Reviewer: Ginzig
Date: 05/07/06 23:09
Chapter: Have Yourself a Miserable Little Christmas

Evil cliffie! Very cool idea about the telepathy. Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Yeah, yeah...I know...sorry about the cliffie. So many people are telling me it was evil. I can't wait to get people's reactions on the first line of the next chapter :)

Reviewer: Accio_Chocolate
Date: 05/07/06 21:45
Chapter: Have Yourself a Miserable Little Christmas

The incantations were very cool. I was glad to see the wands and amulet back from CoC. And Luna, what can I say? Good chapter, can't wait for the next one, you evil cliffie maker you!

Author's Response: There will be more CoC references in the next chapter (a little Milius anyone?) And again with the calling me an evil cliffie maker! Are you guys like, in a club or something? :)

Reviewer: red_potter
Date: 05/06/06 21:51
Chapter: Happy Hour

You story is tantalizing! Keep up the good work. For some reason, though, the site won't let me read chapter 14. What's up with that?

Author's Response: Thanks soo much! Maybe it wasn't up yet when you tried to read it. When I submit a chapter, people can see it, but can't read it until it gets validated.

Reviewer: red_potter
Date: 05/06/06 21:50
Chapter: Happy Hour

You story is tantalizing! Keep up the good work. For some reason, though, the site won't let me read chapter 14. What's up with that?

Reviewer: Es21232
Date: 05/06/06 16:59
Chapter: Happy Hour

AWESOME!!!!! I finally got in to read it, and just like all your other chapters, IT WAS EXTREMELY FABULOUS! 10/10

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I appreciate your rating, even though they took them out!

Reviewer: believerofmajick
Date: 05/05/06 20:48
Chapter: Vanished

I LOVE the singing jewelry reference! Ironically enough, I am watching the 10th Kingdom right now. Crazy! Great chapter writing.

Author's Response: I love the 10th Kingdom and watch it on a regular basis. It was inevitable that it would come up in my writing.

Reviewer: Girl marauder
Date: 05/05/06 13:07
Chapter: Happy Hour

AAARGH! Must... have... next... chapter... when will it validate??? Come on you 'administrators', hurry up!!!
CraftySlytherin, you're the best, but why do you end your chapters at the most interesting point?! Me - need - more! :D

Author's Response: Sorry about that! I try to make all of my chapters end nicely, then my evil twin comes along, types in a new ending, and hits the submit story button. It's SO aggrivating!

Reviewer: Jenn_Weasley
Date: 05/05/06 12:19
Chapter: Happy Hour

That was a great chapter! I like how you broke up the stress of the situation with a little drunken humor. *shaking head to get rid of college flashbacks* I'm very interested to know who is watching them at Hogwarts. They can get away from Pansy so she can't be the spy. Have I missed something? Do I need to go back and reread? Anyway, I'm looking forward to the validation of your new chapter. Thanks!!!

Author's Response: No, Jenn, you didn't miss anything. I've not said anything about how they're being watched. It's a mystery!

Reviewer: CannonChaser
Date: 05/03/06 21:05
Chapter: Happy Hour

OHHHHH MY GOSH!!!!!!!!!!!!! what did lucious do to hermione!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! respond ASAP!!!!!

Author's Response: Sorry....but I'm not telling. Anyways, you've already read the next chapter since it's up. :)

Reviewer: marauders maidens
Date: 05/03/06 20:39
Chapter: Happy Hour

Gaaaa upadate now I love this story please hurry up! I need Prongs to read this!

Author's Response: It's updated!

Reviewer: lisa_lovegood
Date: 05/03/06 15:24
Chapter: Happy Hour





How can you do this! Your so mean!!! eeeeeevilness!!! DONT HURT HERMY!!!! or luna for that matter...10/10 Lisa xxx

Author's Response: Sorry :) Anyone who's read the fourth part of this series (yes, there's a fourth part. Caves of Concealment is the first, this is the second, and Hogwarts: The Next Generation is the fourth. Why did I write the fourth before the third? I don't know...I'm just weird) will know the fate of Hermione and Luna. Hogwarts: The Next Generation kind of does a little revealing about this story.

