Interesting, very interesting. I like, love it, just want more of it! great job!
Author's Response: Are you by any chance a country music fan? :)
hey! it's really really good!!! I just love the part when Rowena speaks to Ginny!!!
Keep up the good work!
And....please update soon!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I liked that part myself :)
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Hurray! Millius is back!! I've missed that ghost. I didn't think he had to stay in the Caves anymore.
I love the details in your story. Ginny's note getting lost and the boys getting a search party together. The glass case containing Gryffindor's spell book. I especially liked the talking Rowena pencil sketch (and that Godric liked to curse!) I think that's one thing that makes your stories to unique- the attention to detail.
I'm very interested in this portal- and where exactly it will send Lucius. It is kind of like a portable version of the veil at the Department of Mysteries?
As always, I look forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: No, he doesn't have to stay in the caves anymore, but he was there so long it's kind of hard to break the habit, know what I mean? As for the portal, I see it as being a kind of passage in to some kind of limbo, so yes, I suppose you could say it's like the Veil. And thanks for the compliments on the detail!
Please hurry with the addtions and also I vote that a cool twist would to be Draco on Lucius's side all along!!!!! just my opinon.!!!
Author's Response: Draco on Lucius's side? Boy, that would sure throw off my whole series! :)
Draco Malfoy is friends with Harry, Hermione, and the Weasleys, and is dating Luna Lovegood. Charlie is falling for a dragon. Before I started reading this story, I would have said this was impossible to pull off without some serious OOC-ness. Thanks for proving me wrong. Somehow, you've managed all of this while still making it believable, and I salute you for it.
As for this chapter, I think you did a really good job. Ron's right -- Ginny is sort of filling in for Hermione. I can't wait until they go after Lucius, although I would kind of like to see Morgan roast him instead. Maybe she can get Fenrir. :) Keep up the good work. We're all anxiously anticipating the next chapter.
Author's Response: Wow! Your compliments are the best type an author likes to hear. I really appreciate them :) And I won't say how, but you have hit the nail right on the head about something.
Another marvelous chapter - as always... :) I like this Chaos Portal thingy - very powerfull. Can't wait 'till Lucius Malfoy gets sucked in that black hole! :D
Question: Where do people go when they're sucked in anyway? Cause I'm wondering where that poor Teddy went! *sniff sniff* :DDD
Author's Response: Please don't worry about Teddy! If you remember, he got changed into a fake Lucius before they disappeared him. The Chaos Portal sucks the target into a kind of limbo.
Sounds like an interesting spell. Maybe they can solve Fenrir with it too?
I especially liked Ron's line about Ginny turning into Hermione and picking fights.
Author's Response: Actually, I have different plans for old Fenrir :)
Whoa-the chaos portal is so cool!!!!! I was so excited to see another chapter posted. I can't wait to read more!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll get it submitted as soon as it's written.
I LOVE MAGIC............I can't wait for the next chapter. Ginny can give Hermione a run for her money.
Author's Response: Gotta have a bossy female around, and since Hermione's unavailable, Ginny took the job :)
marvelous chapter but I have one small nitpick: at the Gryffendor/Ravenclaw breakfast you say Ernie and Hannah sit next to Ginny but both of them are Hufflepuffs... but other than that, the story's going great and I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks for the small nitpick! I feel so stupid. I went back and changed it. I very much appreciate it!
YESSSSSSS, FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LETS KILL LUCIUS MALFOY, LETS KILL LUCIUS MALFOY, LETS KILL HIM!!!!!!!!!!!!!! fantabulastic! (sorry, i like making up words...) cant wait for more!!!!!!!!! 10/10
Author's Response: That's okay. I use made up words all the time. And yes, we are about to get down to business!!
NO!!! its like this with every one of my favorite stories!!! **WHY US?*
Author's Response: Sorry :) I've received a validation email, but they said they are having trouble getting it up. They are working on it and so hopefully it will be up soon, so keep checking back!
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a cople of chapters! *faints* lol only jokin...well I'm not but you know what i mean...whatever. haha
Author's Response: Well, that's a very rough estimate. I was guessing. Also, I'll start right in on the next part of the story as soon as this is up. The third part will deal with Ginny and Luna's final year at Hogwarts, what Ron, Hermione, Harry, and Draco are doing then, and *gulp* the final battle. Hope you'll keep reading!
A little something for everyone. Nice.
Author's Response: Thanks!
wow!! totally amazing!!! i really love it!! pleeeease update soon!! please!!
Author's Response: Amazing? Thanks! You all make me feel so great *blush*
OMG. (G for gosh) Two words: Update quickly
Author's Response: Gonna try and get 15 submitted tomorrow.
Anyone ever tell you this would make an amazing movie?
Author's Response: No, but that is SUCH an awesome compliment! Thanks! ;)
Oh, i just love the conscience. Bit of comic relief if you ask me.
Author's Response: I love to add comic relief in my stories, usually in the form of the Weasley twins :)