Reviews For Behind The Mask
Reviewer: therealGinnyW
Date: 04/17/06 12:48
Chapter: The Red Mask

that was a good story with a good plot! I enjoyed it!

Reviewer: therealGinnyW
Date: 04/17/06 12:16
Chapter: The Morning After

EWWWW not Lucius EWWWW

Reviewer: HeRmYgInS
Date: 04/09/06 12:51
Chapter: The Red Mask

aww...beautiful.

Reviewer: JC_Cainstone
Date: 03/30/06 15:01
Chapter: The Red Mask

Despite the whole masquerade cliche, I really enjoyed this story, I love the feeling of it and the way that James is willing to join the dark side for Lily. Wonderful story, keep writing!

Reviewer: babekitty_92
Date: 03/23/06 23:31
Chapter: The Red Mask

It was not weak at all; a very good ending to a fantastic story!!! Make sure you tell us when you decide to write a story you can publish in an actual book so we can dulge in!!!!!

Reviewer: Maire Potter
Date: 03/09/06 21:06
Chapter: The Red Mask

I really enjoyed your story. I can totally see James hiding behind a mask to get Lily to like him. I really liked the end, although the part with Voldemort might have been a tinsy bit mor importent or dramatic. Other than that, I loved it!!!!! I hope you write more and soon!!!

Reviewer: Natasha Johnson
Date: 03/01/06 18:45
Chapter: The Red Mask

Oh I love it. Of course I do, lol. My favorite part of all was: With that, he and Sydney walked up the stairs, giggling and saying something along the lines of ‘Call me Zorro’. That is sooooo KINKY!!! I noticed you liked that word. It's very funny. So is "smouldering". If you've read Seduced by the Toerag, you'll know what I mean, lol. Until the next chapter of No Rain!! ~Jade

Reviewer: Natasha Johnson
Date: 03/01/06 18:37
Chapter: The Truth Is Out

I honestly don't know what to think. But it doesn't really matter, seeing as this story is over already, and I'm almost done with it. Ah well...

Reviewer: Natasha Johnson
Date: 03/01/06 18:30
Chapter: Behind The Mask

Oh that sucks. I wonder what Sirius and Sydney are doing right now though...okay, I must lighten my mood by telling you which parts were my favorite from the last few chapters, since I keep forgetting, stupid me. ~“That James is into some pretty kinky stuff,” Sirius explained nervously, Peter nodding enthusiastically in agreement. “Ol’ Florence Merryweather ought to be able to account for that. I heard her calling him Zorro one night. Pretty disturbing if you ask me.” ~ “Come on, Syd,” Sirius pleaded. “Give the boy a break. I mean, he may not be the brightest candle in the chandelier, but his heart’s in the right place.” Alright, until the next!

Reviewer: Natasha Johnson
Date: 03/01/06 18:21
Chapter: Coming Clean

Yes! You didn't make it that Voldemort and Malfoy and everybody was after Lily! Big change, and I love it! There's not much more for me to say, unless you want to hear more about how much I love your story and how talented you are as a writer, lol.

Reviewer: Natasha Johnson
Date: 03/01/06 18:09
Chapter: Distractions

Ooooooo, buuuusted! That is way awesome. I honestly can't think of a better way to spill a secret, if you had to. Ok, I wanted to ask you a question. Are you a happy ending kind of person, or do you find that people dying in the ends of stories is unusual and original? Long-winded and confusing, yes I know, but I just want to know. Most of your fics seem pretty light-hearted, and I like that. Just seeing if you had a Too Sweet to Remember kind of side to you, lol.

Reviewer: Natasha Johnson
Date: 03/01/06 17:57
Chapter: The Morning After

I find it oddly concidental that we both used the name Evan Rosier in our fics. I never read this fic before starting mine though, so that's cool. My favorite part in the last chapter: “I’m not going because my hormones are out of whack like yours are,” Lily insisted. “I’m going to make sure that there is no fighting, drinking, no indecent exposure…” I just forgot to tell you that. Ew, Lucius Malfoy, what a fricken pervert! That is sooo nasty. Alright, again...next chapter.

Reviewer: Natasha Johnson
Date: 03/01/06 17:48
Chapter: The Dance

I was almost disgusted for a second, when that guy with the black mask was groping Lily, because I thought it was James, but then I remembered that you never said what color his mask was, so then I was better, lol. I love how you did everyone's individual meetings, that was very cute.

Reviewer: Natasha Johnson
Date: 03/01/06 17:39
Chapter: Losing The Surname

Haha, that was a really good chapter. My favorite parts were: “Shh,” Sydney hushed. “Something’s going on in her head that she doesn’t like. This happens usually around exam time. Lily honey, it’s ok. O.W.L’s are over. You did well on them.” ~ “You’re telling me,” Sirius said, looking over his shoulder. James turned to see Lily banging her head against the table. “Well, she had beauty and brains. Obviously, there was no room for sanity. Hey, you can’t have everything.” Very funny. But of course, you've already showed your brilliance with numerous other fics, so you know...next one...

Reviewer: Natasha Johnson
Date: 03/01/06 17:12
Chapter: The First Day Back

Yeah, I liked it. Especially the part where you made it seem like James had "filled-out", and had a deep voice and all that. That's how I feel every time I talk to my guy friends these days, lol. They grew up like that *snaps fingers*. On to the next...

Reviewer: Natasha Johnson
Date: 03/01/06 17:11
Chapter: The First Day Back

Yeah, I liked it. Especially the part where you made it seem like James had "filled-out", and had a deep voice and all that. That's how I feel every time I talk to my guy friends these days, lol. They grew up like that *snaps fingers*. On to the next...

Reviewer: Little_hoole3333
Date: 02/20/06 17:58
Chapter: The Red Mask

Hahaha, Zorro!

Reviewer: kels
Date: 02/16/06 18:49
Chapter: The Red Mask

That was absolutely awesome! I liked the whole story. It wasn't to fluffy it had enough warm and fuzzy and enought angst and worry and stuff plus you left us hanging a few times but I like the suspence.

Reviewer: wendelin the wierd
Date: 02/11/06 6:06
Chapter: The Dance

An excellent story! I mean usually a lot of james lily stories have a lot of cliches but yours have only a few and it is not really noticeable because you write so well. I am supposed to give some constructive criticism but i can't because there is not anything to criticise, your writing style, grammer, plotline, everything is excellent. Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: Lily4James
Date: 02/10/06 11:04
Chapter: The Red Mask

Hey, great ending. I loved that story and it wasn't too fluffy or sentimental either.

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