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Name: CyanaWhite (Signed) · Date: 01/09/07 19:30 · For: Black Rose
Please please please update soon. I remember reading this story a few months ago and just found it again recently. It is such a great and original plot line. It's worth repeating: PLEASE UPDATE!

Name: fuckmeimdead (Anonymous) · Date: 01/08/07 1:45 · For: The End
This can't be the end. Please. Tell me the green light from something else.

Either that of that he realised that it was HIM, who killed Hermyownninny at the last minute, got so upset and turned the wand against himself! So that they will live happily ever after in Hell. Or something like that.


Name: fuckmeimdead (Anonymous) · Date: 01/08/07 1:44 · For: The End
This can't be the end. Please. Tell me the green light from something else.

Either that of that he realised that it was HIM, who killed Hermyownninny at the last minute, got so upset and turned the wand against himself! So that they will live happily ever after in Hell. Or something like that.


Name: magicalcadence (Anonymous) · Date: 01/07/07 11:32 · For: Black Rose
I'm not going to lie - I LOVE this story. I'm sad that it's ending...and that Tom and Hermione couldn't be together. But true love never quite works out, does it? No. Real life is not like the movies. And THAT is why this story is so believable. In Harry Potter's universe, I mean.

haha nice job. I hope to see more work from you.

Name: real_life (Signed) · Date: 01/06/07 15:53 · For: Black Rose
Next chapter, pleeeeeeease!
We're suffering here, this can't be the end..

Name: Pottergirl (Signed) · Date: 01/03/07 20:15 · For: Black Rose
Yes, I just reviewed, but PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE let hermione live!!! Maybe Tom sees her right before the end, and kills himself instead of her, then none of the horrid stuff happens, like Harry and Ron come back, and so does Dumbledore and Sirius and Cedric and Lily and James and everyone else. PLEASE, I BEG YOU!!!!!!!!!

Name: Pottergirl (Signed) · Date: 01/03/07 20:10 · For: Black Rose
Here was a boy who had gone from having a frozen heart to lacking a heart all together, from being afraid of love to being incapable of love.

Here was a man who had discovered hope and joy and laughter, only to have lost it in the span of a heartbeat.

Here was a human who had become inhuman, whose soul was scarred so badly that he would never again think twice about murdering or torturing or destroying.

So rose the Great Lord Voldemort.

Yeah, but what Tom doesn't know is that it was HIMSELF that kills Hermione, and not some blockhead from the future.

This was really upsetting for me:

Though their love would inevitably destroy countless thousands, Hermione refused to believe that love in itself was wrong. She refused to believe that love as a principle was unethical, though it would take Tom to the point of no return. In that moment, their love was unstoppable. She never let go of him.

They were as close as two people could be, yet were separated by decade upon decade, by choice and destiny, by light and dark. And even as Tom held her to him, breathing in the smell of her hair and savoring the touch of her skin, even as he loved her with all of his heart, she was slipping away. Her image flickered like a candle in the wind, and for a moment she was in neither future nor past. Then Tom watched her eyes widen, as if seeing a danger that was not there, and then came a flash of green light, and a cold laugh that sounded vaguely familiar to Tom.

And then, she was gone.

I almost cried right there. I couldn't believe it, when Hermione left Tom, I couldn't.

Tom did not know exactly how he found himself in Dumbledore’s office a few hours later. Perhaps it was the fact that Dumbledore was the only man in the world that would possibly have any idea what had happened to her.

“Mr. Riddle . . . you say you saw her disappear with a flash of green light, and you heard laughter?”

“Yes,” Tom said blankly. The black hole where his heart had once been had sucked him into an empty shell. Nothing remained.

“Then I fear that the worst occurred. You may be surprised to find out that Miss Nestowe was a time traveler, Mr. Riddle. She was from the future.”

Tom’s head came slowly up at this. The future? How is it possible?

