Nice start. I liked how you added Viktor into the summer vacation. I await you next update.
Author's Response: Um, will I spoil it for everyone if I say we MIGHT see Vicky again?? LOL
It has a good start. Though other stories have Hermione as Head Girl, you've done a good job grabbing my interest! Please write more soon. ^_^
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope I don't disappoint! :o)