Aww! James is so cute ^-^ Sirius is stupid but amazing
The ending wasn't that weak. It was sweet. I loved this story so much, and like I said at the beginning, I can see why you're the number one favorite author on the site!
Noooooooooooo no cliffie! But, seeing as the next chapter is up already, I can read on! :) Wonderful story!
Oh dear. Great story!
uh oh... i cant wait to read the next chapter! Im so glad James is coming clean.
Uh oh. This is great, can't wait to read the next chapter :)
Nice. I wish James had told Lily though, although I do like the idea of her meeting him that night. Great story :)
Awww... very nice chapter. :)
Great! I love the little touch of humor in it. :)
I was just looking through the tens list, saw you, and saw this story! It's great, I can't wait to go ahead and read the rest of it! I know why you're on the top ten favorite authors list.
I don't think that was a weak ending at all, even if you seem to think so. It was a beautiful, touching, meaningful, sometimes funny story, and I think it fulfilled its purpose to the fullest.
Thank you, thank you, thank you! It was a wonderful story, and I think you really got their relationship right. Especially the fact that James was willing to do more than just die for her. He was going to be evil for her. He was willing to kill innocent people for her. (Well, kind of. . . that doesn't sound right. . . ah, well.) I'm really glad that the realized (finally!) that they love each other, and always will.
Again, thank you!
omg that happened soooowrong!!! that was NOT how she was supposed to find out!! i hate snape and malfoy!!
omg will sydney tell lily??
its james isn't it????? omg i love it... great plot. you really can capture a characters feelings well.
OMG I love this story!!! This is amazing you are so talented!!!
I LOVE YOUR WRITING SECRET LILY!! ESPECALLY THIS STORY. I think this one is awesome.
ooh some new stuff!
who's the guy in the mask!!! ahhhhh
hey its super good keep writing!
Aw, I'm buubling with contentment. I loved the ending, it speaks of happily ever after and the like. I'll just pretend what we know happens to them doesn't. I loved this fic, so thanks for writing it, hope to read more of your work soon.