aww... now tht was cute! there shud be a sequel...
An excellent end chapter. It was very sweet and yet not over-fluffy. Great job! A lovely little fic. 10/10
nice shall there b a sequel
wow, defintley original...it was very good and just really good. ummmmm there is nothing i would change, so you should write more james and lily stories......yeah
I have to admit . . when I read the whole thing about the mask and the dance . . . and once a again James trying to prove hime self I thought this was going to be another unorignal Lilly hates James, James wins her over stories. I read the first two chapters and I couldn't stop reading! It was very good. The ending with Voldemort was very good, what could have been a cliche ending was actually very orignal. Thanks for a great story, even though there are over 250 LandJ stories on this site there a very few orginal ones. GREAT JOB! LOVED IT! ~madly in love with the phelps twin: GEG
DUN DUN DUN!!! i SMELL DRAMA COMiNG UP...i LOVE ALL OF YOUR STORiES. i READ LiLY AND JAMES: THEiR STORY OF LOVE, AND POTTER'S CHARM. AND GUESS WHAT? i LOVED THEM BOTH!!! YOU ARE DEFiNETLY ONE OF MY FAV AUTHORS. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK! 10 OUT OF 10 DEF.
I luv this story. I think that it would be good to add to it, as u skipped so much time and went right to the end of seventh year... or maybe even a sequel... very nice, though, and I give u 10/10. One query was whether the magical people know about Zoro... Good job,
awwww. Nice ending. I love that story. YAY! Wow, I'm crying. Soo sweet. 10/10
Your story was the first story I read when I came to this site. I really loved it.
love the ending so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i cant believe its over*cries* you are a really talented writer!! more!!!write more stories!!!!!!!MORE!!!!!!!!!!!
so where's the next chapter???? 10/10 ♥ rimma
One of the best stories I have ever read! Very romantic and well done.... It makes me want to be Lily! =) Keep it up!!
Very good story, I like the way you've written it. I can't wait for the final chapter! 10/10, keep updating!
Yo this is great. YOu freakin rock. Awesome story. Loved it all. And still loving it. Update soon. Standing ovation. 100000!
by the way,if anyone is famous for cliffhangers,its you and chloish. still dying slowly...very slowly
please update...im dying slowly!!!!!
OMG UR KILLING ME HERE!!!!!!!!!!!! I HAV BEEN READING THIS 4 LIKE 2 MONTHS AND I JUST BECAME A MEMBER!!!!! * caps lock off* please please please update after the break!!!!!! only one more chapter?*yelp* nooo say it ain't so!!!
Awesome chapter, though not my favourite. Great clifffie, though, and I like how James says yes to Malfoy because of Lily, but you had to do that if you wanted to finish it next chapter, because now Lily realizes that he really loves her, yadda, yadda, yadda. Great!
Please keep updating you haven't in sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo long lease finish the story i ahte it when writers stop by the end