Reviews For Take My Heart Away
Reviewer: Soccniki
Date: 02/01/07 13:19
Chapter: The Beginning

I love this story!!

Reviewer: CyanaWhite
Date: 02/01/07 12:15
Chapter: The Beginning

This was a truly original story, and although I saw this end before it was written, I still greatly enjoyed the read. Thanks for writting.

Reviewer: inklove
Date: 02/01/07 12:03
Chapter: The Beginning

im gonna cry...ill come back later

Reviewer: Ozma333
Date: 02/01/07 11:26
Chapter: The Beginning

what a powerful story and a magnificent ending! Bravo!

Reviewer: Elissy
Date: 02/01/07 7:47
Chapter: The Beginning

Oh. My. Goodness. I had chills when I read the last sentence of this chapter. Everything is just... perfect. The ending to the story, the theme of the story. I love it!
This is just... the greatest story I think I have ever read. I cannot wait until your next story comes out.

Reviewer: mirrormask
Date: 02/01/07 6:52
Chapter: The Beginning

this was one of the most amazing stories i've ever read. it was absolutley beautiful.
it's such a unique story, the theme, the characters, the way they are written into the story, its completely phenomonal.

i love this story!
it was very very well written

im sad though it had to end

oh well, all good things must come to an end


* -)

Reviewer: rainwet_memories
Date: 02/01/07 6:44
Chapter: The Beginning

Wow, beautiful, really amazing!! so....deep. I couldn't get enough.

Reviewer: IntoxicatedBeauty
Date: 02/01/07 5:14
Chapter: The Beginning

This is a great story! Good job. Did you get the inspiration from A.F.I, because I saw that you had The Leaving Song Pt.2 up at the top of the story. And Bleed Back is one of their songs as well.

Author's Response: You got it ;D I lovee AFI, they're one of my favorite bands. I got the inspiration for this story by listening to one of their songs. Does your user name come from 'And the Hero Will Drown?" It's just a guess but 'intoxicated beauty' are lyrics in that song...

Reviewer: real_life
Date: 02/01/07 4:59
Chapter: The Beginning

great story:D

Reviewer: Eileen Harris
Date: 01/31/07 23:51
Chapter: The Beginning

Yes, as sad as the whole realization of time traveling is, especially in this wonderful story, I still love the story and its beautiful ending.

Reviewer: Hel
Date: 01/31/07 23:33
Chapter: The Beginning

wow... omg. thank you. they are together in death - *tear* - so thanks for writing this story - and making me cry.. (not that hard to do.. :P) but still.

The perfect end to the perfect story

Reviewer: Wicked Wench
Date: 01/31/07 20:46
Chapter: The Beginning


Reviewer: beachbum
Date: 01/31/07 20:20
Chapter: The Beginning

o dear god i cried like a baby! so sad but just so perfect....ur a genius

Reviewer: superzoyotte
Date: 01/21/07 14:28
Chapter: Black Rose

hum, I hope there will be more, please ?

Reviewer: Onbegrepen
Date: 01/20/07 14:18
Chapter: Black Rose

I read this on ages ago and have just stumbled across it on here. How wonderful to come across a wonderful story i read before which i forgot about. I would just like to say this story is one of a kind and totally fab. Your writing style and plot are really engage the reader.

Congratulations on such a wonderful piece of writing.


Reviewer: fire_angel_love
Date: 01/17/07 22:44
Chapter: Black Rose

I love this story. I'm really sorry that I can't say more than that- okay, yes I can! Your concept of time-travel is perfect! Il ike it that you didn't have Hermione go back to the future on purpose, if the future really was to change, she would've had to stay right? Wow, I'm even confusing myself here, but it all makes perfect sense... Anyways this is great work. "So rose the Great Lord Voldemort."- Really good closing line.

Reviewer: annie
Date: 01/17/07 22:35
Chapter: Black Rose

So I spent the last few hours rereading this fic for the 8403298432th time, and I've just got to reiterate that you're a genius :D I absolutely adore your writing, and this story is so deliciously creative. The ending is *perfect*. It sent chills down my spine, and not many fics do that to me, especially since I'm hopelessly picky.

In short, thanks for sharing your gift with your humble readers ^_^

Reviewer: mori_mac
Date: 01/16/07 18:34
Chapter: Black Rose

ok i cant remember if i did review when i read this chapter a while ago, but i will say it now that this is my favorite story, ive made up my mind. it was just too haunting and chilling at teh end to not like, and i so look forward to that epilogue.... and yes i cried.

Reviewer: harrypotterlover098
Date: 01/14/07 17:52
Chapter: Black Rose

omg, please hurry and write the next chapter! it's been such a long time! i love your story so much!

Reviewer: steel
Date: 01/14/07 11:47
Chapter: Black Rose

oh srying right now. this story is so deep. how did u come up with this?u must think a lot for the story to turn out like that. whoa.....

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