Reviewer: tonks_667
Date: 04/14/06 19:06
Chapter: one-shot

OMG!! That was so cool!! Loved it loved it loved it!!! If you can tell I think that has to be the best! LOL Really fun to read.

Author's Response: lol, thanks, it was really fun to write =)

Reviewer: Big_Kelpie
Date: 03/30/06 14:57
Chapter: one-shot

uuuuuuuuuuuuu Great story uuuuu

Author's Response: lol...uuu thank uuuuuuu!!!! =)

Reviewer: Bookwormy
Date: 03/26/06 9:12
Chapter: one-shot

LOL!! Very good! I'm not saying you didn't summamarize(sorry for spelling mistake) it properly, but when I read the summary, I didn't feel like reading it, but seeing the no of reviews you got, I thought there must be something special. So I read it and I am glad I did! You should write more!!

Author's Response: im glad u decided to read it and weren't disipointed when u did! I have 2 other stories on here, but at the moment am in college and just don't have the time to write unfortunately...but i'm glad u like this one enough to want to read more =)

Reviewer: the nutty imp
Date: 02/11/06 7:56
Chapter: one-shot

Extremely funny :) The use of italics to separate the monogue is a unique way to segregate each character. Great use of a bit of exageration and point blank truth to get your humour across. I truly enjoyed this

Author's Response: thanks for the kind words...i'm glad you enjoyed it =)

Reviewer: uber_angelus
Date: 02/11/06 5:39
Chapter: one-shot

I think that you have a really good style of writing, sometimes humour fics are very difficult to pull off effectively but you have managed it, and I take my hat off to you for that.

I think that the way you parody each of the characters you mention is very well written, playing on each characters weaknesses and exploiting them to the full. I think that this is a style which is not very often used and should be used a lot more as it makes the humour come a lot easier. Of course, there are some characters parodies which I enjoyed much more than others, I particularly enjoyed Harryís comments about Luna, when he almost begins to cry again. Excellent. People predominantly portray Harry as some kind of staunch hero in fanfics, and to show a lot weaker side of him, and then have Ron mock him about it was terribly well thought out and written!

My one criticism is the large amount of italics you put in your fic does make it a little hard to read in places, but that is a criticism of the presentation, and not the story itself.

I think that the format of the story was good, itís not often you read stories that are written like an interview and I think that this further hints at your talent for spotting a gap in the market and exploiting it.

Overall, this was a very well written story, and if it wasnít for the Scavenger Hunt I would never have found it. Please continue your writing as this story was a joy to read from beginning to end.

Author's Response: thank you so much for your awesome review! this story was one of my favorites to write. I wrote a second one to it that was playing off of the profs at hogwarts but I was never able to get it approved, I suppose I shouldn't have given up on it but my school work has bogged me down...perhaps i'll try to fix it and get it up if I can find the time. Thanks again for taking the time to review and point out specific things, it's really helpful and encouraging! =)

Reviewer: Dunni
Date: 12/06/05 10:07
Chapter: one-shot

That was brillant.

Author's Response: thanks =)

Reviewer: Lilypudding
Date: 11/10/05 19:43
Chapter: one-shot

*sobbing with laughter 2 hard to form words* oh my god that was funny. emotional harry was a little scary though. did u honestly write this pre- HBP cuz u've got some of the general ideas in there... like lavender being a flirt and fluer and bill getting married. just how come luna was outranked by krum and do u spell that.... was Ginny even on the list? still absolutely hilarious, 10 million out of 10

Author's Response: lol, thanks...yeah i really wrote it post hbp...i have another i did about the teachers post hbp but i'm having trouble getting it approved...glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Solika
Date: 09/11/05 18:39
Chapter: one-shot

*giggles* How nice!!! Emotional Harry..oh God..*laughs* And Ron..*laughs more* Oh Ron.. Honestly, it was really good :D

Author's Response: lol...i'm glad i could make you laugh =)

Reviewer: Identically Opposite
Date: 08/28/05 11:51
Chapter: one-shot

HA HA HA! *Starts to tear* Ha ha! *takes deep breath* Ahhhhhhhhhh...ok...i'm good now...anyway...This is OT and I loved your story! It was sooooo funny!

