Reviews For Take My Heart Away
Reviewer: sister
Date: 11/21/06 19:50
Chapter: Price of Immortality

yes! i knew he had it in him!

Reviewer: sister
Date: 11/21/06 8:51
Chapter: Empty Space

you make this inconceivable idea irresistable!

Reviewer: sister
Date: 11/20/06 22:09
Chapter: Helen Nestowe of Germany

refreshingly, ominously creative...

Reviewer: EtherealElation
Date: 11/20/06 0:34
Chapter: Worst Nightmare

Awww, how sweet!

Loved this chapter, too... It brings up a lot of questions, but you've moved your characters along spectacularly... I love how grown up Hermione seems, how elegant Tom is becoming, and how Malfoys are... Always Malfoys. xD Great one, again!


Reviewer: rbcarr
Date: 11/19/06 18:45
Chapter: Worst Nightmare

Very mature writing, and lovely analogies! I especially liked: "Like a golden pearl sinking slowly under the murky water of the sea, Dumbledore watched the sun drop below the horizon.", Chapter 17. The vocabulary, the plot ideas, and even the character development is very professional. This story has been written better than some published materials I've read. There are some typos, but that is easily fixed. What I really like about this story is how you don't rush into ideas. Most writers don't have enough discipline to completely formulate their thoughts in their haste to write it down. I've read many books in my life, and this one is very mature and real! Mary Higgins Clark's characters seem shallow and underdeveloped compared to yours. There are some literary discrepancies scattered throughout the chapters, but overall - nice work.

Reviewer: imperfecthermione
Date: 11/19/06 1:50
Chapter: Worst Nightmare

THIS IS SO GOOD! I love this fic! Waiting for the next chapter is going to be torture! What is the glitch???? How will you make time work?

Reviewer: firehawk905
Date: 11/18/06 23:12
Chapter: Worst Nightmare

First of all, wow! that story was amazing. Though, after the flashback thing where Hermione saw a glimpse of the future in the woods, I had a feeling that That would keep happening and so Eventually she would end up staying in the future and Voldemort would kill her, because he turned into Voldemort after she had left him. I dunno...its an amazing story

Reviewer: FrankieHart13
Date: 11/18/06 15:49
Chapter: Worst Nightmare

YAY you updated!!! so far so good, i really want to know how its gonna end! im so excited!

Reviewer: MrsRuebeusHagridDursley
Date: 11/18/06 14:51
Chapter: Worst Nightmare

Wow The words you used in that chapter were really powerful. This is great writing.

Reviewer: Canary Cream
Date: 11/18/06 12:33
Chapter: Worst Nightmare

How romantic! This is my absolute favorite story! I usually don't re-read stories, but I find myself coming back to yours over & over again! I love the creative plot, the depth of Tom & Hermione's characters, the way you switch between their points of view, the vivid vignettes that you paint with words in a way that I can only dream of writing, the uncertainty that weaves throughout the story until the very end... absolutely breathtaking! You have such a gift for writing! I don't understand what the flaw is, though. Thank you for posting your story!

Reviewer: obsessedhpchick
Date: 11/18/06 10:19
Chapter: Worst Nightmare

AHH!! haha... i LOVE this story..

i no i've said this before but i LOVED this chapter and the ending oh my goodness!!... i can't wait for the next chapter!!

love ya...
-your fan-

Reviewer: Gwendolyn Marie
Date: 11/17/06 23:53
Chapter: Worst Nightmare

this is just SO great!!!!
I can barely hold it in.....I don't know how I'll survive until the next chapter!!!!

Reviewer: endlessfatality
Date: 11/17/06 22:12
Chapter: Worst Nightmare

Oh please update really fast!! pleeease!

Reviewer: Pandora London
Date: 11/17/06 18:22
Chapter: Worst Nightmare

My dear, talented Hatusu, please tell me this is not the end? I need to know what happens, and I need to keep reading. Please, don't "leave the story open for interpretation! You're too good a writer, thisisi too good a story, and Tom Riddle is too good looking a guy:D!!!!!

Reviewer: sirPatrick
Date: 11/17/06 12:45
Chapter: Worst Nightmare

I really don't hope this was the end?! It's really beutiful writing, I'm jealous actually...continue what you're doing, it's great!

Reviewer: dirty_little_secret
Date: 11/16/06 20:33
Chapter: Worst Nightmare

beautiful writing.. I love the way your words play on eachother.... This story is amazing

Reviewer: xx528
Date: 11/16/06 16:01
Chapter: Worst Nightmare

is there somewhere else where this story is completed??

Reviewer: embem
Date: 11/16/06 8:36
Chapter: Worst Nightmare

I have just read all 17 chapters together, and your fan fiction is certainly one of the best i've ever read. You manage to give such detail without the story being boring, and you really make the reader understand people's feelings. The story is very original, yet not ridiculous like i would expect hermione/voldy fanfics to be. And just for a couple of seconds when i was reading this, i forgot this was just fanfiction. I can give you no higher praise than that! Well done, and keep up the good work with this fantastic story.

Reviewer: Green Eyes
Date: 11/15/06 18:13
Chapter: Worst Nightmare

That was absolutely amazing! I must say: you are an EXTREMEMLY talented writer. GOOD WORK! (Kepp it up. =D) Every chapter is better than the last, but I thought that the first chapter was great.... so go figure! YOU ROCK... and you story too ;) Seriously, if you used different characters, you could honestly publish a book, because I know that I would buy it! Thanks alot for the good read! :) --Cassie*

Reviewer: MrsGinevraPotter
Date: 11/15/06 17:54
Chapter: Worst Nightmare


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