Reviews For Behind The Mask
Reviewer: animagirlphoenix
Date: 12/22/05 21:11
Chapter: The Truth Is Out

awww...Lily has the wrong impression of James once again, at least she realized that he really loved her...I'm looking forward to more of her reaction in the next chapter! *sniff* only one more chappie...

Reviewer: cupcake
Date: 12/16/05 2:33
Chapter: The Truth Is Out

yay yay yay yay yay yay yay yay yay yay its finally here!!!!!!!!! even if there is only one chappy left it is by far the bestest story ever!!!! standing ovation 4 u luvvy! :)

Reviewer: Bic
Date: 12/10/05 15:33
Chapter: The Truth Is Out

only one more chapter?!? it was a good chapter, i like the fact that james would do anything for lily. great job!

Reviewer: KJRowling
Date: 12/07/05 14:19
Chapter: The Truth Is Out

Wow, yay! I've been waiting ages, checking everyday for updates and it's here finally! Now that over with... A slight twist with the whole you will join Voldemort or else thing, but still good. Excellent chpter, though not my fave (I cant spell it). Interesting cliffie, please update soon!

Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie
Date: 12/06/05 21:19
Chapter: The Truth Is Out

Well, while LaaDeeDaa and RoxyMarie have a point: he can't be too dangerous in the firem but I think you can trust Voldemort on one thing: he'll find a way to make as much trouble as possible, even if his head is in the fire. Great story; only one more chapter? darn! Great story!

Reviewer: RoxyMarie
Date: 12/06/05 20:31
Chapter: The Truth Is Out

Great story. I really like it a lot, but I agree with LaDeeDah. If he's in the fire, he can't hurt anyone, so why are they so scared of him. Now, bringing them into the Forbidden Forest when they meet him in person, that'd prolly freak some people out. great job anyways, can't wait for more!

Reviewer: LaaDeeDah
Date: 12/06/05 18:34
Chapter: The Truth Is Out

If it's only his head in the fire, surely he can't be that dangerous? To tell you the truth, I was a little confused about what was going on towards the end, that could be just me though. Great writing!

Reviewer: Harry_potter_hunni_01
Date: 12/06/05 16:32
Chapter: The Truth Is Out

*first reviewer dancc* OMFG___BRiLLiANT. I liked it a lot. Great plot and all that. I'm upset that there's only one chapter left though.

Reviewer: KateLewis
Date: 12/04/05 21:49
Chapter: Behind The Mask

Fabulous! I love it! Reminds me a little of Aladdin, lol. But not in a bad way, I really enjoyed it. Very very well done, and original. I like it alot. Keep it up.

Reviewer: Harry_potter_hunni_01
Date: 11/29/05 14:26
Chapter: Behind The Mask

-dies- Ohmygosh. That was so clever and brilliant. I can't wait for an update!

Reviewer: winky123
Date: 11/26/05 7:01
Chapter: Behind The Mask

I am loving this story! I can't wait for your next update. You have a good combination of action, mushiness and there is even evil incorporated! It's brilliant. I wonder when James thought someone was watching him during their tutoring session. Was it Snape? How creepy. I had another thought to ..If Lily woke up in the Gryffindor commonroom do you think she would have realised her 'mystery man' must be a Gryffindor. Not that it would mean a great deal though I suppose. She cruelly found out in the end anyway. I really want to know what happens with Sirius too.. Anyway, my favourite line in this chapter was ...'' It was love, Alice,” Sydney explained quietly. “She’s in love with a stranger.”... It fit perfectly and I just had to go awwww. *10*

Reviewer: animagirlphoenix
Date: 11/23/05 18:14
Chapter: Behind The Mask

PLEASE UP DATE SOON THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME!!! Beautifully written! Bravo I say! 10/10!!! (but then again u alawys deserve 10/10!) ~Cheers!

Reviewer: LaaDeeDah
Date: 11/20/05 23:14
Chapter: Behind The Mask

Wow, I read that all in one go, and it's certainly the best Masquerade fic I've ever read. I think that having Lucius reveal James was a much better idea than having James reveal himself. It would have been to emotional and hard to write, it could have ruined the entire story for you. I'm not doubting your abilities to write however! Perfect 10/10, this is going on my favourites list and please update the story soon!

Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie
Date: 11/16/05 16:45
Chapter: Behind The Mask

NOOO! NO more story to read! Update! I love it by the way, even though this is the third masquerade story i have read, but it is fantastic! Poor, poor Lily. And poor James, not even given the chance to show himself properly. Poor things.

Reviewer: bigdreamer22
Date: 11/12/05 19:21
Chapter: Behind The Mask

Great story! I have but one comment for you... UPDATE PLEASE!!! Keep up the awesome story!

Reviewer: sweetsinger657
Date: 11/12/05 12:42
Chapter: Behind The Mask

Oh Please Update! I check every day since youve started posting to see if it's updated. Please update soon!!!!!!!

Reviewer: believe_in_yourself201
Date: 11/06/05 12:49
Chapter: Behind The Mask

lovely story please update soon i cant wait

Reviewer: Crazy About Dan
Date: 11/04/05 6:33
Chapter: Behind The Mask

That was an awesome chapter. I can't wait for the next one. This story is going to be shorter than some of your other ones.

Reviewer: omg i love sirius
Date: 10/31/05 4:51
Chapter: The First Day Back

oh my god!! i hate you!! such an evil ending. love the story though. i like how it's got all twisted with snape etc. james and lily are so cute in this!! james is really sweet without being pathetic. And Lily is just how lily should be :D please update sooooooon!!!

Reviewer: magick
Date: 10/30/05 19:08
Chapter: Behind The Mask

I love this chapter. It's really great ... please update soon!

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