Reviews For Take My Heart Away
Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw
Date: 07/02/12 2:26
Chapter: Midnight Eyes

Ooh, this is getting good. You probably don't visit this website anymore, but I'm glad I clicked on your story about Regulus and then found this! It's really good!(:

Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw
Date: 07/02/12 2:13
Chapter: The End

Good so far!(:

Reviewer: DarkSunflower
Date: 04/28/11 20:17
Chapter: The Beginning

Good ending... Tragic, but very satisfying. It kid of gives you a new perspective on Voldemort. Never thought I'd say this, but... Poor guy!

Reviewer: MLLFiction
Date: 10/19/09 21:28
Chapter: The Beginning

Remarkable. I have no other words.

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 10/05/09 0:34
Chapter: The End

Hi, I just finished reading your story, 'Take My Heart Away', and I just want to tell you how much I enjoyed it. I've read two Tom Riddle stories before this one, the others were 'My Troubled Tyrant', by Belledeg, And 'Saving His Soul' by Mandy, over on
Yours is just wonderful, like Belledeg's tale. I'm now a big Tom Riddle fanfiction nut, and I hope there are more stories out there.
I knew Hermione would go back in time to be with Tom, because in a way, they are alot alike, academically.
He could have been a decent human being, if he only had love and compassion shown to him. He's only heartless and evil, because he grew up without the love of parents who would have adored him...His mother at least.
I felt bad for the boy, because of that.
But I'm rambling now! Thanks again for a great story!!
I apologize for not reading it sooner! Good luck with your next story! ;0)

Reviewer: ThatRomantic
Date: 09/29/09 5:13
Chapter: The Beginning

That was beautiful.

This is one of the best Tom/Hermione fics I've read.

I love it.


Reviewer: sonja_hearts_jaimee
Date: 08/21/09 19:59
Chapter: The Beginning

thats the best book i think ive ever read
you have an amazing talent

Reviewer: The_Dream_Team
Date: 03/30/09 23:55
Chapter: The Beginning

i am crying rite now as i rite this. That was so beautiful and twisted and it was an incredable story. I was so afraid that something like that would happen but im so happy i read it because it really made me think. it is so sad that kno1 knew that tom killed himself due 2 love. The wizarding world should kno the truth that even lord voldemort could love. Thank you for this amazin story! xoxo

Reviewer: HJaneWeasley
Date: 02/22/09 17:40
Chapter: The Beginning

wow. the characters were drawn so realistically, especially in the way tom drew back every time he grew close to hermione. i wish we had seen more of dumbledore, but honestly...this was so good. i stopped after i read the epilogue and just sat to soak in the brilliance :)

Reviewer: Salmantino7
Date: 02/18/09 15:48
Chapter: The Beginning

WHOA!!!! What a story!!!! this was a well written, well thought out story that just flew by as I read it wow, amazing.

Reviewer: Maitri Harys
Date: 02/17/09 10:23
Chapter: The Beginning

Hatusu, wherever you are, you deserve the loudest applause.
I've been gripped by the story so much, and I never expected the ending - to correctly say, the endings, of the final 2 chapters. It reduced me to tears. For once, Voldemort and Tom Riddle, Alter egos in one body, yet with the same fire shine differently as blind worm and an artist in the light you have shown them in. Hermione...... well, she was the one who impressed me a lot.... without her, neither Ron nor Harry could've come through everthing. It brought tears to y eyes when she died. It was right, yet unbearable...(sniff)

Reviewer: BooksandCleverness
Date: 02/17/09 3:23
Chapter: The End

Beautifully icy and excellently crafted.

Reviewer: ZomgShaylex
Date: 02/15/09 3:20
Chapter: The Beginning

What, that has got to be one of the most abstract, far-fetched, amazing stories I have ever read. I loved every second of it!

Reviewer: brighterer
Date: 02/13/09 6:52
Chapter: The Beginning

I just read your story in one go and I have to say, that was simply breathtaking! I LOVE the plotline and I think the ending was perfect (albeit heartbreaking). I'm a fan

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 01/20/09 14:53
Chapter: The End

ooh! now i'm interested!

Its great but I kinda thought that it went by reall quickly :)

Reviewer: Nez
Date: 01/03/09 21:22
Chapter: The Beginning


I just read this story in one go and it is so AMAZING. I bow to your awesomeness. Consider this like 19 enthusiastic reviews. I was too into the story to review each chapter.

Tom and Hermione were beautifully developed. The plot was just great and the dialogue was brilliant.

Right now I'm crying my eyes out; this last chapter was the saddest thing ever. It was a logical end that fits with my views of time travel, but it was so so sooo sad. You actually made Tom a likable enough character and even kept some of him in Voldemort. This story takes my heart away and breaks it. Great, great job.

Reviewer: jaejae_jurate9533
Date: 11/26/08 9:38
Chapter: The Beginning

OMG!!! I'm crying my heart out and this is the best story i have EVER ever EVER read in my whole life!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: jaejae_jurate9533
Date: 11/21/08 15:28
Chapter: Of All People


Reviewer: jaejae_jurate9533
Date: 11/21/08 15:15
Chapter: Midnight Eyes

Wow, I really must say so, I loved this! It was very well written and you capture everything perfectly!!! Can't wait to read the rest!!

Reviewer: jaejae_jurate9533
Date: 11/21/08 15:06
Chapter: The End

Oh my, what a start! I live it, and this is not the first time I'm reading this story either. I love it!!

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