wow hahahah lmao lmao lmao !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! snape......*tears go down face*....punk...rocker in the 80's hahah*gut busted from laughing so hard*
great story! Your a one of the greatest writers i've found keep on writing!
Wow great story I love this story no matter how many times I read it.
I LUV U! I LUV U! I LUV U! I LUV U!!!!!!!
I WAS PRACTICALLY SCREAMING IN LAUGHTER AND EXCITMENT!!!!!!!=]]]]]]]]]]]]]]
BLACK RAPTURE IS THE MOST AMAZING WRITER EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!
AND HAS SOME OF THE VERY SAME THOUGHTS AS I. I'M REALLY HAPPY YOU WROTE THIS STORY AND I CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE REST OF IT. =]]]]]
such a good story!
i like the plot and story, but it's very rushed. It ended too soon for me, especially since the writing was spectacular. Sequel pleasE!
omg that is so sweet! brings tears to the eyes :(. hey. wanna make a sequel?!!?
ohh, i just got it! ahahah, thats funny
omg, they'r getting married. draco would neva get a gryffindor tattoo he is much 2 proud 2 do that. im sorry 2 say this : good plot, badly written
dumbledore would neva eva! b so blunt he would try and break it 2 them gently
sorry im such a critic, but im a perfectionist
ok y would snape b that understanding? he h8s all mudbloods, and if she had brought draco he wold have taken him and quickly sent hermione away. i have only cn the movies and even i kno that!
i think ur story is moving a little too fast, you have to remember that they have hated each other intently for 6 years' so somehting like this would take much longer.
And where is the detail, it's all being rushed
I have liked your story so far, but I do not think that the decision that Dumbledore made was entirely realistic. I think that he would have found a better way to protect his students, but I understand that this might be the only way to continue with the story. Good luck with the rest.
Yeah, a LOT more than she'd like to admit. HE HE HE! My complaments to the chef...er...Author! < . > Ignore the insane person...
beautious!...you should do a sequel!!!!!!
you are the best author i have ever known in the histiry of fanfic authors! you rock! i love you so much ! you changed my perspective on fanfiction! peace out!
how old are they?
Aren't they a little too young to be married?
Aw I love happy endings!
lmao snape the punk rocker!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!