Reviews For Behind The Mask
Reviewer: KJRowling
Date: 10/30/05 11:35
Chapter: Behind The Mask

Awwww... Nice chapter, evil ending. Definetly not a nice way for Lily to find out but maybe she's a little more worried about what is going to happen. Great Chapter! Please update ASAP, I hate Cliffies.

Reviewer: RoxyMarie
Date: 10/29/05 11:34
Chapter: Behind The Mask

Awww... why do they have to go and ruin things? James was going to tell her!! Now, I hope she's not mad that he didn't tell her sooner! Great job!

Reviewer: PuppetPal
Date: 10/28/05 21:43
Chapter: Behind The Mask

OH, this is such a good chapter, but I hate cliffhangers! Please update soon!!!

Reviewer: harryobsessed19
Date: 10/28/05 9:59
Chapter: Behind The Mask

Very good chapter. Poor Lily thats not a way to find out anything!!!!

Reviewer: Marauder by Midnight
Date: 10/27/05 21:45
Chapter: Coming Clean

Nice setting up for a new chapter. Cliffhangers are great!

One thing I'd like to comment on though is the unlikelihood of Lucius Malfoy being in Hogwarts at the same time as James and Lily. He was born in 1954 while the Potters were born 1960. Quite an age difference if you ask me =/ But no matter. It's just a trifle conflict.

I wish you would've added a bit more about James and Lily's tutoring sessions. Perhaps there is more to it than meets the eye. You've said Lily's been distracted by the masked man. But at the same time, has she drawn any closer to James?

Honestly can't wait for the next chapter.


Author's Response: It's an AU story. I added the warning once I added Lucius into the picture :)

Reviewer: ilovetom
Date: 10/27/05 20:13
Chapter: Coming Clean

the bomb! I love all your work!

Reviewer: RoxyMarie
Date: 10/27/05 18:03
Chapter: Coming Clean

Wow, whata great story! I really like your idea you've got spinning. I can't wait to see what happens between James and Lily and James and Snape. Amazing job! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Crazy About Dan
Date: 10/22/05 16:00
Chapter: Coming Clean

The mask idea was awesome. I think that it was really cool of how James is letting Lily get used to him behind the mask. I may just have forgot, but does James wake when Sydney saw the mask or did he find out later from Sirius? Please post soon, I can't wait to read more. Is this one on too?

Reviewer: magick
Date: 10/17/05 16:23
Chapter: Coming Clean

This story is SO good! Please, update!

Reviewer: Dawn Lionheart
Date: 10/04/05 3:44
Chapter: Coming Clean

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!! i need to know what happens next!!

Reviewer: Dawn Lionheart
Date: 10/04/05 3:41
Chapter: Distractions

Wow! am enjoying it!

Reviewer: Dawn Lionheart
Date: 10/04/05 3:35
Chapter: The Morning After

Sirius and Sydney! much better than Rosier. Oh, and James and Lily 4ever!!!

Reviewer: Dawn Lionheart
Date: 10/04/05 3:30
Chapter: The Dance

Who's the guy??? I really want to know!!

Reviewer: Dawn Lionheart
Date: 10/04/05 3:14
Chapter: Losing The Surname

Cool, I liked the idea of the masked ball.

Reviewer: Dawn Lionheart
Date: 10/04/05 3:11
Chapter: The First Day Back

It's great, I love the way Alice/Frank are in it too.

Reviewer: JamesandLilyforever
Date: 09/15/05 15:23
Chapter: Coming Clean

Great idea for the masks,briliant.Please update soon.

Reviewer: Mione_Bookworm
Date: 09/09/05 13:41
Chapter: Coming Clean

I absolutely love this story, it's fabulous. I recommended your fiction at the MFF Forums, 'cause you really are the authority when it comes to L/J fiction. :). Can't wait for more!!! <3 This storyy!! 10. P.S: That Zorro quote...just made my day! :)

Reviewer: catgoddess
Date: 09/08/05 8:32
Chapter: Coming Clean

gr8 story................i luv the idea...................plzzzz update soon!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: spilled ink
Date: 09/05/05 1:41
Chapter: Coming Clean

I love this story!!! The whole masked ball is kind of cliched, but you made it really interesting. I want James to tell Lily about being the guy in the mask in the next chapter, and I have a bad feeling about Snape doing something to Lily. Well, I hope you update soon!! *10*

Reviewer: Sophia Mack
Date: 09/04/05 2:07
Chapter: The Dance

oops *deducts points for intelligence from self* Im a fluffbrain! Sorry.

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