Kinda serious, but cools too
Well, I can't wait for the next story, cuz that was really short and weird. There shoulda been more action, even for the prolouge. however, if they're gonna go back and spend more time in Action World, then I'll shut up, yes?
Er...dun dun dun?! It's good, But there's just not much to it... and there's only 2 chapters in the WHOLE THING?! NO! Anyhoo, right now I'd say: stick to the humor in script form. But, I should prolly read chapter 2 first, yes?
oo i thought the other story was already up
wow great story off to read part2
Oh wow, that was weird.
Cool. Deep. Deeply Cool. This is one of the first fanfics I've read where Harry and Ron aren't portrayed as idiots. I love it!!!!?!!! (I don't know why I threw in the question mark) ; )
Very interesting. Can't wait for more.
Hrrmph. I don't know why this story has so few stars right now. I mean, nothing's perfect, but I really, really like it. Well done xD I'm going to read the other one now...
Odd that the "Dark" characters didn't question them more and automatically seemed to know where they were from and that everything was opposite. I would react quite differently if that happened to me!
intriguing. wonder what the opposites are like. hope you continue soon
Erm... great story idea, but it seems a little cliched, and there are no spaces between paragraphs. Also, it seems really rushed, and not much detail. No diss on you, though, I do hope to see more of it.
Author's Response: I sent in a whole new story idea of mine about the characters of the alternate world...It's just like a HP storyline would be, but I made it myself and the characters and some things about them are different. Thanks for the input - I hope you'll like the series of How The Other Half Lives better :)
This is very interesting. Hope u add more soon