loved it. write one with a happy ending though :(
oh my god, why did all fic about Draco+Hermione have sad_ending? I really don't like it, so I suggest (and hope) your next fic will have different end (you don't have to). Thank for your fic.
I really liked it so now can I have that cookie. Although there were a few things that were a bit off. I still expect that cookie.
ohhh short and sweet.liked it. :D
oh, well, it was fun to read. but hermion marying ron and having 5 weasley kids?!! very little chance to go bak to draco but anyway, i loved it. its good. very good.
Nice story - it would have been cool if it could be longer but you did a good job for a one shot!
nice begining but too short..... kind of like ok...............heu?
I really like your fiction ! Can I translate your fiction into Chinese? Would you mind that?Thank you very much !
this is a ::cough cough, sorry:: pretty sucky ending, no offense, the story just ends without any sense of fulfillment... try to extend the ending a bit, maybe include more about the mirror, not just the quote. you could maybe make them both pass by the mirror and see eachother (at different times) it gives a better sense of longing... although i do like the part where it says "he could never replace the feelings he had felt in those kisses. He didn't intend to either." !Sol
the concept was lovely but the ending seemed sorta rushed... ~sola
woah hermione and ron having five kids? dang!! thats a lot lol anyway draco and hermione had ahuge moment!! i mean huge!! and actually i could relate to that bcs somewhat similar happened to me!! weird huh!! anway great story above all!!
ok ill be a good little reader and review...this royally sucked!!! hows that for "constrictive criticism" eh?...lol
Loved it! You wrote it really well! Wish it could've been longer though, would've read on for sure! Just loved how you wrote Hermione! That was excellent, keep on writing, you got me hooked!
Now give me my cookie!!!!! lol :-)
AWWW.... this was a really good story!!
i like it alot
i like it alot
I really like this story. It's so cute! (can I have a cookie now,please?) 10/10
nice fic.. i thought that draco and hermione would endd up together... but hey... this is not bad either