OH MY GOODNESS!
Ok, so I went and read the last two chapters =)
I don't want to ruin the story for anyone else, but I do want to leave one final comment. Hatusu, that was an amazing story! The ending filled me with many emotions! Thoughout the whole story, I was excited to learn what happened next. It IS worth the wait! You give out great themes and lessons with each chapter. Just keep doing what you are doing, because it rocks!
LOVED the story! xox ;D
It wouldn't surprise me if one day you made it up there with Rowling! THANKS so much for the good read and for all of your time, Hatusu!
If you want to read the last two chapters go to fanfiction.net. I just finished reading them and I want to say to hatusu, in my opinion, you written one of the best love stories I have ever read. I bawled my eyes out when I read the last chapter and I respect you SO much for writing such a deep and beautiful story. It really touched me. :p PLEASE WRITE MORE>
Oh my gosh! I just read the last two chapters on fanfiction.net! It was beautiful! I was crying so much I had to go and wake up my boyfriend just because it was so beautiful! Great job! Oh I'm still crying.
I want to read it so bad! I got so excited when I got the email saying that you updated, but I can't read it. *sad*
Author's Response: That's strange... I can see it on my computer and it says it's been validated, but no one else seems to be able to read it. Hmm... if it's not readable in a week, I'll send the mods an email.
thats not very nice =[
That is so mean! They sent me an e-mail. Grrr.
I agree - this is insane! Perhaps the text got lost somewhere, or the admin staff don't know. Is there any way we can make sure it's actually in the validation process - email them, maybe?
borderline torture now. Seriously. LOL
Alright, this is officially hell. I want this chapter NOW!!
he loved her and she loved him.
how is she going to kill him now??
omg i need 2 finish this
aaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwww, HE LUVS HER ,, THT IS SOOOO CUTE
all i can say is WOWWWW,,
this story is sooo adicting
u r doing great, i luv it, omg i HAVE to no wat happens next...
DUMBLDORE KNOWS,, yayyyyy! =D
he KISSED her OMFGGGGGGGG
O M G
luv the quote, luv the chapter, LUV THE STORY
What an outstanding beginning to a story. This is such a brilliant idea – to go back in time and try to stop Voldemort while he is still a child. I’ve heard great things about this fic and I’ve decided to take a stab at it myself and I assure you, I’m not yet disappointed.
The first thing I noticed is that you immediately started the fic in the action. I think that this is what fits this fic best. Another thing is that Ron wasn’t around when Harry and Hermione were talking about going back in time – I wonder, where was he? Was he dead? And what was the time frame between that conversation and the present.
Your descriptions are brilliant for a prologue. I could still imagine everything that was going on. You made time to describe a few things but not going into too much detail which would drag out the action and its pace – which I might add was perfect.
“You won’t fail, Harry. You can’t,” Hermione choked out.
“Dumbledore said ...”
“Dumbledore’s gone!” Harry cried out…
Usually in a dialogue that doesn’t include names, the speech alternates between the two people speaking. I see you have Hermione speaking in two consecutive lines instead of just in one line. I had to read that over to understand it.
Dreams are nothing but poison to the mind, he reminded himself sternly.
I absolutely love that you included this! When Riddle woke, he seemed, to me, like a real person – dreaming of a girl. But then when this thought crosses his mind, it is like Voldemort flashed through his heart for a second. You can see a bit of Voldemort in him. I like that a lot! :)
Great job, Maddy.
I agree with GreenMan or however the nick is (sorry), this looooong waiting is getting ridiculous!!!
But, what can i do? just WAIT!
i finished the story on fanfiction.net, and it was beautiful! so beautiful, i had to give you a review!
i LOVED your story!! the way everything connected, i cried inside...so sweet...