Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 06/22/09 18:56
Chapter: Pink hair and Truth or Dare

I like this story. It's pretty cool.

Reviewer: Cartwheel
Date: 12/15/07 11:37
Chapter: Walks and Talks

Hi! I really like the twist in the story!
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Reviewer: Cartwheel
Date: 12/15/07 11:36
Chapter: Walks and Talks

Hi! I really like the twist in the story!
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Reviewer: ella_wyse
Date: 08/17/07 3:51
Chapter: Walks and Talks

ooh, i wanna know what hapens.
Exclamation mark police - ew, they're so unnecessary.
p.s. there weren't any firebolts when lily and james were at school; they were invented in harry's third year.

Reviewer: ella_wyse
Date: 08/17/07 3:46
Chapter: Conversations and Explanations

gosh, after saying 'oh, hey, lils' and 'lils, we have to talk' james only said two other words? sorry i'm so cynical, but...
p.s. i like sammy's character

Reviewer: ella_wyse
Date: 08/17/07 3:41
Chapter: Pink hair and Truth or Dare

okay, it's cool and all, but there's just a few things...
please don't use so many exclamation marks. they are the most pointless type of punctuation and they can get really annoying and make the narrator sound like a blonde, big-boobed bimbo. Also, wasn't james openly in love with lily? anyway, the storyline is pretty good and i'm interested to see how it's going to unravel, but i really hope you take some of those tips on board.

Reviewer: hermionerocks42
Date: 08/11/07 12:33
Chapter: Walks and Talks

I luv it!

Reviewer: lily princess
Date: 07/06/07 15:27
Chapter: Pink hair and Truth or Dare

I agree with Queen_lily, if you don't update soon then i will DDDIIIEEE!

Reviewer: liliy16
Date: 06/30/07 20:26
Chapter: Pink hair and Truth or Dare

great story! i love that lily's a Marauder, its a nice change to the usual james/lily fics. can't wait to read more

Reviewer: Queen_Lily
Date: 05/18/07 22:58
Chapter: Walks and Talks

update soon, ok? i am going to DIE if i cant' read the rest of it soon!

Reviewer: Queen_Lily
Date: 05/18/07 22:54
Chapter: Conversations and Explanations

Lils, we have to talk THAT is when things start getting serious. oh my gosh, i used that pun again! ugh! but it is unavoidable, you know? nevermind, i dont make sense to anyone but myself.

Reviewer: Queen_Lily
Date: 05/18/07 22:48
Chapter: Pink hair and Truth or Dare

i like the pink hair idea. lol.

Reviewer: haz_gin_ron_herm12
Date: 03/16/07 16:55
Chapter: Pink hair and Truth or Dare

loving it so far i like the fact that lily and her friends are marauders. so cool can't wait for it to be finished. keep it up

Reviewer: harryginnyforever
Date: 02/20/07 21:48
Chapter: Walks and Talks

Firebolts haven't been invented yet. Other than that, brilliant. I love how you made Lils a tiger, although, I kinda wish she could've kept her eyes. Maybe you could edit it to Firestripes?

Reviewer: jenny b
Date: 01/25/07 4:24
Chapter: Walks and Talks

that was really funny! I hope Sirius and Candace get together! please?

Reviewer: Feather Hawkins
Date: 01/24/07 21:20
Chapter: Walks and Talks

u have a realy evil mind to leave off at this part, do you know that?

Reviewer: wyowerewolf
Date: 11/22/06 20:09
Chapter: Walks and Talks

Wow, great plot, and it really is ext. original that they're friends and she's a marauder. Can't wait until the next chapter!

Reviewer: jandl
Date: 11/18/06 19:36
Chapter: Walks and Talks

i love! write more!

Reviewer: adalittle
Date: 11/12/06 10:19
Chapter: Walks and Talks

lol, this is great! update soon!

Reviewer: lunalovy
Date: 11/09/06 20:06
Chapter: Walks and Talks

More !!!!!!!!!!!!! ~Ginny~

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