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Name: SnivellusLovegood (Signed) · Date: 01/20/08 16:39 · For: Miss Granger
i loved it :]
it was vair vair funny,
and i remember i used to play that game all the time.

snape having kids is quite a scary thought though...
and especially with hermione.

loved it though,
i was utterly rotflol :]

Name: ilovefirefly (Signed) · Date: 01/20/08 12:34 · For: Hermie
Had me literally LOL! Cute story!!

Name: Marauder13 (Signed) · Date: 01/15/08 14:19 · For: Miss Granger
I like it!

Name: kreacher (Signed) · Date: 01/14/08 11:56 · For: Hermie
i am loving this story, had me in fits of giggles, now trying to imagine snape having kids (which even my imagine can't take), well anyway keep writing

Name: KneazleWeazl (Signed) · Date: 01/14/08 6:03 · For: Hermie
Awesome. I've got tears in my eyes from laughing.

Name: KneazleWeazl (Signed) · Date: 01/14/08 6:00 · For: Hermione
I LOLED! That was amazingly hilarious!

Name: KneazleWeazl (Signed) · Date: 01/14/08 5:57 · For: Miss Granger
MASH! The ultimate game of girlish giggling!

Good start.

Name: annaraine (Signed) · Date: 01/10/08 17:28 · For: Miss Granger
Good work. It is a very well written story, and I could definitely see that happening, (if not with Hermione, then at least with me.)

I did notice one small error, (I tend to be a grammar nazi, my apologies,) although it seems the story's been up for quite a while, so you might not feel the need to change it, but I thought I'd at least let you know.
"She didnít eat too much; too nervous about what was to follow. "

A semicolon should only separate independent clauses-the 2nd clause here is subordinate. Add a "she was" to the beginning of the 2nd clause, or remove the semicolon, if, as I said, you even want to fix it.

Other than that, good story. Thanks for making me giggle.

Name: go go ravenclaw (Signed) · Date: 01/09/08 8:54 · For: Hermie
Update. NOW.

Name: LearningfromLuna (Signed) · Date: 01/08/08 19:24 · For: Hermie
Wow. Good story. I like the way that you drew on personal experience. I can relate to the way you feel. I was called up to present flowers to the head of our school, and as I stood there, I forgot her name! It may have gone all right had I not accidently whispered into the microphone, asking a teacher on stage what her name was. I was slightly afraid that this would end with Snape being madly in love with Hermione, just like with Lily, but you had a good ending that tied it all together.

Name: Hermione Clone (Signed) · Date: 01/04/08 15:14 · For: Hermie
Great Job! I Love the whole concept of this story. It was wonderful!

Name: booklover22 (Signed) · Date: 01/03/08 22:25 · For: Hermie
This is a humorous tale that is beautifully written.

Name: HermioneJPotter (Signed) · Date: 01/03/08 13:40 · For: Hermie
That was awesome. I loved it!

Name: HermioneJPotter (Signed) · Date: 01/03/08 12:26 · For: Hermione
Love this chapter. Good for her. He deserved it. I know I oculd never muster the courage to do that.

Name: HermioneJPotter (Signed) · Date: 01/03/08 12:09 · For: Miss Granger
Awesome first chapter. Loved it. I had to do a similar thing with my old teachers. They refused to respond to me when I called them Ms. or Mr. they always say that since I'm not their student anymore, theres no more need for formal adresses. But yeah, I can't wait to read the next chapters to see how this will turn out.

Name: moonstargazer (Signed) · Date: 01/01/08 21:04 · For: Hermie
That is too cute, Jennifer, the story about you and your professor. At least he did'nt bite your head off like Snape did with Hermione.
Great story and I'll be looking forwasrd to the next chapter!

Name: moonstargazer (Signed) · Date: 01/01/08 20:50 · For: Hermione
I would never have the nerve to do what Hermione did and Snape reacted as usual.
Great story!

Name: moonstargazer (Signed) · Date: 01/01/08 20:18 · For: Miss Granger
Oh this is such a cute story! And I think it's such a nice idea for your college classmates to call their professors by their first names. That's a nice ceremony and I don't know of any colleges here in the US, (don't know if you're in US or another part of the world), that have that ceremony.
Anyway, Hermione seems to be at odds about calling her proffessors by their first names.

Name: pepperimp5 (Signed) · Date: 12/31/07 11:28 · For: Hermie
smooth moves! are you in love with your old german professor? anyway I find it rather hard to imagine 'Mione' and 'Sevie' together. Tell Hermione that I think Snape would have hated being called Snivellus more.

Name: pepperimp5 (Signed) · Date: 12/31/07 10:41 · For: Hermione
That, my friend was the funniest thing I have ever read! "Revolting, I love them!"
Lol litterally!!!

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