Wow. I like how you write Tom in a poetic, but believeable way. As usual, the characters (well, those few that aren't oc's) were perfectly IC, and the chapter was very well written. I hope this story ends happily and can't wait for the next update!
Congratulations for winning the best angst story! Keep it up!
wow this story is amazing! at first i was sceptical about the relationship but the way you've written it and portrayed riddle and hermione makes it totally believable. i can't wait to read more.
Finish quickly! It's a very good story.
That was beautiful. That's how I would desribe it. I can't wait to read the next chapter!! ~Sara
this is one of the best stories I've read on here yet, and thats saying something because I'm a big reader but not much of a writer so I dive into as many stories as possible on MNFF. I get so excited everytime you post another chapter. I know where I want the story to go, though I could never write with such creativity and would never dream of telling you the ending I'm hoping for because its your story and I'm sure no matter what you do with it it will be amazing.
OMG! This is soooooooooo good! Please post the next chapter fast!
It is perfect. I love the way you write. This story is just magnificent. Do hurry with the next chapter.
amazing chapter!!! loved it!
I can't believe I had forgotten to review this chapter. My bad. I love how you capture their emotions so well in this chapter and in the overall story. I'm going to read the next chapter in a bit...
Nice! Hermione seems to be in neck deep now, I can't wait to see how it turns out! Looking forward to the next post.
Okay last one for tonight. I re-read your first chapter and you said that you had already written everything so updates would come quick. Why did this one take so long? We're all impatient (if I may speak for all your readers).
Fabulous story, just had to tell you again.
omg this is getting so amazing!!!! i check this like everyday hoping for an update!!!!
i have to say that you write beautifully...i don't know if I've told you this before, but you write situations when the guy and the girl get together without making it seem cliche as others do; it's refreshing and i look forward to your updates.
A sound kept getting couaght in my throat as I read this. I have waited so long for this (as has everyone else). Sheesh you're a great writer. She told him her name. He knows she is Hermione. They are so tragic. Nothing good can come of this, nothing at all. How will all of this end? Oh my..
OH YES!! I CAN READ IT NOW!
Wow...when I was reading that, I melted (which might sound weird but whatever). The line "Please Don't Cry. It's killing me."- That was so good. I almost cried. And his whole speech about her...loved it! I love that you kept Tom Riddle in character while he's changing subtly. I'm so glad he didn't just wake up one day and be Mr Sunshine because he's falling for Hermione.
UPDATE SOON! "Please don't wait. It's killing me." haha
OMG, this story is SOOOOO good. I can't stop reading it. The problem is that my computer won't let me read the last chapter. Would it be possible for you to send it to me over email?
Here's my address: firstname.lastname@example.org.
Keep up the good work!
OMB I LOVE YOU you are soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo(should i ad more o's...no thats enough) good i love this story and i love you wow hermione and tom.......beautiful I LOVE THIS STORY