Hi! I really liked your story. The chapters were well written. The second and third chapters were especially good. In the second I liked the little dialogue between Dumbledore and Hermione, in the third the athmosphere. I could really picture the whole situation: Hermione and Snape (excuse me, Sevie) standing in the kitchen, talking to each other. Good job, if you ever decide to write a sequel, let me know, please! Especially if there are kids of Sevie in it. ^¸^
That was brilliant, sweet..and..well..FUNNY. Sevie! Lol.
I suppose that's the end then, pity...it was an amazing story. Wonderful job.
that was hysterical really it was--is that the end of the story becasue at the end it said TBC
Haha. That's lovely. Their conversation is quite cleverly written... I applaud your personal story at the end, as well. I would have died of embarrassment! Anyway, can't wait for the next part, if there is one?
Hahaha! I love it! When she called him 'Sevie'. I had to cover my eyes because I was scared what he was going to do! Then I just cracked up. Great job! Update soon!
Hey, I love this story as much as you all and was impatiently waiting for the next chapter when I found the story on fanfiction.net. Yea!!! The story is much further along there and that totally made my day (so not a patient person!) Anyway, thought some of you might like to know that!
Loved...loved...loved it! Can't wait for the next chapter.
lolz! this story is so funny! one of the funniest stories ive read about SS/HG
I couldn't stop laughing the whole time I was reading... Sevie! HA!
Oh I knew it was going to slip out! I hate Sevie too. I am on Snape's side. Please continue this story. Im interested in what HG will do.
Sevie... HAHAHAHA!!! Great humour, update soon please!!
OMG! That was so funny... I hope there's more.
This story is hilarious so far. Hope you update soon. :)
This story is hilarious so far. Hope you update soon. :)
Oh my god, that was so funny. But I have to agree with Hermione, she did the right thing. I wonder how she will ever explain it to him.
Bravo! Very well, written; I'll be checking up for your new chapters!