I noticed that I was almost the full page of your review list so I'm writing this for that, haha. Feel free to read my stories whenever they get accepted onto this site...(:
Wow, that was such a good story. I wished I could have read this before the sixth book came out beause it would of been differen to me. But good job! I can't believe I read the whole story in what three hours? I guess it's because your chapters are short, but I like it when chapters are short because it feels like I'm reading faster. It's sad to see them all die in the end though, but it was good overall!(:
I wished that this really happened. So many people who have died, wouldn't have. But this doesn't happen, unfortunately.
Just for saying that, I have to read the next chapter now. I was going to anyways, but my interest is even more peaked!(:
Nothing can fool Dumbledore, but something tells me I don't want him to know...
Wow, haha. I'm glad I can move on!(:
Okay, you've cleared a lot of things, haha. I'm sorry, just forget about some of the comments I left before... I forgot to mention the kiss btween Tom and Hermione in the last chapter, that was unexpected! I read earlier in this story that Tom wasn't a murderer yet and you just said now that he killed his father... And I think in the fourth book it said that he hated his father, so he did hate his father for abandoning his mother and he was also a muggle which Tom knew before the sixth book came out, I believe. Again, I apologized for critisizing you on the chapters before this one because the sixth book is obviously out by now and I didn't know this was made before it came out...
"He had kissed girls before..." Tom Riddle never shown love before, therefore he never once kissed a girl.
Interesting. I have nothing bad to say here, This was a really good chapter!(:
Uh-oh! And I have one little thing to say... "That, and the fact that he found her devastatingly attractive." Dumbledore was gay, he never found Minerva McGonagall to be attractive...
I know that I'm starting to sound annoying to you, but the dark marks etched on the skin of Tom's followers are actually seen at anytime not just during the full moon... Otherwise, good chapter...(:
One thought struck me while reading this. Doesn't Tom already have a horcrux made? He can't die, in other words... If this story was made a little bit earlier, it would work, but by Tom's seventh yearv at Hogwarts, I believe he had a Horcrux.
Okay, shouldn't Professor Slughorn be the Potions teacher? He is in the books after all. I think that's all I have to say for this one. O=Outstanding for this!(:
Does this Dumbledore know what Hermione is up to? And I don't know much yet, but wouldn't it have made more sense if Hermione was in Slytherin with Tom? Another good chapter if I don't say so myself!(:
Ooh, this is getting good. You probably don't visit this website anymore, but I'm glad I clicked on your story about Regulus and then found this! It's really good!(:
