Reviews For Heart-Talk
Reviewer: LadyElyssa
Date: 05/01/07 3:35
Chapter: Heart-Talk

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Hero London
Date: 03/11/06 10:22
Chapter: Heart-Talk

A beautiful letter...truly touching, but not corny. A bit of a slide for Sirius, but in a great direction and most definitely not to the point where he's out of character... we all have those sentimental times, don't we? You captured Padfoot in a remarkable form. Tremendous work!

Reviewer: Little_hoole3333
Date: 08/14/05 18:35
Chapter: Heart-Talk

I find it kind of sad, because we basically know that Prongs will never read it. (sniff) I like how you added little bits of humor here and there. Great story! Or should I say letter?

Reviewer: Dark Chocolate Frog
Date: 07/31/05 20:11
Chapter: Heart-Talk

I liked this. It did sound a lot like Sirius. The saddest line, I think, was this one: " But on that night in the far future when we are old and I give this letter to you, know that it was everything I wanted to say to my best friend, but felt I couldn’t. " It just made me really sad because Sirius and James never get to grow old. It's really a shame; its one of the parts of Harry Potter that is so realistic, and therefore all the more depressing. Don't get me wrong - I love Harry Potter, and I thought this was a great fic. But behind all the magic and wand waving, there's a reality that's not always fun. -DCF aka Christina

Reviewer: ermine the one
Date: 06/29/05 13:28
Chapter: Heart-Talk

I read Distant Faces and I thought that atht was good so I decided to go insearch of your other fics and I found this. I think it's very good, though not quite as good as Distant Face, and this was also very emotive - your writing certainly has potential and I urge you to carry on with it. I couldn't help but notice the irony when you wrote 'The Sirius Black, cry!' and when in Distant Faces he borke down - and whether that was intentional or not I thought that was very clever - and I like the idea of Sirius watching James grow up and feel as though he should to - which seems quite his style, and makes me feel even more upset hat he's ... gone - especially when I read the bit when he said he would someday repay his deb of friendship with James. Anyway, I'm unsure as to how you are not getting any reviews, really - your writing is very good, as I have already said - and again, I think this is absolutely great. I'll stop waffling now - wrote far to much! Anyway, well done - keep up with the good work and perhaps write a longer story now - I'd love to read it! Luv, Ermine

You must login (register) to review.
Information
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.


We have stories and authors in this archive.

:

RSS
Choose Theme:
SOCIAL MEDIA
     
MOST RECENT
Other Lives and Dimensions and Finally a Love Story by MoRoCcAnAnDpRoUd Professors
The year is 1977, and the Wizarding World is in turmoil, but it doesn't really...
Research and Development by Northumbrian 3rd-5th Years
The Mirrorphone, the latest advance in Wizarding communications. Now, of course...
The Weird Sisters - B-Sides and Rarities, Vol. 2 by ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor 1st-2nd Years
The Weird Sisters are back for an encore. Ten more tracks from your MNFF authors.
FEATURED
Oread, Walking by Seren
Cedric was just as odd as Hermione, because he liked to walk. Cedric/Hermione
The Effect of Gamma Rays on Two Terrifically Trapped Gryffindors. by Fenixaze 3rd-5th Years
From the "Stuck where for the weekend?" Challenge on Portkey.org ... Our two...
Drunk on Him by armagod679 Professors
For me, he was an obsession, a burning obsession, one that I could never let...
A Broken Hallelujah by epiphany212 Professors
You have always loved the chase. The pursuit of Quaffles and dragons have carried...
In the Hufflepuff Way by 1000timesingoldenink 3rd-5th Years
Did anybody really appreciate Hannah's mum?Because Mrs. Abbott was a heroine...
And Now... by Oregonian 3rd-5th Years
Moments after the death of Voldemort, Harry gazes at the corpse of the Dark...
The Weird Sisters - B-Sides and Rarities, Vol. 1 by minnabird 1st-2nd Years
Welcome back to another rousing round of rambunctious rock!However, a new act...
CATEGORIES