YES!!! Sydney rescued Sirius, I'd love to have seen Narcissa stunned, serves her right! That plan was very quick thinking, and since it's only Voldemort's head in the fire couldn't they hex him? Or just walk out? And Somebody needs to tell Dumbledore about that fireplace, a way for Voldemort to get into the caslte is not good me thinks. Where did all the wands come from? I thought James and Lily hadn't theirs with them. And surely a severing charm would've been more sensible to remove James ropes, far less noticable. Or even a vanishing charm like James taught Lily, it would've been a nice link. Anyway, can't wait to see how they escape.
AARRG!! I hate Malfoy, and in this fic I hate Snape aswell. I'm glad Sydney realised something was up, hope she helps Sirius escape Narcissa and they both go to James and Lily's aid. Sorry, I always go for the quickest, least devastating endings, please don't let them be jurt.
Oh God! We're just getting to the part where Lily will see James for who he really is and that snake-faced ruler of the world wanna be's going to screw it up! OOO I hate that guy!
Oh no, what if Lily hates James for hiding behind the red mask? She might think he was playing a joke on her! Oh no, Oh no, Oh no! must press next and find out.
Lucius Malfoy! What a CREEP!!! Isn't it odd that both Sydney and Sirius refuse to tell any of their friends who they ended up with? If Lily knows Red Mask Guy is James, i hope she isn't disappointed. Can't wait to see what happens next. Oh, and I like Remus so much, he just observes the others antics from afar and smiles to himself, what a guy!
I'm desperately hoping that the man in the red mask is James. I'm guessing that Sirius is on the tower with Sydney. After Frank and Alice's conversation I'm not sure i like the mask idea so much any more. Right, I'll love you and leave you, the next chapter awaits.
I love this fic, it's one of the better ones I've read from the marauder era. My favourite line from this chapter was that Lily had beauty and brains so there was obviously no room for sanity, it made me laugh out loud.
superb. cant say anymore gotta read the next chap
awesome. lily and james would have gone 2gether like this
cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!. but i gues lily evans must not b like hermione so she would probably prefer the dance
Awwwwwwwww... Its a really good story! Are you going to make more like this one?
words cant describe what i feel about this story the only words that come somewhat close are: I LOVED IT!
I read this story a long time ago and today I just read i again. The cool thing was that this was the frist story I read on this site so I just want to say that you did a great job writing it.
I loved the story i give it a 9/10. It was fantastic and i love all your stories- it was short and sweet and very good.
Omg,you are like the greatest fanfic. writer ever. This story is so suspencful. ahhhh!!!
Awwww soooooooooooo cute I'm glade Lily and James got together!
Omg *jumping up and down*