. I hope time does change and everything ends happily!! *doubts it* Can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: Green Eyes
Date: 10/13/06 17:32
Chapter: Pieces of Agony

Very nice! A little short, but it's all good! :D Excellent work. Yeah Hermione, you show him! Man, it is hard to figure out your feelings when you are a teenager going through horomone changes. Heck, it is even harder to figure things out when you are Tom Riddle falling in love. Aw... ;) lol GREAT STORY, you rock! :P

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