Reviewer: girlmagnet
Date: 06/25/05 22:48
Chapter: Godric's Hollow

AHHHHH!!! SUSPENSE! CLIFHANGER! how cld u do this 2 me..i luv ur story, tho its quite confusing..better explain every in nx xchappie! lkign 4ward n update!!!!!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. and don't worry, there will be a mega-explanation in the last chappie, so hang in there, I'm getting down to the nitty-gritty in the chapters. I only have two more(after the third gets accepted) chappies, so the end is in sight. Thanks for reviewing! **Gryffindorgrl**

Reviewer: dracoishotbutevil
Date: 06/23/05 16:22
Chapter: Godric's Hollow

Ahhhh! what happens next! Your mean. Lol, just kidding. Good story, update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks, and my third chapter should be up any day now. Thanks for reviewing and keep reading! *Gryffindorgrl**

Reviewer: cellygurl07
Date: 06/22/05 23:28
Chapter: Silent as the Grave

Wow, this story gave me chills. Please put more Ron. I think the renewal of the trio would be good. Please update soon!

Author's Response: I'm really glad that you like it. My third chapter is coming soon, it's being beta'd, so hang in there. And thanks for reviewing! **Gryffindorgrl**

Reviewer: hawaiianhulagal
Date: 06/19/05 4:44
Chapter: Godric's Hollow

Hey! No fair!! I'm hanging here, I thought Draco was suppose to be dead! Why did he fake his own death? Or is he an imposter in Poly Juice position? Urgh, the agony, now I have to wait for the next update! So PLEASE Hurry it up!

Author's Response: Hehehe, i'm sorry i put you in agony, but i had to have some plot development! the next chapter will be up soon, so hang in there! thanks for reading AND reviewing! -Gryffindorgrl

Reviewer: TheVanishingAct
Date: 06/18/05 19:22
Chapter: Silent as the Grave

I think it was really good, and I want a new chapter really soon. For some reason it sounded really good; and I loved it. Thank you for writing it! :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much - i'm really glad you like it, and my second chapter is up, and the third soon to be submited! keep reading, and thanks for reviewing!

Author's Response: Thanks so much - i'm really glad you like it, and my second chapter is up, and the third soon to be submited! keep reading, and thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: peaches
Date: 06/16/05 12:06
Chapter: Silent as the Grave

Hello, I really liked your story, but i noticed a few things that Paprika pointed out, in the spellings and things. but i also noticed one thing she didn't mention - Hogsmeade has an "e" at the end, and i noticed that you had it in there a few times, and it wasn't spelled right. sry, i just had to let you know that. but i really enjoyed this story and look forward to the next chapters!

Author's Response: Thank you! The spelling error, i already knew about, but i was too lazy to change it! thanks though for pointing it out. please hang around to read my next chapters! -Gryffindorgrl

Reviewer: _Monica_
Date: 06/16/05 10:41
Chapter: Silent as the Grave

After I got over the though of Malfoy & Hermione together I enjoyed this story VERY much you are a very good writer !!!

Author's Response: Well i'm really glad that you like my story, hopefully you'll stick around to read my other chapters too! thanks for the review -Gryffindorgrl

Reviewer: hawaiianhulagal
Date: 06/16/05 4:43
Chapter: Silent as the Grave

Dang it! I agree with Paprika, she beat me to my own review. lol

Author's Response: its ok, that someone beat you to it, i'm just glad someone is reviewing my story! like i told paprika, draco's change will be explained more in later chapters, so keep reading! thanks again for the review. -Gryffindorgrl

Reviewer: Paprika
Date: 06/15/05 23:38
Chapter: Silent as the Grave

First off, I would like to say that I have found your story to be very intriguing and I can't wait for the next chapter. While reading through the story; however, I spotted a few minor errors. Quote- "son whos cheeks" just a small nit-picky correction- "who's" would be "whose" in this case. Also, a britpick for you- favorite would be spelled favourite. It would probably be a good thing if you showed how, if and when Draco changed, he was very out of character from the little we saw of him. But I liked this story. You have a nice writing style, and this is a twist on Draco/Hermione that I have never seen before. I applaud your originality. Hermione was very in character, and I'm sure that you will do a good job with Draco if you explain the change in him. I look forward to reading new chapters from you! ~Paprika

Author's Response: Thanks, Paprika for reading my story and for the helpful hints. in my next chapters, draco's change will be explained a little more, so just wait.... i'm glad you enjoyed my story, and i appreciate the nit-picky corrections, they'll make me more aware of HOW i'm writing instead of WHAT i'm writing. -Gryffindorgrl

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