Reviews For Toxic
Reviewer: thesmilethatsaddens
Date: 12/27/05 21:25
Chapter: Chapter 08: Bound

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love this chapter!! i laughed throughout most of it! i especially cracked up when Ron yelled out that Hermione was his girlfriend!

Reviewer: thesmilethatsaddens
Date: 12/27/05 21:00
Chapter: Chapter 07: Surprise

oh my...holy shit...HAHAHAHA!!! how'll they go to the bathroom??...

Reviewer: KoolGirl
Date: 12/26/05 9:37
Chapter: Chapter 17: Dreaming

omg if u dony update soon im gonna kill myself!!!! update!

Reviewer: magic_mayhem2
Date: 12/24/05 8:31
Chapter: Chapter 17: Dreaming

omg come on u made me wait 20 chapters for the snogging scene?!?!?!?! man, idd give u a 110000000000000000000000000000 but that is not a bloody choice so ill go with a 10!

Reviewer: xcxcharlottexcx
Date: 12/23/05 19:16
Chapter: Chapter 17: Dreaming

The dream creapt me out abit but otherwise this chapter was really good. I love this story. I can't wait for an update. *****10/10***** :D

Reviewer: KneazleWeazl
Date: 12/22/05 18:52
Chapter: Chapter 17: Dreaming

FINALLY OH MY GOD!!!! Twenty chapters and their first kiss is in the twentieth! Uh, update soon as ya' can, garrr... I'd give ya' an eleven rating but, that is unfortunately not a choice.

Reviewer: sadako
Date: 12/22/05 18:51
Chapter: Chapter 17: Dreaming

Aww, that was wonderful!! When I read the summary, I was so excited Can't wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: hawaiianhulagal
Date: 12/22/05 1:36
Chapter: Chapter 17: Dreaming

That was a creepy dream, but the snog at the end SO made up for it! Glad it finally happened. I wonder if Draco's dream will become reality, up to a certain point of course.

Reviewer: hawaiianhulagal
Date: 12/22/05 1:16
Chapter: Chapter 16: Collecting Information

Oh, so Draco was snooping! Darn! I was kind of hoping for a bit of seperation anxiety issue. *shrugs shoulders* Oh well, makes it bit more interesting. As for moving it into General, if Draco's snooping, and other side stories are going to be the main focus with a dash of romance, I don't see why you wouldn't re categorize. I'll keep on reading till you finish.

Reviewer: as_the_7thmonth_dies
Date: 12/21/05 22:48
Chapter: Chapter 17: Dreaming

ooh!!! i love that! keep it up!

Reviewer: dracoishotbutevil
Date: 12/21/05 20:24
Chapter: Chapter 17: Dreaming

yay! im the first review! lol. GREAT chapter!!! although, the summarry gave it away and i knew that the first part was a dream and that malfoy would kiss hermione.... but other than that it was awesome. thanx a million for updating this fast!!! you win my bestestest fic of the month award... lol i just created it... never mind bye

Reviewer: dracoishotbutevil
Date: 12/20/05 9:51
Chapter: Chapter 16: Collecting Information

yay!! im so glad your updating quickly, its such a good fic. haha, malfoy stealing the butterbeer, that was funny... ok, anyways, 10/10, keep writing, ya, etc.

Reviewer: Sorcerer
Date: 12/20/05 2:09
Chapter: Chapter 16: Collecting Information

yourstory is awsome! love it and can't wait for more chapters.

Reviewer: loligo8me
Date: 12/19/05 19:19
Chapter: Chapter 16: Collecting Information

I've been following this story and just love it! Very nicely written. Great character development. I think it should stay in the romance section, definitely. It's really good that you include other characters but still stick to Hermione and Draco being the main characters. 10 from me!

Reviewer: shyangel
Date: 12/19/05 18:06
Chapter: Chapter 16: Collecting Information

i love your story! I've been reading it for awhile, but i don't read any stories in the general category. I just read in the romance section. So, please don't move it, besides their more romance than anything else in this story. good job! keep up the good work!

Reviewer: Magical_Amour
Date: 12/19/05 16:40
Chapter: Chapter 16: Collecting Information

Very nicely written. Please keep writing. <3 Love, Magical_Amour

Reviewer: miss patil
Date: 12/19/05 16:06
Chapter: Chapter 16: Collecting Information

I love your story!! I know that it has some sub plots, but I think that it should stay under Romance because it has a lot of that too. Its really good! Update soon!

Reviewer: crazyhpgirl
Date: 12/19/05 15:28
Chapter: Chapter 06: Curses

This is wonderful so far! I always knew Hermione would get fed up enough with Draco to hex him. Once my fan fic gets on the net, could possibly critique it for me? Yours gets a 10/10

Reviewer: hawaiianhulagal
Date: 12/14/05 1:37
Chapter: Chapter 15: Sweets and Secrets

Oh the intrigue just gets better and better. Mysterious *coughs Viktor coughs* man enters town. And Draco follows Hermione around like a love sick puppy.

Reviewer: slytherinfox
Date: 12/13/05 11:48
Chapter: Chapter 15: Sweets and Secrets

please update soon!

Author's Response: An update is on its way; I'm working on chapter 19 right now! I am aiming for after the holidays to update again, so please be patient! Thanks! :)

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