Ah! The link finally works! Yay!
Oh.. time travel and the maze it weaves... "the flaw in her plan". I can't wait to see how you unravel all this!!
Post again! I see why you won the award!
True love does not conquer all. This entire plan is doomed. Oh my I sound like Trelawney. I still firmly believe she should have killed Tom in the Infirmery. The way you had Tom talk abotu time is the same way I think abou time. It's creepy. Now I want to read more. I wonder what Hermione's plan is..
Marvelous!!! I absolutely loved it!!! ~Sara
Out of all the chapters, I think that one was my absolute favorite.
If you ever decide to post this story else where, there's a large Tom/Hermione community here: http://community.livejournal.com/lv_hg_betrayal
I hope to see you there. :-)
Just wanted to let you know that this is one of my favorite stories ever! You really got me into the whole Voldemort/Hermione thing, even though, truthfully, I don't like it all that much.
I have a guess about what might happen...when Hermione goes back to the future...is that why Tom really turns evil? Because he lost the love of his life? If that is what happens, it's so sad!! I hope it doesn't happen, but with my limited knowledge of your plans for the story, it's all I can think of at the moment. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Great chapter. You showed Tom having true, human emotions all while keeping him in character. I'm really envious how you are able to do so. :-)
That was.... that was beautiful! *breaks into hysterical sobs*
Really, really wonderful. Three thumbs up.
I have a feeling that this is going to have a sad ending, though. And that makes me sad. :( After all they've been through. Please?
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm ssssooooo glad this chapter is finally up!!!!!!!!!!!! Please update soon!!!!!!!! I can't wait to find out what happens next! This story is definately my favorite besides the actual Harry Potter books!!!!!!
Ah, too short for my liking (that means that I like your story so much that I'd rather very lengthy chapters :) ). However, I understand that you have a plan traced for this story. Fate? No, it was your choice >.> Anyhow, great chapter! I really like your story, and I have thoroughly enjoyed it so far. Keep it up!
Wonderful! Absolutely brilliant. I sat down at my computer today, bored and not knowing what to do...then I began reading your story. It's a completely different take on the same characters that we all know and love. I love how you have shown a completely different side of Voldemort and have made him capable of love. I can not wait to know what happens next and I encourage you to keep writing! You have such amazing talent! It's a remarkable story! It just pulls at my heart strings...and I find myself waiting very impatiently for the story to be finished!! It's lovely!
Hell... ¬¬... Why do they take so long with the chapies?? !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I wanna read it!!
I really am enjoying this story so far!!! Please don't take too long to update!!! It's a really cool idea, the whole hermione/riddle ship...original!
omgg i was full hyped over it OMG OMG next chapter, but you cant read it....(sighs)
I love you! Pleaase update! fast! I'll kidnap the admin if you like, so it'll be validated fast!
soo beautiful!!... eeeeek great great GREAT story...
fo sho.. lol (i don't say that in real life)...
n e who.. LOVE IT.!!
I was so excited to see that you finally updated, but sad that I can't view it yet.
Haha I'm first, not third =).
This shows my dedication to your story!
I check everyday