Author's Response: wow...ur sister reviews all the i feel special, u've both reviewed this fic, lol=)

Reviewer: potterchic
Date: 08/26/05 17:37
Chapter: one-shot

That was awesome!

Author's Response: WOOHOO!!!!!!!=D

Reviewer: LilyPotter
Date: 08/25/05 19:40
Chapter: one-shot

Emo (sort of) means emotional. Don't feel bad though, my brother had to tell me ;-)

Author's Response: thanks for edumacating me=D

Reviewer: LilyPotter
Date: 08/24/05 23:06
Chapter: one-shot

Luvli! I can't help but wonder: whats with emo Harry??? (Hilarious, yet creepy...) 10/10

Author's Response: so is that what emo means? im so out of touch, thanks for all the reviews=)

Reviewer: Gabriele Dumble
Date: 08/23/05 13:33
Chapter: one-shot

Cute story, but why did you have Harry sobbing? Harry doesn't always control himself but he is not a crier. While the rest of your story was very good, that just sounded wrong.

Author's Response: double post, tee hee=)

Author's Response: double post, tee hee=)

Reviewer: Gabriele Dumble
Date: 08/23/05 13:31
Chapter: one-shot

Cute story, but why did you have Harry sobbing? Harry doesn't always control himself but he is not a crier. While the rest of your story was very good, that just sounded wrong.

Author's Response: oh well, sorry u didn't see the humor in it...but i'm glad it didn't spoil the rest of the fic for u=)

Reviewer: Splatteh
Date: 08/20/05 7:24
Chapter: one-shot

I DID NOT think it was dumb!! It was very funny!! Plus you predicted all the ships right!! (if you wrote this before HBP)

Author's Response: I'm glad you DID NOT think it was dumb, lol...yes it was written b4 heart was all a flutter when I was reading it, lol...thanks for the review=)

Reviewer: imaphysco
Date: 08/17/05 12:13
Chapter: one-shot

WOW! that is one of my new favorites..ron was were harry luna. you get a hugemungo block of chocolat! i CANNOT wait 4 the sequal!

Author's Response: yay!!!! im glad you like it!!! i love for the sequel having trouble getting it excepted...trying to get some help and we'll see what happens after that...thanks for the review=)

Reviewer: H_Granger
Date: 08/01/05 21:02
Chapter: one-shot

Hey, that was good! I hadn't originally planned to read it when I saw the summary, but I was bored, so I read it, and i'm really glad I did!

Author's Response: lol, i'm glad you decided to read and review my fic despite my inability to summarize, thanks=)

Reviewer: Over40Potterfan
Date: 08/01/05 9:51
Chapter: one-shot

I have always liked the shows about former child stars. Good job on the story! I anxiously await your next fanfic. Go Luna!! (How fun it must have been to play with her character!)

Author's Response: thank you, i'm glad you enjoyed it...i had been sitting in front of the tv watching a vh1's child star countdown marathon thingy and all of a sudden was like, hey this would be fun to do w/ the harry potter

Reviewer: ginny_flame
Date: 07/30/05 18:02
Chapter: one-shot

This was REALLY funny! I loved how Harry was crying and Luna was spacey!

Author's Response: thank you...i had fun writing this one=)

Reviewer: Quidditch_Freak
Date: 07/30/05 15:36
Chapter: one-shot

Hilarious! Fantastic! Great! Funny! Giggle-worthy! Silly! Laughable! I'm running out of adjectives to describe this story, anyway, It made me laugh! 50/10

Author's Response: Thanks, much gratitude, very appreciativeÖummmm canít think of another term without leaving the English language, so Iíll leave it at that=)

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