Reviews For Behind The Mask
Reviewer: midnightsky
Date: 06/28/05 11:28
Chapter: Losing The Surname

still lovin' it... update soon. oh this is torture. *10*

Reviewer: cupcake
Date: 06/28/05 4:41
Chapter: Losing The Surname

yay im well what can i are awsome, fantastic, wonderful, creative, original, imaginative, innovative, unique......and the list goes on but i dont have enough room to keep going on how wonderful u r.....keep up your writing, you rock!!! :)

Reviewer: irishfairy11
Date: 06/27/05 23:04
Chapter: The First Day Back

I love it so far! Keep it up, I love all your stuff. :)

Reviewer: Silverstag13007
Date: 06/27/05 17:22
Chapter: Losing The Surname

Well look! I'm second to reveiw!!!!! YAY! I'm special! I'm also hyper. Fantabulous job! I just love your work. The dance kinda reminds me of the dance in the movie "A Cinderella Story", which is cool, cuz I love that movie! Anyways, please update soon!!!!!

Reviewer: Silverstag13007
Date: 06/27/05 17:08
Chapter: The First Day Back

Hey, hey!!! Nice job once again, Secret Lily! You are such an awesome author. I love your stories! well, keep it up!

Reviewer: blacksussy
Date: 06/27/05 15:59
Chapter: Losing The Surname

Heyy!!! I'm the first one.. what an honor.. *tear* lol. Anyway, great chapter, I'm loving this idea of the masquerade it's so cool, I specially liked the part in which James supports his idea of the ball. I also love Sydney.. Great job 10!

Reviewer: cupcake
Date: 06/25/05 22:16
Chapter: The First Day Back

you are, by far, the best writer on this website......we love u....keep updating, your doin great : D

Reviewer: eerinw
Date: 06/25/05 1:11
Chapter: The First Day Back

Good job! Normally all the seventh year fanfics where Lily is shocked that James made HB are all basically the same, but something about yours was different from the rest. I enjoyed it. I also like Sydney and her personality. Keep up the good work and update soon. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter of this story!

Reviewer: lilyandjamesfan101
Date: 06/24/05 22:31
Chapter: The First Day Back

Great start! I think this is going to turn out to be a really good story. Please update soon!!

Reviewer: midnightsky
Date: 06/24/05 20:50
Chapter: The First Day Back

thats a great start, i look forward to reading the rest of this story. Update soon!

Reviewer: sirius is krazy kool
Date: 06/24/05 14:45
Chapter: The First Day Back

wow this was really good! update soon!

Reviewer: padfootwillreturn
Date: 06/23/05 18:01
Chapter: The First Day Back

Another wonderful story! Your James/Lily stories are absolutly brilliant. Honestly, tthe best I've read. Anyways, great job Arielle! I'm looking forward for your next update! ~

Reviewer: Black_Swan
Date: 06/23/05 16:36
Chapter: The First Day Back

you started anither story , hooray !!!!!!!!!! and great writing as usual so update soon!!!

Reviewer: Shelly7
Date: 06/23/05 16:07
Chapter: The First Day Back

This is a great story, and you should continue it. I LOVE IT! All of your stories are amazing! Great job. 10/10.

Reviewer: blacksussy
Date: 06/23/05 13:57
Chapter: The First Day Back

UUUUUUU!!! IT seems like the start of a great story. I really like the ball idea and I can't wait for it to happen! Also I'm looking forward to the "familar looking masked man sweeps her off her ruleabiding feet". Keep writing! Post sooooooooooooonnnnnn. 10!!

Reviewer: star101
Date: 06/23/05 13:44
Chapter: The First Day Back

Please...Please continue!I'm begging you! I've already read Potter's Charm 5 times!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: 5 times? I am very flattered. Have you read No Rain? If not, you should read that in the meantime. It's the prequel to Potter's Charm.

Reviewer: Black_Swan
Date: 06/23/05 12:43
Chapter: The First Day Back

you started anither story , hooray !!!!!!!!!! and great writing as usual so update soon!!!

Reviewer: Lexy Granger
Date: 06/23/05 12:08
Chapter: The First Day Back

wow so many stories so little time...even if it is summer! good beggining. I like stories w/ Alice as her friend, or close to being one. Anyways, pleeeeeeease continue,kay, kay!!!!!!!! :):):):):):) ( i forgot for the CMF review, so i added the xtra smileys!)

Reviewer: 2Hopeless2Care
Date: 06/23/05 10:39
Chapter: The First Day Back

Another great story Arielle! It's amazing how good you are. I'm glad that you mentioned her friend, Sydney as just a normal girl. I'm getting sick of how Lily's friends are always the prettiest girls in the school. Update quick! 10/10!!!

Reviewer: WiCkEd
Date: 06/23/05 10:02
Chapter: The First Day Back

You are of course a fantastic Lily/James writter and this story is no exception! I like how it is pretty different from your other stories which makes it stand out! I also like Sydney for her reckless personality and Alice for her shy one and it sort of makes them like the Marauders minus Peter. Anyway, good job once again! I really like it! Please update as soon as possible!

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