Awwww... Nice chapter, evil ending. Definetly not a nice way for Lily to find out but maybe she's a little more worried about what is going to happen. Great Chapter! Please update ASAP, I hate Cliffies.
Awww... why do they have to go and ruin things? James was going to tell her!! Now, I hope she's not mad that he didn't tell her sooner! Great job!
OH, this is such a good chapter, but I hate cliffhangers! Please update soon!!!
Very good chapter. Poor Lily thats not a way to find out anything!!!!
Nice setting up for a new chapter. Cliffhangers are great!
One thing I'd like to comment on though is the unlikelihood of Lucius Malfoy being in Hogwarts at the same time as James and Lily. He was born in 1954 while the Potters were born 1960. Quite an age difference if you ask me =/ But no matter. It's just a trifle conflict.
I wish you would've added a bit more about James and Lily's tutoring sessions. Perhaps there is more to it than meets the eye. You've said Lily's been distracted by the masked man. But at the same time, has she drawn any closer to James?
Honestly can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: It's an AU story. I added the warning once I added Lucius into the picture :)
the bomb! I love all your work!
Wow, whata great story! I really like your idea you've got spinning. I can't wait to see what happens between James and Lily and James and Snape. Amazing job! Can't wait for more!
The mask idea was awesome. I think that it was really cool of how James is letting Lily get used to him behind the mask. I may just have forgot, but does James wake when Sydney saw the mask or did he find out later from Sirius? Please post soon, I can't wait to read more. Is this one on fanficrion.net too?
This story is SO good! Please, update!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!! i need to know what happens next!!
Wow! am enjoying it!
Sirius and Sydney! much better than Rosier. Oh, and James and Lily 4ever!!!
Who's the guy??? I really want to know!!
Cool, I liked the idea of the masked ball.
It's great, I love the way Alice/Frank are in it too.
Great idea for the masks,briliant.Please update soon.
I absolutely love this story, it's fabulous. I recommended your fiction at the MFF Forums, 'cause you really are the authority when it comes to L/J fiction. :). Can't wait for more!!! <3 This storyy!! 10. P.S: That Zorro quote...just made my day! :)
gr8 story................i luv the idea...................plzzzz update soon!!!!!!!!!
I love this story!!! The whole masked ball is kind of cliched, but you made it really interesting. I want James to tell Lily about being the guy in the mask in the next chapter, and I have a bad feeling about Snape doing something to Lily. Well, I hope you update soon!! *10*
oops *deducts points for intelligence from self* Im a fluffbrain! Sorry.