what a powerful story and a magnificent ending! Bravo!
Oh. My. Goodness. I had chills when I read the last sentence of this chapter. Everything is just... perfect. The ending to the story, the theme of the story. I love it!
This is just... the greatest story I think I have ever read. I cannot wait until your next story comes out.
this was one of the most amazing stories i've ever read. it was absolutley beautiful.
it's such a unique story, the theme, the characters, the way they are written into the story, its completely phenomonal.
i love this story!
it was very very well written
im sad though it had to end
*tears*
oh well, all good things must come to an end
10/10
mirromask
* -)
Wow, beautiful, really amazing!! so....deep. I couldn't get enough.
This is a great story! Good job. Did you get the inspiration from A.F.I, because I saw that you had The Leaving Song Pt.2 up at the top of the story. And Bleed Back is one of their songs as well.
Author's Response: You got it ;D I lovee AFI, they're one of my favorite bands. I got the inspiration for this story by listening to one of their songs. Does your user name come from 'And the Hero Will Drown?" It's just a guess but 'intoxicated beauty' are lyrics in that song...
Yes, as sad as the whole realization of time traveling is, especially in this wonderful story, I still love the story and its beautiful ending.
wow... omg. thank you. they are together in death - *tear* - so thanks for writing this story - and making me cry.. (not that hard to do.. :P) but still.
The perfect end to the perfect story
o dear god i cried like a baby! so sad but just so perfect....ur a genius
hum, I hope there will be more, please ?
I read this on Fanfiction.net ages ago and have just stumbled across it on here. How wonderful to come across a wonderful story i read before which i forgot about. I would just like to say this story is one of a kind and totally fab. Your writing style and plot are really engage the reader.
Congratulations on such a wonderful piece of writing.
-Onbegrepen
I love this story. I'm really sorry that I can't say more than that- okay, yes I can! Your concept of time-travel is perfect! Il ike it that you didn't have Hermione go back to the future on purpose, if the future really was to change, she would've had to stay right? Wow, I'm even confusing myself here, but it all makes perfect sense... Anyways this is great work. "So rose the Great Lord Voldemort."- Really good closing line.
So I spent the last few hours rereading this fic for the 8403298432th time, and I've just got to reiterate that you're a genius :D I absolutely adore your writing, and this story is so deliciously creative. The ending is *perfect*. It sent chills down my spine, and not many fics do that to me, especially since I'm hopelessly picky.
In short, thanks for sharing your gift with your humble readers ^_^
ok i cant remember if i did review when i read this chapter a while ago, but i will say it now that this is my favorite story, ive made up my mind. it was just too haunting and chilling at teh end to not like, and i so look forward to that epilogue.... and yes i cried.
omg, please hurry and write the next chapter! it's been such a long time! i love your story so much!
oh wow....im srying right now. this story is so deep. how did u come up with this?u must think a lot for the story to turn out like that. whoa.....
Please please please update soon. I remember reading this story a few months ago and just found it again recently. It is such a great and original plot line. It's worth repeating: PLEASE UPDATE!
This can't be the end. Please. Tell me the green light from something else.
Either that of that he realised that it was HIM, who killed Hermyownninny at the last minute, got so upset and turned the wand against himself! So that they will live happily ever after in Hell. Or something like that.
PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE!
