Oh my gosh! I just read the last two chapters on fanfiction.net! It was beautiful! I was crying so much I had to go and wake up my boyfriend just because it was so beautiful! Great job! Oh I'm still crying.
I want to read it so bad! I got so excited when I got the email saying that you updated, but I can't read it. *sad*
Author's Response: That's strange... I can see it on my computer and it says it's been validated, but no one else seems to be able to read it. Hmm... if it's not readable in a week, I'll send the mods an email.
That is so mean! They sent me an e-mail. Grrr.
I agree - this is insane! Perhaps the text got lost somewhere, or the admin staff don't know. Is there any way we can make sure it's actually in the validation process - email them, maybe?
borderline torture now. Seriously. LOL
Alright, this is officially hell. I want this chapter NOW!!
: )
he loved her and she loved him.
how is she going to kill him now??
omg i need 2 finish this
aaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwww, HE LUVS HER ,, THT IS SOOOO CUTE
all i can say is WOWWWW,,
this story is sooo adicting
u r doing great, i luv it, omg i HAVE to no wat happens next...
DUMBLDORE KNOWS,, yayyyyy! =D
he KISSED her OMFGGGGGGGG
luv the quote, luv the chapter, LUV THE STORY
What an outstanding beginning to a story. This is such a brilliant idea – to go back in time and try to stop Voldemort while he is still a child. I’ve heard great things about this fic and I’ve decided to take a stab at it myself and I assure you, I’m not yet disappointed.
The first thing I noticed is that you immediately started the fic in the action. I think that this is what fits this fic best. Another thing is that Ron wasn’t around when Harry and Hermione were talking about going back in time – I wonder, where was he? Was he dead? And what was the time frame between that conversation and the present.
Your descriptions are brilliant for a prologue. I could still imagine everything that was going on. You made time to describe a few things but not going into too much detail which would drag out the action and its pace – which I might add was perfect.
“You won’t fail, Harry. You can’t,” Hermione choked out.
“Dumbledore said ...”
“Dumbledore’s gone!” Harry cried out…
Usually in a dialogue that doesn’t include names, the speech alternates between the two people speaking. I see you have Hermione speaking in two consecutive lines instead of just in one line. I had to read that over to understand it.
Dreams are nothing but poison to the mind, he reminded himself sternly.
I absolutely love that you included this! When Riddle woke, he seemed, to me, like a real person – dreaming of a girl. But then when this thought crosses his mind, it is like Voldemort flashed through his heart for a second. You can see a bit of Voldemort in him. I like that a lot! :)
Great job, Maddy.
I agree with GreenMan or however the nick is (sorry), this looooong waiting is getting ridiculous!!!
But, what can i do? just WAIT!
Heeeeeellll!
i finished the story on fanfiction.net, and it was beautiful! so beautiful, i had to give you a review!
i LOVED your story!! the way everything connected, i cried inside...so sweet...
These waits are becoming riddikulus!
