Reviews For Take My Heart Away
Reviewer: timeturner0x
Date: 01/31/14 21:46
Chapter: Price of Immortality

Amazing story :) I don't know if you still check these reviews, but I love it!

Reviewer: dmbw7052
Date: 06/08/13 16:03
Chapter: The End

I really like the idea of this story. Normally, time-turner stories would annoy me, but the plot of this one intrigues me. I sincerely hope that Hermione does not kill Tom, as he is my favorite character. And doesn't love conquer evil?

Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw
Date: 07/02/12 6:12
Chapter: The End

I noticed that I was almost the full page of your review list so I'm writing this for that, haha. Feel free to read my stories whenever they get accepted onto this site...(:

Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw
Date: 07/02/12 6:10
Chapter: The Beginning

Wow, that was such a good story. I wished I could have read this before the sixth book came out beause it would of been differen to me. But good job! I can't believe I read the whole story in what three hours? I guess it's because your chapters are short, but I like it when chapters are short because it feels like I'm reading faster. It's sad to see them all die in the end though, but it was good overall!(:

Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw
Date: 07/02/12 6:02
Chapter: Black Rose

I was hoping he had changed...

Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw
Date: 07/02/12 5:43
Chapter: Worst Nightmare

I wished that this really happened. So many people who have died, wouldn't have. But this doesn't happen, unfortunately.

Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw
Date: 07/02/12 5:27
Chapter: See You Cry


Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw
Date: 07/02/12 5:15
Chapter: Pieces of Agony

Just for saying that, I have to read the next chapter now. I was going to anyways, but my interest is even more peaked!(:

Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw
Date: 07/02/12 5:00
Chapter: Price of Immortality

You're doing great!(:

Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw
Date: 07/02/12 4:49
Chapter: Of Puzzles and Riddles

Nothing can fool Dumbledore, but something tells me I don't want him to know...

Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw
Date: 07/02/12 4:35
Chapter: Moonlight Masquerade, Part II


Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw
Date: 07/02/12 4:28
Chapter: Moonlight Masquerade

Wow, haha. I'm glad I can move on!(:

Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw
Date: 07/02/12 4:13
Chapter: Sillver Slippers and Peacock... Hats

Okay, you've cleared a lot of things, haha. I'm sorry, just forget about some of the comments I left before... I forgot to mention the kiss btween Tom and Hermione in the last chapter, that was unexpected! I read earlier in this story that Tom wasn't a murderer yet and you just said now that he killed his father... And I think in the fourth book it said that he hated his father, so he did hate his father for abandoning his mother and he was also a muggle which Tom knew before the sixth book came out, I believe. Again, I apologized for critisizing you on the chapters before this one because the sixth book is obviously out by now and I didn't know this was made before it came out...

Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw
Date: 07/02/12 4:00
Chapter: Empty Space

"He had kissed girls before..." Tom Riddle never shown love before, therefore he never once kissed a girl.

Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw
Date: 07/02/12 3:49
Chapter: Best For Them

Interesting. I have nothing bad to say here, This was a really good chapter!(:

Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw
Date: 07/02/12 3:30
Chapter: Enemies Closer

Uh-oh! And I have one little thing to say... "That, and the fact that he found her devastatingly attractive." Dumbledore was gay, he never found Minerva McGonagall to be attractive...

Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw
Date: 07/02/12 3:14
Chapter: Sunset Tears

I know that I'm starting to sound annoying to you, but the dark marks etched on the skin of Tom's followers are actually seen at anytime not just during the full moon... Otherwise, good chapter...(:

Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw
Date: 07/02/12 3:01
Chapter: Late Night Suspicions

One thought struck me while reading this. Doesn't Tom already have a horcrux made? He can't die, in other words... If this story was made a little bit earlier, it would work, but by Tom's seventh yearv at Hogwarts, I believe he had a Horcrux.

Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw
Date: 07/02/12 2:48
Chapter: Of All People

Okay, shouldn't Professor Slughorn be the Potions teacher? He is in the books after all. I think that's all I have to say for this one. O=Outstanding for this!(:

Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw
Date: 07/02/12 2:38
Chapter: Helen Nestowe of Germany

Does this Dumbledore know what Hermione is up to? And I don't know much yet, but wouldn't it have made more sense if Hermione was in Slytherin with Tom? Another good chapter if I don't say so myself!(:

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