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Name: Potter_freak0515 (Signed) · Date: 11/13/06 23:20 · For: Worst Nightmare
Oh god. Tom's right. You can't change time. It would create a paradox. If he became good and stuff, Hermione would never have had a chance to go back in time. I know that there have been paradoxes in the HP series before (Harry casting the Patronus in PoA), but this is a bigger paradox that is definitely impossible. It's not going to work. Tom is still going to be evil. But I want to know how it happens, so please update soon!


Name: Hermione_Rocks (Signed) · Date: 11/13/06 22:38 · For: Worst Nightmare
Amazing. I really hope you give these two the (at least somewhat) happy ending so many of us are praying for. :)


Name: Starmom (Signed) · Date: 11/13/06 22:30 · For: Worst Nightmare
Ah! The link finally works! Yay!

Oh.. time travel and the maze it weaves... "the flaw in her plan". I can't wait to see how you unravel all this!!



Name: mugglemommy (Signed) · Date: 11/13/06 22:05 · For: Worst Nightmare
Post again! I see why you won the award!


Name: LovelyxLena (Anonymous) · Date: 11/13/06 22:04 · For: Worst Nightmare
True love does not conquer all. This entire plan is doomed. Oh my I sound like Trelawney. I still firmly believe she should have killed Tom in the Infirmery. The way you had Tom talk abotu time is the same way I think abou time. It's creepy. Now I want to read more. I wonder what Hermione's plan is..


Name: black_ink (Signed) · Date: 11/13/06 21:51 · For: Worst Nightmare
Marvelous!!! I absolutely loved it!!! ~Sara


Name: Scheherazade (Signed) · Date: 11/13/06 21:49 · For: Worst Nightmare
Out of all the chapters, I think that one was my absolute favorite.

If you ever decide to post this story else where, there's a large Tom/Hermione community here: http://community.livejournal.com/lv_hg_betrayal

I hope to see you there. :-)


Name: MissSammiekins (Signed) · Date: 11/13/06 21:49 · For: Worst Nightmare
Just wanted to let you know that this is one of my favorite stories ever! You really got me into the whole Voldemort/Hermione thing, even though, truthfully, I don't like it all that much.
I have a guess about what might happen...when Hermione goes back to the future...is that why Tom really turns evil? Because he lost the love of his life? If that is what happens, it's so sad!! I hope it doesn't happen, but with my limited knowledge of your plans for the story, it's all I can think of at the moment. I can't wait for the next chapter!
~Sammie


Name: Scheherazade (Signed) · Date: 11/13/06 21:34 · For: See You Cry
Great chapter. You showed Tom having true, human emotions all while keeping him in character. I'm really envious how you are able to do so. :-)


Name: Opaque (Signed) · Date: 11/13/06 21:32 · For: Worst Nightmare
That was.... that was beautiful! *breaks into hysterical sobs*
Really, really wonderful. Three thumbs up.
I have a feeling that this is going to have a sad ending, though. And that makes me sad. :( After all they've been through. Please?


Name: Magical Pixie Horse (Anonymous) · Date: 11/13/06 21:27 · For: Worst Nightmare
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm ssssooooo glad this chapter is finally up!!!!!!!!!!!! Please update soon!!!!!!!! I can't wait to find out what happens next! This story is definately my favorite besides the actual Harry Potter books!!!!!!

LMPH3


Name: AstroFire (Signed) · Date: 11/13/06 21:08 · For: Worst Nightmare
Ah, too short for my liking (that means that I like your story so much that I'd rather very lengthy chapters :) ). However, I understand that you have a plan traced for this story. Fate? No, it was your choice >.> Anyhow, great chapter! I really like your story, and I have thoroughly enjoyed it so far. Keep it up!


Name: LovelyxLena (Anonymous) · Date: 11/13/06 19:45 · For: Worst Nightmare
*sigh*


Name: proverb31thirty (Signed) · Date: 11/13/06 16:34 · For: See You Cry
Wonderful! Absolutely brilliant. I sat down at my computer today, bored and not knowing what to do...then I began reading your story. It's a completely different take on the same characters that we all know and love. I love how you have shown a completely different side of Voldemort and have made him capable of love. I can not wait to know what happens next and I encourage you to keep writing! You have such amazing talent! It's a remarkable story! It just pulls at my heart strings...and I find myself waiting very impatiently for the story to be finished!! It's lovely!


Name: LiaWitch20 (Signed) · Date: 11/13/06 14:59 · For: Worst Nightmare
Hell... ... Why do they take so long with the chapies?? !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I wanna read it!!


Name: beauxbatonsgirl (Signed) · Date: 11/13/06 11:16 · For: The End
I really am enjoying this story so far!!! Please don't take too long to update!!! It's a really cool idea, the whole hermione/riddle ship...original!


Name: the muslim DarkLord (Signed) · Date: 11/12/06 3:39 · For: Worst Nightmare
omgg i was full hyped over it OMG OMG next chapter, but you cant read it....(sighs)


Name: endlessfatality (Signed) · Date: 11/11/06 22:20 · For: See You Cry
I love you! Pleaase update! fast! I'll kidnap the admin if you like, so it'll be validated fast!


Name: obsessedhpchick (Signed) · Date: 11/11/06 22:10 · For: See You Cry
ahhhh!!

soo beautiful!!... eeeeek great great GREAT story...

fo sho.. lol (i don't say that in real life)...

n e who.. LOVE IT.!!

-your fan-


Name: dramaqueen88 (Signed) · Date: 11/11/06 21:26 · For: Worst Nightmare
I was so excited to see that you finally updated, but sad that I can't view it yet.


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