Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie
Date: 02/10/06 16:46
Chapter: One-shot

I agree with IckleGinnyKins. That was brilliant. I loved it! Such a good idea. I really like this line, "Sure, Ginny, riding invisible monsters hundreds of miles in the air, rushing head-on into the Department of Mysteries after-hours, diving right into a situation where you know Voldemort is involved—oh all in a day’s work, nothing to fear. But a small thing like kissing a boy, and you turn into jelly." HEhe. I can't say that I've ever experienced either of those, but hehehe, it was still a great quote. There were other ones, but that one was the first. Great Job!

Reviewer: IckleGinnyKins
Date: 12/26/05 12:28
Chapter: One-shot

That was bloody brilliant it really was!!!, i read it everyday over and over, can't get enough of it... write some more!!!!!

Reviewer: violagirl
Date: 12/23/05 9:54
Chapter: One-shot

omg i loved this! perfect harry/ginny story and so original! keep up the good work!

Reviewer: aRRa_b00m
Date: 11/12/05 10:05
Chapter: One-shot

LOL!!! I loved it!!!! Sweet, funny... the ending was great esp.... lol, so Harry's been using the chews on Ginny, too... who would've thought... lolz... Great job!

Reviewer: cherry30023
Date: 10/26/05 4:15
Chapter: One-shot

OHHHH! It's one of the best storys I've ever read! 10/10! I love it, I didn't expect harry to have given her 3 though! Nice little twist! It's a great concept and I'm going to see if you have written any other storyes now! CEEP WRIGHTING FOR THE LOVE OF HUMANITY!

Reviewer: Gin Ovia
Date: 08/27/05 5:34
Chapter: One-shot

That was (to quote Ron) bloody brilliant! Gred and Forge were outstandingly ingenius. I never would have guessed Harry gave her 3! I did have my suspisions that he ahd given her one tho! I loved every word of this! *10*

Reviewer: Reading Fool
Date: 08/18/05 1:59
Chapter: One-shot

It was great. Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: Sudha53
Date: 08/16/05 20:55
Chapter: One-shot

i loved this story! it was absolutely sweet with the cutest twist on it. I could just picture all that imagery. Good job! looking forward to reading more of your work.

Reviewer: Sorn
Date: 08/15/05 22:25
Chapter: One-shot

This is the second story I have read of yours and I can say they are both great!

Reviewer: ryan potter
Date: 08/06/05 8:07
Chapter: One-shot

that was an awsome story please make a sequel or something like that

Reviewer: ryan potter
Date: 08/06/05 8:07
Chapter: One-shot

that was an awsome story please make a sequel or something like that

Reviewer: the_dwc
Date: 08/05/05 0:26
Chapter: One-shot

I don't say this about many stories but it was AWESOME! You made it seem like it was written by JK herself. The sound of the candy is sort of funny. But what I don't get is how come when Ginny handed Harry the Forget Me Do Chew don't you think he would have said no because he knew what it looks like and the same way for Ginny when she was given the candy? Thats the only problem I found with this story! It was a pleasure to read!

Reviewer: Sailfast
Date: 08/01/05 23:09
Chapter: One-shot

It was a great fic! One of my favorites I love how you got Fred and George's personalities, the twists were a great kick too. Keep writing, and well done!

Reviewer: hogwarts8294
Date: 07/24/05 11:19
Chapter: One-shot

This was a great story, but there was one flaw... though it was tiny, and most would've missed it. The flaw was: Ginny got controled by Voldemort in her first year, not her second. It was Harry, Ron, and Hermione's first year. Otherwise, I think the story is great and full of compasion. Keep writing, I want to see how you've grown.

Reviewer: FJDS
Date: 06/27/05 19:54
Chapter: One-shot

Really loved it - read it about 6 times by now.

Reviewer: ConstantVigilance
Date: 06/27/05 17:02
Chapter: One-shot

That was too cute! I loved it. It was really well-written. And I love how you portrayed Fred and George! It was very JK Rowling-ish. Awesome...10/10.

Reviewer: FanficWriterNikki
Date: 06/27/05 15:59
Chapter: One-shot

This was a really good H/G story. Correct me if I'm wrong but wasnt Fred and George's store in Diagon Alley not Hogsmeade (Zonko's is in Hogsmeade). Also I didn't really get the whole 'Gred and Forge' thing.

Reviewer: lovegood
Date: 06/22/05 21:08
Chapter: One-shot

HA....HA HA.........HA HA HA! Forget-me-do chews! So original, so utterly hilarious. That is just a great story idea! I'm so glad someone told me to come read this. I love how at the end when she finally decided to tell him he turned it around on her and did it. Only he had done it more, tee hee. So much a Fred and George thing, and the letter they sent her back was a perfect reaction. Thanks for the great one-shot! 10 =)=)

Reviewer: CraftySlytherin
Date: 06/21/05 22:18
Chapter: One-shot

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was GREAT!!!!!!!!!!! Of course it had to be great, Fred and George were in it (they're the best!!!!). I thought I knew what was going on until Harry confessed to having used the chews too!!!!!!!! What a twist!!!!!!!! Awesome, awesome story, and if I could give you more than a 10 I would definitely do it :)

Reviewer: sniffy
Date: 06/20/05 22:29
Chapter: One-shot

Oops, I forgot. Somewhere near the beginning, you mention Ginny was possessed in her second year, and it was really her first.

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