Dumbledore continued, “I’m sure you’ve learned from your studies that nothing like this has ever occurred. I believe that she was blasted into the future unexpectedly, and the flash of green light represented the Killing Curse. I theorize someone murdered her in the future, Mr. Riddle. I do not know who it was, or why, but from your evidence we can discern that she is dead.”


The word rang through Tom’s hollow brain like a gong sounding. He recalled that there was something disconcerting about the laugh that he had heard, something chilling and haunting and unusual, though he could put his finger on what it was.

Dumbledore sighed. “I wish that there was a way to prevent her murder, but . . . it is not wise to meddle in the dealings of time.” He paused there, contemplating. “I regret not taking the time to interrogate her more persistently.”


Someone murdered her, Tom thought blankly.

Sad way to end it, don't you think? 10/10

Name: glowingoblin (Signed) · Date: 01/02/07 14:59 · For: Black Rose
This fic was AMAZING!! I loved how it turned out and, i just loved everything about it. Even though at the end it was very sad, I still loved it!

Name: HarryplusLuna (Signed) · Date: 12/31/06 21:05 · For: Empty Space
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SHE. KISSED. VOLDEMORT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
-faints dead away-
-wakes up days later in fits of laughter-
Wow, when my friends hear wind of THIS...

Name: s3xylicious (Signed) · Date: 12/29/06 21:29 · For: Black Rose
That was breathtaking! I absolutely enjoyed the fic; it seemed extremely realistic and just wow. I doubt caps lock could express my fangilry joy but you definitely deserve a standing ovation. =)

Name: fire_cookie (Signed) · Date: 12/28/06 9:09 · For: Black Rose
WOW. That was [i]amazing[/i]. I never imaginied that the story would turn out like that, but I love it. In the end everything made sense, and the amount of thought you must have put into the story is incredible. This story is probably the most well written story I have ever read on MNFF. Good job =)


Name: tickled_pink (Signed) · Date: 12/28/06 7:01 · For: Black Rose
This chapter is beautifully written, and so sad!!!! Very poetic, which worked really well!

~Tickled Pink~

Name: GredandFeorge4ever (Signed) · Date: 12/25/06 21:02 · For: Black Rose
your story is amazing...i dont know what else to say!!

Name: Elora Dannon (Signed) · Date: 12/24/06 10:00 · For: Black Rose
I love the twist, that she was the real cause of the distruction of Tom Riddle. Love is a dangerous thing. Although, I don't know if everyone agrees with me, I secertly wanted them together, but as you say "time waits for no one", so it wasn't ment to be,......(tears up)....so sad.

Name: relichunter18 (Signed) · Date: 12/23/06 1:11 · For: Black Rose
Pleasepleaseplease add another chapter where he recognizes her at the very end and there's the whole history-changing-bloody-nose-thing like on the Butterfly Effect and he's an amazingly handsome guy again and he doesn't really kill her friends and James and Lilly and them are all still alive. But don't DO THIS!!! (Amazing story- agonizing, beautiful, tear your heart out and cry, but amazing.)

Name: real_life (Signed) · Date: 12/22/06 6:11 · For: Black Rose
Wow. Wow. Wow. All I can say.

Name: Voldys_MyHomeBoyy_ (Signed) · Date: 12/20/06 21:21 · For: Black Rose
omggggggggggggosherssss, wat a great and sad chapter =/

Name: christian0girl0 (Signed) · Date: 12/20/06 21:08 · For: Black Rose
bravo bravo!! i loved it. awesome ending!! :)

Name: glowingoblin (Signed) · Date: 12/20/06 20:18 · For: Black Rose
It doesn't make sense to me how Voldemort could kill Hermione in the future, if in theory he should still remember her.

Name: Lua (Signed) · Date: 12/20/06 13:10 · For: Black Rose
This is so sad....it makes me cry that the ending wasnt happy...but all in all it was brilliantly written....You have a great way of writing. I cant wait for the Epilogue....

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