Wow this story is very good. It isn't like most Lily/James love stories at all!
yesssssssssssssssssssssssss *pumps fist*
unexpected ending: yes it was
when i was reading the 6th chapter i thought "james should tell lily himself" and then i thought "nah it would be too fluffy". your way was better! congrats on a wonderful fic!
I loved this story! I just found it for the first time and it was wonderful! Great job!
That was a great story!I know i've never reveiwed before butr i've read Lily and James:Their Story Of Love, Catch My Fall,this one and their was one other but i forget the name! You're praticly all i read now! I LOVE them!
Wow....so romantic!!!!!!!!!
I loved it and it couldn't be any better......lets face it.....ur a dam good writer....keep on writing cuse ur stories are amazing....at least the ones I read so far......can't wait for the ones to come!!!!!
Ps:I loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love this story. A little fluff never hurt anyone!
Oh my word. ok, I won't ever say that until I have sixteen great- grand children. but honestly, thsi is a great storyline!
le Priya
~'Just Because' et 'Quit Haunting Me Will You?'
I like the maskerade! I think it cause more intrestment! also, I like how Lily is STILL hostile towards James, but hes gentle, and patient. I want to see how he acted before, so maybe you should start earlyer ! your a great writer, and you have a lot of pontental! sorry that Im a tough judge, I hope you see it as a respetful comment more than critisem. ( sorry that I cant spell!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That story is great! at last ive found a lily/james story with a happy ending!!!!!! oh and if any one knows and other lily/james stories with a good ending(not their death plz!) im begging you to tell me!
That story is great! at last ive found a lily/james story with a happy ending!!!!!! oh and if any one knows and other lily/james stories with a good ending(not their death plz!) im begging you to tell me!
That story is great! at last ive found a lily/james story with a happy ending!!!!!! oh and if any one knows and other lily/james stories with a good ending(not their death plz!) im begging you to tell me!
wait im confused i thought the first guy was james because he would mess up like that...the guy that lily kissed now was james right?
Great story! I didn't write any reviews until this one because I wanted to keep reading and not take time to review. I think the ending was a little weak. But besides that the story was great.
The ending was a little fast, but I really liked the overall story. Very creative!
liked the story but the ending was too abrupt
I think I know where he got the idea from. Its kinda hard not t when you have been studying a book for so long. I think the idea came from "Romeo and Juliet" As did the masquerade.
"If a Slytherin boy and a Gryffindor girl get to know one another at the dance, who knows what could happen? The entire feud could be broken. The ideas and traditions of each house could combine and create a more equal atmosphere.” I love it!
i can hear my heart breaking.sheesh!!i'm a sucker for love stories.