Reviewer: FutureOscarWinner
Date: 05/03/06 10:45
Chapter: Summertime Surprises

ooooh! Please post chapter.14 soon!! I just started to read your story last night, and I loved it!!! However, the suspense is toooo much! But good job really! I think you've got a great story here!!

Author's Response: Well, chapter 14 is written, I just need to type it up. I'm afraid it doesn't end much better ;) I'll get it up soon!

Reviewer: winky123
Date: 05/03/06 8:37
Chapter: Happy Hour

I felt a little guilty this chapter because I know I'm supposed to be worried sick about Hermione and Luna, but Ron and Draco did some of the funniest things especially when Ron tells Harry about why Ginny only wears green knickers. hehe.

Poor Zeppie, I would be scared too if someone started acting like an aeroplane :S

I'm glad they were able to receive their gifts and the Harry/Ginny stuff was ever so fluffy and wonderful.

I thought it was so cute that Hermione owns pajamas with dancing toothbrushes on them.

Lucius is horrid! I wonder what happened to Hermione? I guess I will just have to wait and find out.

Favourite word: 'Snockered' - What a marvellous word!

Favourite line: ''We’re not asposed…sucrost…explosed…we’re not allowed.” :D Genius.

Author's Response: Hey Winky! I was hoping that someone would find drunk Draco and Ron amusing :) Did you like 'snockered'? I'm not sure if it's a real word or if I made it up. Sounded good though.

Reviewer: mugglemaddness17
Date: 05/03/06 8:05
Chapter: Happy Hour

oooo how ominous i cant wait to see what happnes next i hope draco's dad and greyback get it good.

Author's Response: Well...we shall see, shalln't we? We shall see. :)

Reviewer: CannonChaser
Date: 05/03/06 6:55
Chapter: Morgan's Tale

AN Antipodean Opaleye!!!!!!

Author's Response: Why yes it is!

Reviewer: pandafan81
Date: 05/03/06 0:28
Chapter: Happy Hour

NOOOOOO! Not Fenrir! And where's Hermione?!?! :) excellent chapter. I especially liked the drunk Ron and Draco. Ron telling Harry that Ginny wears green underwear was priceless! Although I find it odd that Lucius would sign his letters to his son "Lucius" and "L.M." and not "father". Just a suggestion. Overall a fantastic chapter and I can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: All right, panda's here! As always I appreciate your feedback. I think that, perhaps, you are right. I will go back and change the closings of the letters.

Reviewer: ColorOfAngels
Date: 05/02/06 20:35
Chapter: Vanished

10th kingdom....typo there....

Author's Response: It's alright, I understand. I love 10th Kingdom! BTW- Turn's out that all of Shocker Girl's stories were plagerized from over here on MNFF. ALL of them. She has officially deleted her entire account. High five!!

Reviewer: ColorOfAngels
Date: 05/02/06 20:33
Chapter: Vanished

when I was reading that part I was like O.o thats from the 19th kingdom!!!!!!!!! I love that movie!!!! I also loved the idea of the teddy bears that can talk...i totally want one....

Author's Response: Thanks! It's the mythical 19th Kingdom? Talked of only in myth :) Sorry, just poking a bit of fun at you. I wouldn't do it if I didn't know you weren't a great person!!

Reviewer: KenF
Date: 05/02/06 19:27
Chapter: Happy Hour

Uh Oh!!!!!

Author's Response: Teeheehee!

Reviewer: Accio_Chocolate
Date: 05/02/06 18:39
Chapter: Happy Hour

Ok, I know they were drinking because they have their hands tied and can't get Hermione or Luna back, but I had to laugh at Draco and Ron's antics. Personally, I make motorcycle noises when I drink fire whiskey. *demonstrates by turning handlebars and going VROOM VROOM* And an evil cliffie! Hermione gone from the picture, and no mention of Greyback!

Author's Response: It's okay. I meant for you to laugh at their antics. I like to be a train when indulging in the old Ogden's. *choo choo!!!!!* Sorry about the cliff. You okay down there? I'm afraid the next chapter also has a bit of a drop off at the end, so you may want to bring climbing gear when you read it :)

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