Reviews For Take My Heart Away
Reviewer: Magical Pixie Horse
Date: 11/03/06 19:03
Chapter: See You Cry

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS STORY JUST KEEPS GETTING BETTER AND BETTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LMPH3

Reviewer: MrsRuebeusHagridDursley
Date: 11/03/06 18:15
Chapter: See You Cry

Yay! An update! This was a very good chapter, it's making think that perhaps Hermione [b]can[/b] pull this off!

Reviewer: Valentinia
Date: 11/03/06 18:01
Chapter: See You Cry

Wow. I like how you write Tom in a poetic, but believeable way. As usual, the characters (well, those few that aren't oc's) were perfectly IC, and the chapter was very well written. I hope this story ends happily and can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: elementalenchantress
Date: 11/03/06 17:09
Chapter: See You Cry

Congratulations for winning the best angst story! Keep it up!

Reviewer: PinkMonkey
Date: 11/03/06 15:29
Chapter: See You Cry

wow this story is amazing! at first i was sceptical about the relationship but the way you've written it and portrayed riddle and hermione makes it totally believable. i can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: MaggieMcGonagall
Date: 11/03/06 15:22
Chapter: See You Cry

Finish quickly! It's a very good story.

Reviewer: black_ink
Date: 11/03/06 14:55
Chapter: See You Cry

That was beautiful. That's how I would desribe it. I can't wait to read the next chapter!! ~Sara

Reviewer: HPlover1202
Date: 11/03/06 12:47
Chapter: See You Cry

this is one of the best stories I've read on here yet, and thats saying something because I'm a big reader but not much of a writer so I dive into as many stories as possible on MNFF. I get so excited everytime you post another chapter. I know where I want the story to go, though I could never write with such creativity and would never dream of telling you the ending I'm hoping for because its your story and I'm sure no matter what you do with it it will be amazing.

Reviewer: dramaqueen88
Date: 11/03/06 12:36
Chapter: See You Cry

OMG! This is soooooooooo good! Please post the next chapter fast!

Reviewer: DarkHarryPotterGirl
Date: 11/03/06 12:22
Chapter: See You Cry

It is perfect. I love the way you write. This story is just magnificent. Do hurry with the next chapter.

Reviewer: SweetStar
Date: 11/03/06 12:20
Chapter: See You Cry

oh wow..
please continue!!!

Reviewer: Amortentia_18
Date: 11/03/06 11:31
Chapter: See You Cry

amazing chapter!!! loved it!

Reviewer: Scheherazade
Date: 11/03/06 0:23
Chapter: Pieces of Agony

I can't believe I had forgotten to review this chapter. My bad. I love how you capture their emotions so well in this chapter and in the overall story. I'm going to read the next chapter in a bit...

Reviewer: Elora Dannon
Date: 11/02/06 23:34
Chapter: See You Cry

Nice! Hermione seems to be in neck deep now, I can't wait to see how it turns out! Looking forward to the next post.

Reviewer: LovelyxLena
Date: 11/02/06 22:56
Chapter: See You Cry

Okay last one for tonight. I re-read your first chapter and you said that you had already written everything so updates would come quick. Why did this one take so long? We're all impatient (if I may speak for all your readers).

Fabulous story, just had to tell you again.

Reviewer: mia_prefect44
Date: 11/02/06 22:41
Chapter: See You Cry

omg this is getting so amazing!!!! i check this like everyday hoping for an update!!!!

Reviewer: moonwalker
Date: 11/02/06 22:27
Chapter: See You Cry

i have to say that you write beautifully...i don't know if I've told you this before, but you write situations when the guy and the girl get together without making it seem cliche as others do; it's refreshing and i look forward to your updates.

Reviewer: LovelyxLena
Date: 11/02/06 22:11
Chapter: See You Cry

A sound kept getting couaght in my throat as I read this. I have waited so long for this (as has everyone else). Sheesh you're a great writer. She told him her name. He knows she is Hermione. They are so tragic. Nothing good can come of this, nothing at all. How will all of this end? Oh my..

Reviewer: LovelyxLena
Date: 11/02/06 21:58
Chapter: See You Cry

OH YES!! I CAN READ IT NOW!

screw studying!!

Reviewer: QuidditchCutie
Date: 11/02/06 21:51
Chapter: See You Cry

Wow...when I was reading that, I melted (which might sound weird but whatever). The line "Please Don't Cry. It's killing me."- That was so good. I almost cried. And his whole speech about her...loved it! I love that you kept Tom Riddle in character while he's changing subtly. I'm so glad he didn't just wake up one day and be Mr Sunshine because he's falling for Hermione.
UPDATE SOON! "Please don't wait. It's killing me." haha

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