Reviews For Apples
Reviewer: Crazy Rat
Date: 09/13/06 17:04
Chapter: none

wow, this is really good. The plot is so original and the characters are developed more than i've seen in other stroys. loved it, 10/10!

Reviewer: Madnessisme
Date: 02/04/06 8:30
Chapter: none

Wow. There's no otehr word for it - just wow. That was really original. And I mean really. I'm pretty sure that Morgan has to do with something ... something nagging at the back of my mind, but I can't remember what. I love the bit about her brother not waking up. Adds a bit of mystery to it. I know there has to be a backstory to this ... and if the reviewer below me is right, then I think I better re-read my King Arthur books again.

My favourite line in this fic is most definitely:
They were on the downswing at the moment, but soon enough they'd be moving up again.
It just stands out so ... and like Ron, I believe, even though I'm not a part of the wizarding world. =)

And as for constructive critiscm ... this fic doesn't need it. It's wonderful just as it is. I gice it a 10. And, added to my favourites!

Reviewer: HanilarLion
Date: 01/30/06 17:43
Chapter: none

This was a fic as sweet as that enchanted apple. I like that you chose Ron as the main character. Was that Morgan as in Morgan le Fay? 10/10

Reviewer: bookaholic_au
Date: 09/12/05 22:22
Chapter: none

Fantastic! I love the Arthurian ledgends, it's nice to see someone else reads them. I like the apple isle bit, nice and subtle.

Reviewer: HPotter7
Date: 06/26/05 12:31
Chapter: none

Wow, I loved your fan fic! It was really well written and I think it was really original! I'm very glad I stumbled upon this little story... It was different from anything I've ever read and I really enjoyed it! Well done and keep writing! Wow, 10/10 -HPotter7

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