Reviewer: FrednGeorge4eva
Date: 06/24/05 21:57
Chapter: The News

WOW! You really know how to add just the right stuff to a character to make them have depth. I liked how you said JK was a writer for the daily prophet- clever. Hey-if you ever get a wild hair could you review my story, it hasn't come out yet but I'm hoping it will (I'm a firstie!) That would be awesome-if it does come out, it's called Snivellus. Awesome chapter! Can't wait for the next!

Author's Response: Thanks. In later volumes of my Lilly Green series (I just finished the final copy of the third Lilly Green book), I make the changes I made to J.K. Rowling's. KNow what I'm saying? I make her seem like the lyer, instead of me, so my story seems like it's real to Lilly. I have COMPLETE respect for JK though. SHe's my idol! Thanks again for reviewing, and I will review yours!

Reviewer: Eleanor_Prewett
Date: 06/24/05 19:16
Chapter: The News

Ahh! Finally! It works! Okay, I've already reviewed to you personally, but I thought I'd leave one here anyway, just for posterity's sake. Lovely. That is the best word I've come up with to describe this fic so far. It is lovely and quaint with some tantalizing questions seeping lightly into the story yet is wonderfully bright and happy. Lily, too reminds me of several people in the story, people we don't seem to know much about but, as I just finished telling Magical_Maeve, the last time I guessed about something like this I was dreadfully wrong. So I'll just keep my suspicions to myself, as you've actually given us no reason to suspect Lily of taking on becoming someone we're familiar with in the series. I do hope you're second chapter is accepted soon. Please let me know if I can do anything to help out. ~Ellie

Author's Response: Wow, thanks a lot. I'd like to hear more about what you think about Lilly, because it sounds so interesting. I'm so glad I'm getting good reviews. Well, if you wanted to help me, could you find out what's taking so long to accept chapters? The second chapter has been in queue for like 4 days, and I want it approved! Anyway, thanks a million!

Reviewer: starlettem1
Date: 06/24/05 0:16
Chapter: The News

Interesting. This Lily girl sounds rather familiar, but I'm not going to hazrd a guess just yet. Keep it up, it's going well. Also I have to say you are great with pacing. You really kept the story moving along. I'm awful at that. LOL

Author's Response: Well, thanks you very much! Who does Lilly remind you of? Lol. Anyway, I've sent in the second chpt, and its been rejected! argh! I appriciate your review. I wish I got more. I'm dying to know what people think. Tell your friends!

Reviewer: BVBandGirl
Date: 06/22/05 23:17
Chapter: The News

Oooie this is very good. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Wow! Thanks! I'm glad my first review is a good one! I hope future ones are like it! Actually, I've sent in the second chapter twice, and it's been rejected saying Lilly's too boring. So I spiced her up. I hope it makes it!

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