Reviews For Take My Heart Away
Reviewer: WeaslyPunkPrincess
Date: 12/17/06 20:17
Chapter: Black Rose

There are absolutly no words to describe this story. I have feverently followed it since day one, and can honestly say you are the greatest writer in this entire place. I'm sorry for being a bit cliche, but it truly took my heart away.

Reviewer: this isnt jess
Date: 12/17/06 20:14
Chapter: Black Rose

I added this story to my favorites quite a while ago... and I just got an email saying it was updated. I hadn't been on MNFF in a while but I just reread this whole story, beginning to end, and it was wonderful... you're such a good writer! You really know how to make the reader imagine what's going on perfectly... it was so sad and so beautiful and I can't wait for the epilogue to come out! I need to know what happens! =)

Reviewer: black_ink
Date: 12/17/06 20:08
Chapter: Black Rose

You are brilliant!! I wish I wrote like you!! You are amazing and the story is amazing!! I'm sad its ending, but it was truly great!! ~Sara

Reviewer: Tweetyputty
Date: 12/17/06 19:12
Chapter: Black Rose

that's so sad! *sniff* it was so sweet

Reviewer: EtherealElation
Date: 12/17/06 17:34
Chapter: Black Rose


*breaths* That was utterly amazing. You kept me guessing until the last minute... I loved it.
Wish I could say more, but I seem to have become speechless with amazement.


Reviewer: Maearra
Date: 12/17/06 17:27
Chapter: Black Rose

I have been one of your "silent" readers up til now, but I can honestly say I've been waiting to review for a very long time now. However, I decided to wait until I had seen the finished product.
Astounding, imaginative, emotive, meaningful and beautiful, this fanfiction also contains an important moral, which i' m sure you can identify yourself. It has also kept me quite literally, on the edge of my seat since I started reading it, and every chapter has been as exceptional as the last, each containing it's own surprise and very unique idea. I also think that although you have ended Tom's life in what was inevitable, you have done the character justice, which I, (being that he's my favourite character, and that i write Tom fanfiction myself) fully admire. Simply wonderful! :)

Reviewer: SoL_leeks
Date: 12/17/06 15:37
Chapter: Black Rose

damn that was a crazy ending it all happened so fast i really liked the story u should keep writing

Reviewer: SweetStar
Date: 12/17/06 14:43
Chapter: Black Rose

ahhh seh left him, i actuall like the dude, cuz he was so caring!!!
cant wait for the epilogue. please
continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Hermione_Rocks
Date: 12/16/06 16:35
Chapter: Black Rose

I finally lost patience (as it seems many people here have been doing) and read the rest of your story on fan-fiction net. I won't spoil anything, but it was amazing. You have a beautiful style that's very poetic, in a way, and everything is just so captivating. The end wasn't at all what I expected either, but it was very well done. Excellent, that's really all that's left to say.

Reviewer: loonymagic
Date: 12/16/06 10:28
Chapter: Black Rose

i juz wanted 2 say.. urs was d 1st fanfic i read when i got hooked! i love ur story!!!! it got me in2 d whole bad boy gd gal thing n not 2 mention in2 d world of fanfic! .. lol.. soo keep on d gd work!!!! luv ur story!!!

Reviewer: Elora Dannon
Date: 12/15/06 5:17
Chapter: Black Rose

I just wanted to say I love your dark love story, and can't wait to see what is next. Boy this story is awesome!

Reviewer: Elora Dannon
Date: 12/14/06 13:03
Chapter: Black Rose

Ok, love it how they send e-mails that there has been an update to my favorites, but it would be awesome if there was a way not to do that until the story has been validated, grrrrrrrrr.

Reviewer: ankh
Date: 12/14/06 1:58
Chapter: Black Rose

the tears are still running down my face. i just read the last two chapters!!! OMG, that was awesome!! i loved it!!!

Reviewer: Potter_freak0515
Date: 12/13/06 19:26
Chapter: Black Rose

Ah! They've sent me at least three e-mails and every time I check, it hasn't been validated!

Reviewer: abbs866
Date: 12/13/06 18:07
Chapter: Black Rose

I love this story! My friend told me to read it and it was great! I'm going to right now to read the rest!

Reviewer: Daquan5000
Date: 12/13/06 15:14
Chapter: Black Rose

Thats the link for the chaper 17!

Enjoy *I Know I wIll*

Happy Holidays!

From me too you!

Reviewer: Shadolily
Date: 12/13/06 12:13
Chapter: Worst Nightmare

OMG I LOVE it!!!! it's so cute!! and so sad.*cries*

Reviewer: anjali_happy7
Date: 12/13/06 6:05
Chapter: Black Rose

hey i cant read the chapter here n whr is this in i cant find,,,plz ppl help me...

Reviewer: Only_Hope
Date: 12/13/06 1:46
Chapter: Black Rose

Amazing. I just decided - stuff waiting I'm going over to FanFiction and wow. I just love the way you written it all.. just amazing. ^__~

Reviewer: GreenMan1966
Date: 12/12/06 21:09
Chapter: Black Rose

Thanks for pointing me towards the remaining chapters! Very well written...

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